ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Wow! that indeed was a surprise! When I read the second part, I was like what? I mean, I didnt get a continuity hence went back, checked the first part, refreshed my memory...well this is a nice difference and lovely story...Arnav...it's hard to find a person like him these days...Anyways Saiyu, you kept the suspense till the end in a wonderful way...I couldn't even guess why he was so edgy with Khushi...

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Arnav-Khushi never fail to amaze one; whatever their avatar, whatever their context! They will 'hamesha' enthrall us with their passion and chemistry!

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Really nicely written!

I was very curious how the story will unfold and it was very unique!

Great job!

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Natalia

@Natalia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

I am so glad that this ISN'T Based on the show! I can't read that at all nowadays!!

Ba. Ba . BOOM!! The first line of Part 2 was mind blowing! Loved the way you wrote the story.

Arnav's reminiscence..

Khushi reciting her feelings regarding those times..

The hidden question!!

Splendid and thoroughly refreshing!

It is an absolute joy reading your work! My love, we love it when you pop in!

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

You got me completely! This was so not what I was expecting. You, brilliant you! Loved this to bits :)

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

I hv read it now :-D

there are certain things i like abt ths :-D ... Liked the way yu carried their present cnvo n memory flashbacks ...
Story was good ...khushi s words about being dejected again n again touched my heart ..nice story ..

Lol yar whn i read yur note in the end only thn i came to kno k last update mai koi suspense bhi tha ? :-P .. Lol .. I nvr realized tht there was anythng mysterious abt arhi ...n .. I also thought k show ki storyline follow k ...

Aur i liked that ..thy were deliciously close
p.s i wnt unres my last res :-P

P.p.s there z smthng i found 😳 but how to tell yu ...

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Very good...At last love win...but in these kind of situations where will all that money go...if your son- in- law won't agree to take it

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

The role reversal was a great idea.

Really enjoyed reading this piece as the execution of the story was very nice. You developed the story line and characters beautifully.

Loved this new story telling style.

Though i found the ending a bit too abrupt and rushed but it was a beautiful story and i truly loved reading it.

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

THIS WHY I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE😉 SEE NO-ONE CAN WRITE LIKE THIS!

First when I was reading this, my reaction was 🤣 no don't get me wrong, it was not that because it was a funny or hilarious chapter but seeing Khushi in Arnav's place and Arnav in Khushi was just awesome. I never thought that this story will be like this so for that a very big 👏

I loved it, very bit of it.

Please do write more and sorry for the late reading

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Loved it!!

Perceptions. You couldn't have named it better.

In the first chapter when Khushi was counting money, I thought that she does not want to take Arnav's money and is managing on her meager Dabba earnings. When Arnav thinks that she is wearing a saree from her maayka, I thought a simple cheap saree is what she is wearing. When she said empty marriage, I was like this is the story about their forced marriage.

And how perceptions changed with second chapter.

I blinked a few times, as I am sure many other readers must have too. It was too good. Everything was so different from what you made us perceive in the first chapter. This is called back with a bang.

Welcome back :)

Edited by Anony_mous - 11 years ago