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awsm update
swayam ki dadi kitni achi aur kitni understanding hai yr
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Hey sakshi ur this ss is now turning on a masterpiece. Just the best. Chapter 6 was the most beautifully written n song made it more beautiful. The truth revelation, their pain every thing is so perfect. 👏
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Previous Chapter

Presenting the 8th Chapter of the SS. [2nd last chapter]
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Chapter 8

Due to rain and crying ofcourse...Sharon catched cold and cough... thus sleep also took over her...

Swayam turned back and walked in the room where she was sleeping... when he heard her coughing and also shivering due to cold, he observed her wet clothes...he covered her with the blanket but nothing happened... after much thinking he brought the fire burner, by sliding, which was in verandah and kept near her... he went outside...and called the servant... and asked him to come at the place...with a mechanic whenever the rain stops and take Sharon's car home...
He then sat on the swing...

Swayam- Do I really care for Sharon? What is happening??
He clutched his hair in frustration...

"It's just for sometime Swayam"
Swayam shot his head up...it was his doppelganger... on whom a structure similar as "Brain" was hanging...
Brain- Haan yeh sirf abhi ke liye hai...baaki kuch nahi...

"No no doon't listen to him" It was another on whom a "Heart" shape was revolving...
Heart- Swayam...tu sach mein uski care karta hai...

Swayam looked at the one who spoke what he actually did...
Swayam- Mujhe nahi samjh mein aa raha. Sharon se gussa rahu past ke liye ya present accept karun...
Brain- Kuch accept karne ki zarurat nahi hai...wo tujhe chhod kar gayi thi...ab use pay back to karna hi hoga na...
Heart- Swayam par soch,...jab wo teri care karti hai matlab sach mein wo dil se rishta nibha rahi hai...
Brain- Dikhawa hai dikhawa! Jhuti hai Sharon...fir chhod kar chali jayegi!
Heart- Swayam, tu uski aankhon mein dekhna, tujhe sach dikhega jot u saalon se chahta tha...
Swayam-Agar kahin wo fir se dhokaa...
Heart- Yaad kar Swayam... jab tune usse rishta todne ki baat kahne wala tha to wo darr gayi thi...tune hi kaha than a khone se darr...tujhe bhi to darr rehta tha rishto ko khone se kyunki tu unse pyaar karta tha... Swayam Pyaar!
Swayam- To kya Sharon mujhse...
Heart- Ye to tujhe hi janna padega na... Swayam kabhi "us" nazar se dekh to use...
Swayam- Bohot ho gaya janna pehchanna... yahi karta rahun kya!!
Brain- Hahaahahaa...bechara...
Heart- Jo bola wo dhyaan mein rakhh...
Brain- Pyaar mohobbat bekar ki baatein...jhute hai saare wade...!
Heart- Pyaar diwana hota hai mastana hota hai...har khushi se har gham se begaanaa hota hai...!

Swayam heard both of them fighting and that too through SONGS! That was enough... he stopped the swing...and moved into the room...leaving behind the two...
He sat on the couch beside the bed...he saw her... she was sleeping peacefully...
he was so tired that he slept in the sitting position only.
***

It was around 10:30pm... Sharon was sleeping but got up immediately due to the sound of clouds and lightening... The fire also stopped burning, only the moon light covered the room...she stood up and drank water, cool breeze was blowing, her gaze travelled towards the couch where Swayam was sleepingAs she was unknown to this house, the blanket which she was having, she put it on Swayam and just sat beside him on the couch... and was admiring him...
***

It was 1 in morning...(am). Due to coughing sound Swayam's sleep broke...he sensed some weight on himself and clearly opened his eyes...he was covered with a blanket and the next sight was something he never expected...
On his legs(thing) Sharon's head was on them... and she was sleeping silently with hands folded... her steady breaths reflected her relaxed mind... how comfortable she felt when she was close to him... He felt something different after seeing this... it affected him...

Swayam- Sharon yahan...blanket and all...

