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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful sakshi ...👏
but cant see pain in swarons eyes ..😭
jaldi sab kuch teek kar do please ...😒
kamse kam let swayam forgive sharon ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Tujhe jab tak dhamki nhi milti tu update nhi karti h na!!
Abhi no dramebaazi..jaldi se update..nd longer chap..nhi to.I'll turn Into a killer!!

U know I was just loving the chapter and *swooshhh* chapter finish!
Aise thodi hots h killer! 😭
U know na I love this story..nd after this chap..I love it much much more..it was really awesome!!

Tu meri achi waali killer h na?
Apni charger ki ek baat maanegi na?
Say yes..yes..say yes! -_-
I want the chap by tomorrow..!! -_-
Either Whatsapp it to me..or else post it..I don't know anything!! Mujhe bas ye chap chahiye on 12th!!!!!! Samjhi ki nhi?! -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update... keep it up... update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super amazing Sakshi:) The shock was nice!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional and painful chapter. The turn in the story was unexpected but good. Your writing has really improved with time. Now your words are really able to excite the emotions in the reader. Continue the good work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee parts👏
Sharon and Swayam know each other in childhood😳
d song part was painful
waiting for d nxt part eagerly😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thankyou each n every one who liked n commented and appreciated ! 🤗

Sorry today I couldn't reply u all individually! but frm next time i'll surely do!

Next post will be the update!❤️

Love,
Sakshi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Previous Chapter

Presenting the 7th Chapter of the SS.
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Chapter 7

Sharon got up from the floor...actually she slept on the floor only last night...so taking support of the bed's corner stood up.

She knocked the door of Study room but no response came...She moved out in a hurry, and reached the Dining when Dadi called from back...
She turned around...

Dadi- Tum thik to ho na, Sharon?
Sharon- Ha..haan, kyun?
Dadi- Nahi wo tumhare chehre se...
Sharon (making excuse)- Wo abhi face wash nahi kiya na...issliee.
Dadi- Ohh, aur haan beta Swayam office chala gaya hai...
Sharon (shocked but didn't show)- Oh...wo shayad koi meeting thi aaj un..unki..
Dadi- Acha, tum bhi ready ho jao...

Sharon nodded and left...In room, she got ready as soon as possible.
Sharon- Swayam, bina bataye...itna hurt kar diya unko...

She took her stuff and drove to Office.
Dadi- Kuch hua inko, dono alag alag Office nikle... Sharon n Swayam dono shayad bohot roye hain...bhagwan sab thik ho...
***
Days passed, Swayam didn't even paid heed to Sharon...not a word just he lived in himself...but always his mind roam near her... Sharon even tried talking to him but he just ignored her... Dadi also saw the distance and their behavior.

It was evening time when Swayam came in the bedroom for taking his books...Sharon was in washroom, before he could leave the room she came out..

Sharon- Swayam...

No response... she grabbed his hand but he just pulled his hand out and turned to her...
Swayam (rudely)- Kya hai huh?
Sharon- Ek baar meri baat...
Swayam- Kya bolna chahti ho? Kya justification dogi???
Sharon- You just calm down...and aap sab galat samjh rahe hai...
Swayam- Yeah...galat hun...actually kabhi sahi tha hi nahi na? Jab bharosa karna chaha tab nahi kiya! You know what, party mein I heard you and the ladies talk... tabhi meine decide kiya ki I'll tell everything to you! And see I told you everything...and what I got umm..I met Shine...that is you, Sharon..the newly wed SHARON...kya tumne bataya??? Kitne ache se past ko chupa diya!
Sharon- Haan nahi bataya kuch meine...I promised Dadi..ki mein rishte mein happiness, frankness sab I'll try to put..Mom se promise kiya I'll give my 100%..sab bhul ke sirf..Aapp...yes..nahi bhuli thi kabhi SAM ko...but uska effect bhi nahi hone diya..I tried to move on...aur Swayam, agar aap humari baatein nahi sunte to fir to aap bhi nahi batate na kuch? Huh?
She wiped her tears... his fingers turned into a tight fist... he tried controlling his anger...

Sharon- Mujhe bhi nahi pata chalta...na...ki aap...

He came dangeorously close to her...she held her breath in...her back touched the wall...
He grabbed her shoulders which made her wince in pain...

Swayam- Tumhara songs ko pasand nahi karna... raat ko walk...huh! Sharon SAM ko bhulana chahti thi...

