ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

i can relate with khushi here a little...it's really heartbreaking when people you care for think they are not worthy of us... :(

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Asom at first am confuse that its ipk plot but its totaly diferent amazing work

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Awesome ...beautifully portrayed Arnav's insecurities about their status difference...beautiful story...

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Hawww...Saiyyu ...tumne mereko ullu banaya...

I really thought this was our very own IPK track of hate marriage...

Main buddhu hoon na...😳

I loved this part too much...

I so wish this was an SS...i would have loved to read an elaborated second part...

Each and everything about Arnav and Khushi , made me love them more and more...

I loved the role reversals you gave them...

Khushi being rich and pampered and Arnav working to meet his daily expenses...

Arnav's love for Khushi was so adorable...His selflessness for her, his uncontrollable attraction for her , his unavoidable circumstances and his struggle for keeping her happy...

i loved everything...

I loved loved Khushi here...

It is not easy to live in a middle class family and compromise on your luxuries, but Khushi did it...

I felt bad when her love was not returned by this buddhu Arnav...But all is well that ends well..

Oh...I loved Shashi here..here he was a man of great judge about an individual's character...

Aap nahi hote Shashiji toh humare Arhi ka kya hota...

Buaji and her love for Nandkishore...😆

I so loved the end..

Their misunderstnadings cleared, their love emerging triumphant and finally their start of married life...

I want to read more Saiyyu...😭

But alas !!! Jab tak tum nahi chahogi woh nahi hoga...

Love you..

Take care...

Edited by Swati_ - 11 years ago

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Maleina34

@Maleina34

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

That was so beautiful, so well written. I love this Kushi strong and bold enough to fight for her love.

Two thumbs up

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Sayiuuu...*hugs*
awesome awesome TS...
Shukkar hai k when I found it,,It was already complete...
My typical imagination thought it to be basd on show...
So i was pleasently surprised to see the second part...Loveddd it...
Alternate Universe,...hidden love based Arranged marriage...very good...It was good to read a middle class Arnav...U knw rich Arnav or business tycoon is too mainstream...*wink*
I just loved the way their flashbakcs were mingled with Khushi's confrontation to Arnav...her confession was too good,,full of assurance but Arnav's mind was clouded with his complexes..My heart went out to Arnav when He went to Khushi's home to have her signatures with intention of knowing about her well being..instead he got hurt by hearing about proposal from Nandkishore...My most favr8 part was last part...*ahemm ahemmm*
awesome TS Sayyiu...
Wese U can write any time,,we are not going to complain n we'll always welcome u with open arms...
P.S I love alternate universe stories...So write once in a while or once in a month...*grins*

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funwe23

@funwe23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

beautiful, thoroughly enjoyed it. miss reading your stories.

loved khushi's character and arnva's insecurities. ⭐️

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Wow that's an awesome Two-shot I must say...so well written. This is the first work of yours that 'm reading and I really loved your writing style.Reading the first part, to be honest, I was also on the same boat thinking it to be based on show.But something from the mid made me think the either way.😃

And the second update really took me by surprise.The way you have molded it into an entirely different concept made me read it with awe. 👍🏼

I really really loved the Two-Shot.Will be waiting for read other works of yours.I mean new works.😉

Thanks for such a beautiful TS. ❤️

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

this TS was just fantastic!.
at first I thought its inspired from the show and Arnav MUed khushi n all!
but I was literally shocked when I started reading the 2nd part!
your writing style absolutely amazing saiyu!
loved this :)