SwaRon SS- Pyaar Ka Geet...Dilon Ne Phir Gayaa. 16/4 Ch-9Pg38 LastChap - Page 21

res... ur fast girl..

unres

wo girl its a wonderful update...

loved it totally..

the emotion u show is aswom...

wonderful dear..

... sorry 4 being late in unres..

nice.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..

Oye hoye killer..meri baat maan gyi! 🤗
Tune sach me update diya!! 😃

This was a really nyc update..I liked it very much..!!
Next update kab degi? 😲
I hope Sharon swayam thode close aa jaye! ^_^

Nice update sakshi...

Nice update. Hope Swayam forgives Sharon.

superb update... keep it up... 😊

Read both the chapters 6 and 7 together :)

emotional chappy yar... swayam is ignoring shar too much.. hope their misunderstanding got clear soon... update soon thanks 4 d pm

Hey sakshi,

All the updates are really amazing to read..I am resuming from part 3rd..So chapter 3 was amazing to read some new character as dadi,Her character was beautifull written,She is giving some more grip to ur stroy track and trust me,the story is becoming more interesting..In case of emotion,very well penned..

Now next update is such a pleasing update,As swaron are now married couple,SO obviously very interesting track here..I like ur way to shown sharon's concern for swayam..Then ceremony sequence was gud,I enjoyed..Here i felt that ur presentation about different scenario was amazing..Sharon and dadi's convo was sweet..

Now the big twist is here in this update,it was shoking revealation..i just loved it infact whole swaron part was beautifully written..And i really hope to read some more twists ahead as now swaron are becoming closer..Well i must say,u described such a basic stuffs,where two peoples how interect after getting marrried,Both have different way to think..So i felt,its so progressing track..It was emotional update..I loved it..

Now reserved for chap 6,7..Becoz i have to read..


Prateek