She cried...
Sharon- I...It...it's hurting...mm...me...lea...ve...me...
Swayam left her shoulders and marched into study room... she fell on the floor...

***

At the breakfast table,
Dadi and Swayam were sitting...

Dadi- Sharon kahan hai?
Swayam- Shayad so rahi hai...
Dadi- Hmm...Sharon jo ki subah se kitchen mein hai, tumhare liye breakfast, lunch tyaar karne mein lagi hai...and tum kehte ho so rahi hai? Kya ho gaya hai Swayam!!!
Aajkal bina khaye jaa rahe ho office...??

She called out for Sharon... she, after a minute came out holding atray and tiffin...

Sharon- Swayam, ye apka tiffin aur naashta...
Swayam- Office jaake vaise bhi yeh sab thanda ho jayega... so its better mein wahin kuch kha lun..
Dadi- Sway...am...
Swayam- Acha dadi, bye...
He got up after drinking just a glass of water...Tears brimmed in Sharon's eyes...
Sharon- Naash..Swa...
Swayam- Late ho jaunga...bye...

And he went out the house and drove to office... Sharon immediately walked into the kitchen.. Dadi also walked behind her...
Sharon was sobbing...

Dadi (caring)- Sharon...kya hua...mujhe batagi nahi...
Sharon just turned back...she couldn't control herself, so just hugged dadi...Dadi hugged her back..Rubbing her back gently...

Sharon- Swayam...SAM...aur SHINE...aur koi nahi balki...Sharon hai...

Dadi's eyes filled with tears...she pulled her back and cupped her face...
Dadi- Mein samajh gayi thi...jab tumhari baate suni...wo baasuri se judi yaadein...
Sharon- Yeh sab aise bahar aaya hai ki sirf misunderstanding hi reh gayi... Swayam mujhse gussa hai...mujhe Dadi...
Dadi- Shh... rona band karo...chup bilkul...sab thik hoga...

She wiped Sharon's tears...
Sharon- Mein unse sur nahi reh sakti dadi...*tears flowing* wo samajh to jayenge na...
Dadi nodded and hugged Sharon...and caressed her head...
***

The same day...around 8 in night... Sharon was done with her office work...she collected her stuff and reached the door...Watchman came to her...
WM- Madam, mat jayiye...
Sharon- Kyun?
WM- Are tez bearish ho rahi hai..
Sharon- Are mein car mein aayi hun, chali jaungi...
WM- Thik hai Madam, sambhal ke jayiyega...

She reached the gate...
Sharon- Ohho...bearish to seriously...! But jana to hai hi...
She ran and finally was in the car...
She started driving...but due to traffic...she had to face the mess and stop the car every now n then...

Sharon- Oh god! Late ho jayega...should I turn to the next way? Uff...
Suddenly some thing struck her mind, she called Dadi... Dadi received the call...

Sharon- Dadi...aap thik ho? Aur Swayam aaye kya?
Dadi- Haan mein thik hun...Swayam nahi aaya abhi tak...tum thik ho?
The traffic little bit got cleared...
Sharon- Dadi, ek second hold karo...
She tried to move the car a bit...but guess what!!
Sharon- Oh shit! Car achanak se band...ab???
She tried two-three times but failed...
Sharon (call)- Dadi, meri car band pad gayi hai..
Dadi- Are! Kahan ho tum?
Sharon- Dadi...mein wo PC Jewellers ke shop ke paas hun...
Dadi- Acha mein Swayam se baat karti hun...thik hai...rakhti hun...
She cut the call and dailled Swayam's no. and told the scenario...

Meanwhile Sharon here,
Sharon- Swayam! Wo khud bhi pareshan honge...

She tried many times...Thanks to gid that she was at the extreme left...so the others went from the side...except one or two...
Sharon- Kuch log bewakuf hote hai... samjh nahi aata kya...gadi kharab hai tabhi nahi jaa rahi hun...
In frustration she came out of the car and shouted on the one behind her...
Sharon- Oh hello ! Are you blind? Back light is ON...and is blinking! so can't you go ahead from right? Is It necessary for me to shout on you people that my car broke down! Dumb!
Man- Sorry ji...
Sharon- Wohoa! Sorry! Just because of your dumbness... I ma here in the rain...all wet..! Arghh!
She left that place and sat in the car...
***

Swayam- Sharon...hope she is fine...
He was in mid way only so reached the place in 10min only... He looked at the car standing... Due to traffic, he couldn't cross the road in car so he had to come out...

Swayam ran to the other side where her car was there... he peeped inside the car... he found her coughing... he just opened the door... Sharon looked at him and then came out...

Sharon- Aap thik *cough* ho??
Swayam- Yeah...you don't worry..let's go...saamne hai car...
Sharon nodded...

She took a little ahead.. as both had to cross the road... Swayam saw a bike coming towards her...
Sharon- Swayam!!!!
He immediately pulled her towards him and she banged on his chest... She held his shirt tight...with both of her hands... his hands around her waist and one holding her hand...

Swayam saw her... she was staring at him... both shared an eye lock... Swayam could easily differentiate between the rain drops and her tears!
A thunder broke their contact... Sharon closed her eyes in fear... he after a second left her waist... but for Sharon he kept holding her hand and her grip was also tight... they finally crossed the road...they were fully drenched due to heavy rainfall... Swayam received Dadi's call...he told her that they were safe. Dadi advised them to stay at the hearby house (which was of Shekhawat's only) as it was raining heavily...he agreed.

As it was just at walking distance and the car (in which Swayam came) was parked in a safe place... but couldn't take out in the rush... so they walked till the place...and reached in 2 minutes.

In the room...
Sharon- Aap please..rest *cough* kar lijiye...
Swayam- Mein thik hun...
He ON the burner and just sat near the fire place in the roofed verandah...
Sharon lay down on the bed, she was tired... and also was feeling guilty, bad, just was thinking about the moments when Swayam kind of saved her when they were kids.

FLASHBACK
We both were playing in the park... Swayam was chasing me... I ran as fast as I could but lost my way... I shouted for him but no response... Just behind me was a large fountain... He became very tensed for me... I could hear his voice which was calling me... but Iwas unable to guess from where it came... as I was hell scared... the moment I got a shock when some random boys sprinkled water on me... I shouted "What the hell...how dare you huh?" I held collar of one of them...and pushed him into the fountain...the rest ran back! I wanted to teach them a lesson... "Help! Help!" I screamed. 2-3 ladies and the park's watchman arrived soon... I handled that boy to them...and there I saw Sam coming...his face expression showed how tensed he was fir me... He dragged me out of that crowd...and took me to a corner...
"Shine...tum thik ho?" He said cupping my face...
"Are haan... I am perfect...chalo Sam hum swing par baith jate hai" I smiled...
"Are nahi... tum ghar jao...change your dress" He was concerned...
"Sam...tum itna kyun tension le rahe ho? Jaa rahi hun na.." Confusingly I replied...
"Shine...wo mein.." He was hesitating...
"Bolo na.." I pouted.
"Har Sur, Har Alaap Ko Mila Saaz
Dil Ki Tarang Bani Tumhari Awaaz
Ek Anoke Saath Ka Hua Ehsaas
Zindagi Mein "Roshni" Ka Hua Agaaz" He spoke...
I was amazed...
"Bani Adhuri Taan Bhi Ek Dhun Pyaari
Gunjne Lagi Vo Sargamein Bhi Saari
Baansuri Ka Gungunana Rahega Jaari
Pohochegi Jab Tak Usme Awaaz Tumhari" I also replied...
He felt content after hearing this...
"I want to say that...I Like you Shine..." He looked lovingly at me...

I was stunned, my reaction was...I held his hand and immediately crashed myself by hugging him...
He hugged me back just after a second...

"Rahega Jab Tak Duniya Mein Sangeet Zinda
Nahi Honge "SAM" Aur "SHINE" Kabhi Juda" Saying this...I left...
I blushed and ran back... he jumped in joy...!
FLASHBACK ENDS

Sharon- But for both of us...that meet was the last... who knew I'll leave him just the next day... I wasn't sure about my true feelings for him...so I didn't confessed... but yeah I liked spending time with him...I liked him...I too realized later!
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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thankyou so much!
About the 3rd last chap of this SS...How was it Bad? Worst? Or much more?? 😲
Do tell in your comments...[big plz :D] They are encouraging!😃
Eagerly waiting for them [Likes n comments/criticism ]!😊
Sorry for any grammatical mistake.😛

PM Account: -SwaRonWorksPm-
PS- Length of the chapters will be around the same as above.
Luv,
Sakshi.

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good update..
I m loving this SS :)
Thanks for the PM :)

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