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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: jas0308
thank you for your beautiful comment yaar!!
It means a lot to me😳

glad you liked it

will update soon pakka🤗

Oh, I'l be waiting, buddy!! 😊And coming to the compliment, you worth it!! 😃 🤗

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ChamakChalloO
Wow very nice story really loved it nice work continue and write more loved it pm me next time for sure loved it so so much 🤗

thanks aliza for your comment..

gald you liked it😃

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

I want the update NOW!! 😡

Main v hu yahan 😈

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu

I want the update NOW!! 😡

😈

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

Oh, I'l be waiting, buddy!! 😊And coming to the compliment, you worth it!! 😃 🤗

thank you so much☺️

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: .MistyMornings.
Wow is this your first? :O It's fab, Jas! I think your should write more ;) And yeah, PM me the next part pileej! 😆😉

hehe.. yup.. It is my first milsha😳😳

write more😲😲 will think about it.. 😕

sure will pm you😃

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Viji79
This was indeed a surprise Jas !!

Aaaw!! Thanks for the dedication jassi. You know I love you !! 🤗

The story has a great start !! It is very difficult to tell a story about kids and you have done it with ease. 👏

The friendship between the Raizadas and the Guptas is very endearing. It was also a sweet thought that Arnav was attached to Garima and Khushi to Ratna. I did not have a good feeling when the kids promised never to leave each other to each others mothers.

That they continued to fight even after years is very logical.

The next update is going to be very sad I guess. I am bracing myself for it.

A very beautifully written story for a first attempt. 👏👏👏

I love you too di🤗

thanks for your wonderful comment... I am really happy that you like it.. a writer like you praising my first piece is something😆😆😳

some part can be sad.. but I ensure.. it isn't sad much😃😃

thanks di

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Skiran
Res 🥳
UnRes

Chota Arnav with jaw clenched and fists tightened..awesome 😊 'what the' bhi bolta 😆

Loved Ratna - Khushi relationship(reminded me of LI 😃) , the sweet bond they share ❤️
Garima and Arnav's bond is amazing, with her making little Arnav understand that ArHi need to take care of each other..too good 👏

Wow! Amit,Ratna, Shashi, Garima were friends at college. The families share mutual love for their kids which is shown aptly. I adored the atmosphere of both the families with their naughty kids and their petty fights

But the phone call is making me apprehensive 😔

Waiting the next part already..😊

Congratulations Jas for your first story on IF and it is a superb start..loved it 👏 ⭐️ 🤗

kiran di🤗

I was waiting for you to come.. so sorry that I posted before you😭

but glad you liked it!!

will update soon

thanks di

PS: not only in IF.. this is my first time ever, 😳😳

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf
Main v hu yahan 😈

toh mai kya karu😛😛

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Aaliya Sobti

@Aalu_Malu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: jas0308

mai darr gayi😆

itni saari dhamkiya... gundi kahi ki and btw.. it was long.. very long😃 more than 4100 words

thanks for awesome comment taar😳

glad you liked it...