ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

awww its lovely...beautifully written...must say khushi first step ...we need to talk...broke all the barriers ...loved the way she only demand love...on the other hand arnav though in love with her but his intentions to let her free for better...its painful...beautifully perceived ...superbly written and conceptualised...specially khushi words like y then and y now :)...awesome dear,loved it..

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tintin_ruble

@tintin_ruble

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

I dont know what to write but this is one beautifully written Two Shot I have ever read

You write so well and the emotions are so properly depicted.

Kep writing dear and I am waiting for your future works desperately

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

I am still into arhi...loved this ts.
Have heard a lot about 'finding solace' but cant read it i am late,its removed.*sighs*

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

read both parts in one go...what a u turn in the story in the second half from what I perceived...totally unexpected...loved. it

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-UnknownSoul-

@-UnknownSoul-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

woo..

that was a complete uturn 😆

it was amazing 😃

loved the concept 😃

very different and very good

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

So unexpected!!!!!

Reading the first part nobody could have guessed this background about Arnav khushi. Well I always liked it the other way around with Arnav BIENG the rich arrogant tycoon n khushi the beautiful , hardworking middle class simple girl . Though this one wasn't bad either .

Loved how wonderfully you have written mixing their past with their present conversations n loved khushis questionnaire to Arnav .

A different n a strong khushi liked how she tackled the mess of her life...especially liked her dialogues to rid Arnav out from his guilt...Brilliant

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Oh my, you fooled me dearly, I'm one of those loosers who thought this is based on the show ! 😕

But it was a total surprise and I'm now really shocked at Khushi's behavior. I agree she loved Arnav but she doesn't have to take that kind of a treatment from Arnav. She is filthy rich, Harward educated, may be she will inherit the business from her father then why that kind of a submission to him?

I dont understand why she needed to ask his permission to go to work? 😲 Sorry, I'm a feminist 😃

Anyways zatka laga and you managed it well 👏

And I'm glad, in the end, both confessed their love ⭐️

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Kya soocha tha first chapter padne ke baad...aur kya nikla...I swear, after reading the second chapter...I reread the first one to clear my doubts...that was totally unexpected...you always surprise us with your twists and turns in the stories...yeh toh bilkul ulta ho gaya...Arnav from Lucknow and Khushi from Harvard Uni...he loved her so much but holding back...totally different perception in our ARSHI's stories...love the fact that Khushi did not accept any more pain in their marriage...and initiated to speak out her heart...love the end...how I wish you would write often...missing your stories...beautiful two shot...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Woaah... 😲 Itna sab kuch ho gaya tha.. Still I feel Arnav acted like a jerk. I know, a jerk.. He decided what Khushi wants hereby not paying heed to what he actually felt.. But then Khushi, the samajhdhaar decided to talk and end it for once and for all.. And new revelations.. Both of them love each other so much, yet Arnav kept it bottled up within himself and Khushi cudnt coz of his cold behavior.. 😔 I loved it a lot.. I always love your writing, don't I?

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Wow what an unexpected twist Saiyu. Maan Gaye aapko, aapko mera salaam, mohatirma 👏

To say I loved it would be an understatement, the twist was completely new 😊

A super rich Khushi & middle-class Arnav was a fabulous surprise. I loved Arnav's khudgarzi, but Khushi's love for him was equally nice. Tum seh paaogi line was really cute 😊

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago