ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed) - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh how sneaky, seriously it was really awesome. I actually re-read chapter one to see if I missed something but no, you kept the mystery intact well !! Please don't make this your last writing, :-/
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲😲😲
OMG yeh kya tha?? U completely fooled me.
U know i actually went back and read the 1st part once again 😆

Ekdum bahut hi bada twist ho gaya yeh toh. Loved this khushi...she is the hero of this story. Her belief and her convictions at the end of day even made Arnav rise above his insecurities.

Loved this shantivan's khushi and Arnav of such humble roots. 😊
A very different story indeed!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome

Completely a different touch
Just loved it ❤️

Keep writing
Stay blessed

Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read the two chapters in one go. Superb and brilliant update. The twist was brilliant.. Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi. It was sweet. And the flashbacks and the questions khushi asked and Arnav's answers to it. All was written very well. It was brilliant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story di
A very cute love story
Khushi's love and Arnav's hesitation and rudeness at first for Khushi's welfare everything was so good
And their convo is so emotional and sweet too
At last our ArHI got to live a happy life
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Posted: 11 years ago

"The Arnav which was bound to the earth as a tireless ocean had no business wanting the Khushi that made the stars twinkle with happiness in the night sky." That was one of the most beautiful lines I have ever read. It captured the entire story in that sentence.

That was quite a surprise though! Never in a million years, had I expected the roles to be reversed, where Khushi was affluent and Arnav, surviving on a pay check- to pay check basis. But you've portrayed the characters beautifully Arnav, is an honest man, and the only bread winner of the family. He was offered the world, and just took Khushi's hands and walked out. Although he used is sister's marriage as an excuse, but his love for Khushi was hidden in that 'acceptance' of his hand in marriage.

Khushi is a strong and an independent girl. Despite her growing up in such an affluent family, she still managed to be grounded. She went from a mansion to a mere one bedroom apartment, but not once did she complain about it. She still managed to keep her smile and love her husband. She certainly saved this relationship from going kaput. Had it not been for her determination to get Arnav talking, they would have missed such an opportunity to actually know each other well, and show how much they loved each other.

But you know, I was actually waiting to see the remnants of the night that they finally became one. I wanted to see how they would take the relationship forward. ;) Dirty thoughts. Dirty thoughts.

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Posted: 11 years ago
You had got me there. I thought this was a story based on 6 months track. Never mind. 😆

But what I liked about your story was, you kind of interchanged Arnav and Khushi's character. I like strong, determined Khushi and we got that. Which was lovely, considering how she went on her own to question her husband. Shashi was a selfish father, another out of character thing. I liked the concept and the story very much.


Great story, Rasgulla! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww, this was just AWESOME! ❤️ i am kinda stunned with the way u crafted the story and how it was so cleverly disguised. i really thought it was a variation of the hate marriage track from the show so i was super surprised and absolutely delighted with the way u turned it upside down on its head! lovely story-telling, wonderful scenario and very nicely played - it more than lived up to expectations ⭐️

loved the beautiful, soul baring conversation between arnav and khushi, and despite the role reversal their characters were pretty intact and really had their essence. i actually love os's on the actual show a lot, mostly because that's the couple i fell in love with, but even then a lot of times it doesn't quite feel like 'them'. but u just get them, u managed to make it feel like arhi exactly while presenting something so different! 😛

khushi was her sweet, straightforward, loving self and arnav, aah, layers and layers of complications and insecurities all hiding a whole ton of tenderness and love ❤️ seriously i just love the way u write, and am so happy that we get something from u whenever u have the urge (or r emotionally blackmailed 😆) to pen something down 😃 hoping for more when one of ur friends next pins u down or sp announce ek aur baar ebp 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited my comment on page 30:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was beautiful! thank you!

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