He thought not to disturb her sleep so held her face from down gently...and with the other picked up the pillow from the bed and kept it where he was sitting! He did slowly so that she doen't get hurt... now she her head was on pillow... he covered her with the blanket...
He was to move when Sharon stopped him by holding his sleeve...he turned to her...
Sharon- Mujhe thunder, lighetening se darr lagta *cough* hai...aap please mat *cough* jaiye...

Swayam too held her hand and squeezed it a bit...
Swayam- Mein yahi hun... tum aaram se so jao..kuch nahi hoga...

She tried getting up..
Swayam- Are..kyun uth rahi ho...tum thik nahi ho...
Sharon- Wo aap bhi to *cough* soyenge na...
Swayam- Umm..okay wait...

He bent down...helped her in getting up... he wrapped his one hand around her shoulder and one held her forearm...
Sharon looked at him...his touch sent her shivers... it was the first time when Swayam was actually helping her as a lover...though he still was in a delimma about his thoughts but Sharon felt lively... his care, concern... she always needed this... the feel she wanted to feel...
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Sharon lay down on bed and Swayam sat beside her...after a minute both went to deep slumber that they woke up at 7am.

Sharon- Swayamm...
Swayam- Haan bolo...
Sharon- Wo dadi ko phone karke ek puch lete ki...
Swayam- Tum baat karo...I'll be back in 2minutes...shayad mechanic aa gaya hai...

Sharon nodded and called Dadi...
Dadi- Hello...
Sharon- Kaise ho aap Dadi??
Dadi- Mein bilkul achhi..tum dono?
Sharon- Thik hai hum bhi...
Dadi- Sardi ho gayi hai...aur bol rahi ho thik hun...
Sharon- Are bas aa hi rahi hun...aap ho na thik karne ke liye...
Both laughs.
Dadi- Swayam ne...
Sharon- Nahi...sab abhi thik hai...
Dadi- Very good... aane do usko batati hun...
Sharon- Nahi nahi Dadi... aap kuch nahi bologi unko...please... aap chahti ho na wo mujhse share kare and sab thik ho jaye...so...
Dadi- Thik hai baba...
Sharon- Hmm...acha bye...milte hai...
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Swayam n Sharon in car... Sharon ON'd the heater...
Swayam did the dame with music player... Swayam didn't paid heed to which song was playing but when the song changed to "Their" song...both looked at each other... Sharon looked at the player then... and before she could change the station he stopped her and nodded a NO.

Swayam- Don't run...Sharon...
Sharon *in mind*- Humara song tabhi pura hoga jab humare beech pyaar hoga...Swayam!

Sharon just kept quiet... she had now held her hands tight into a fist... which didn't go unnoticed by Swayam.
***

They reached the Mansion...
Dadi hugged both of them...
Dadi- Mein to darr hi gayi thi..tum log thik bhi hoge ya nahi...
Sharon- Dekho...hum thik hai...bilkul fine...
Dadi- Acha, kal raat se kuch khaya nahi hoga...chalo kuch khalo...
Swayam- Haan bhuk bohot lagi hai...
Sharon- Hum change karke aate hai...

Both went to the bedroom, She took out the clothes for both... She first went to change and then Swayam.
At dining, they had their meal.

Dadi- Sharon , jao medicines le lo...
Sharon- Are nahi...mujhe nahi khani...
Dadi- Yeh mera order hai...Sharon...
Sharon- Par...
Swayam- Mein deta hun...dadi...
Dadi- Fir to Sharon...mana karegi hi nahi...kyun...
Sharon- Umm.wo...

Dadi giglled making her blush...
***

Days passed... everything was normal between them but yet something was still missing...
Sharon was not okay with whatever was happening, though Swayam was now talking to her..but the love she craved for was still not present...
This made her upset always but infront of Swayam she smiled...
For Swayam... he wanted peace... he was now sure about what he had to do... was waiting for a right time...
He understood Sharon's condition... but they didn't got proper time for a convo...
***

One Evening...7pm...

Sharon was thinking something...
Sharon *thoughts*- Thankyou god...I am happy for the fact that Swayam ab mujhse naraz nahi hai, not even angry... The days passed only I know how difficult it was for me... The feeling I am going through makes me want Swayam! Kabhi Swayam mujhe accept nahi karenge kya? Shayad ab bhi pichli baton se bahar nahi aa paye hai wo...par kya har din ye rishte mein doori bani rahegi? Kya wo bachpan ka saath...fir nahi hoga? Mujhe jawab chahiye...kya jis tarah mein unse pyaar karti hun...kya wo kabhi pyaar karenge? Kya unhone kabhi mujhe pyaar nahi kiya?? Swayamm...

"Not anymore Sharon.." It was Swayam's voice... Sharon's eyes widened..she looked at her right...Swayam entered the room, locked it...
She wiped her tears...

Sharon- Swayam..aap..mein..n
Swayam (softly)- Kuch bolna chahti ho...bolo...
Sharon- Mein sirf apse puch rahi hun, kya Swayam aapne mere pyaar ko nahi pehchana? Kya aap mujhse pyaar nahi karte?
Swayam- Sharon...meine sirf Shine se pyaar kiya tha...aur yeh shaadi,meine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mein kabhi tumhe pyaar kar bhi paunga ya nahi... us nazar se kabhi tumhe dekha hi nahi tha Sharon... aur jab har sach pata chala...tut gaya tha mein...

He held her shoulders... New set of tears formed in Sharon's eyes...
He continued.
Swayam- Nahi samajh aaya ki tumpar gussa karun ki kyun tab chhod kar chali gayi, bharosa bhi tuta ki kya fir tum wapis kabhi chali jao to... Bas yahi tha ki mein phir pyaar karna nahi chahta tha..but kehte hai na... Pyaar kabhi bata kar nahi hota... *tears* unknowingly hare k din mujhe yahi sochne par majbur kiya ki tum mere paas ho... accept karna chaha sirf islie nahi ki tum Shine ho balki isliye bhi kki you are Sharon... the kind of person I craved for... jab tumhari concern dekhi...fir Sharon sach mein tumhe samajhne laga...and I finally developed feelings for you!

Tears trickled down her eyes... he smiled... Sharon without wasting any time held his palms...

Sharon- to kya mein maan lun ki aap mujhse pyaar karte hai?
Swayam- Yes!! But...
Sharon- But kya...Swayam...
Swayam- Kya yeh true love hai I still...
Sharon- Hoga kyun nahi...apko to us hi ladki se pyaar hua hai...jisse apne kabhi sachha pyaar kiya tha!
Aur mein bhi apse bohot pyaar karti hun!
Swayam- Mein bhi...Sharonn...

Swayam took her in his embrace... This was enough for Sharon... she cried... she cried hysterically.!
Sharon- Mein apse door nahi reh saktii...
Swayam- I won't let you go aways this time Sharon..I promise!

He kissed her forhead...he didn't leave her... didn't broke the hug also...he cried with her... and let her cry her heart out!
She also didn't stopped... The love, the pain, the insecurity, the care, the concern, the longingness, the togetherness... She wanted to let go every emotion which she was afraid of and accept the ones she needed...

Swayam- Now bas... Sharon...
Sharon- Hmm...

She held him more tight... he caressed her hairs...and made her face him!

Sharon- I am sorry Swayam... for what I did...
Swayam- Sharon...sorry bolne ki zarurat nahi hai... mujhe samajh aa gaya ki isme kisi ki galti nahi hai... so now stop crying...and celebrate the moment...
She smiled between tears.
These two were so dumb that they let out their feelings but didn't spoke the words which they actually wanted to say!
Was that realized..?

Sharon- So...s.
Swayam- Sharon..I..I want to admit that...
Sharon- Please say na Swayam...I want to hear that line...
Swayam- Which line?
Sharon *blush*- Don't tease me now...okay! I know that you know it...
Swayam *teasingly*- What...? What I know??
Sharon- Umm..I..I don't know...

She blushed and moved out the room...
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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Thank you so much guysss!!!! Means a lot...
About the 2nd last chap of this SS...How was it Bad? Worst? Or much more?? 😲
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Luv,
Sakshi.
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