Arshi TS- Hand In Hand *COMPLETED*

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*hello.. Hello.. Mike testing 1.. 2.. 1.. 2*
Finally! Ab main bolun?😉

sacchi the proud moment when you see someone you care for achieve something big. Its etheral, maybe even better then what i felt posting TW!🤗 a big jhappi to you meri behen!*muahh*


coming to the update:
i've read it numerous times by now, but i still remember, it left me speechless when i first read it. Tune itna acche likha hai! Really! Their fights are so genuine, i remember many tit-for-tat kisse i had when i was a kid. Although no one dared call me chuhiya😆. I'm sure these fights that kid had are a lot inspired by what you had with you're frnds. Tu bhi to shaitan hai.;)

both equally adorable, flammable and challenging, none ready to back down and in hthis heated situation i was surprised when Khushi took the blame on herself! It amazed me, the kind of protective thought she had even as a kid. Ye to pehle din se, Rab ne bana di jodi the ;)

their parents though expected them to be friends, like them, but they went a step ahead 😛.

I absolutely adored the love and care the two families share with each other and with the kids, bringing almost aansu in my eyes. :D but sacchi its so very sweet and real, that i had this smile on my face while reading it, but at the end, it changed to a frown!.
Hmm.. HHBB the bad newjwa ijj here, bhat will happen to Arshi i fear! *i Know but* ;)


P.S: All the best for this and for everything you write ahead.

P.P.S: Hum tumhare saath hain.. Hamesha! *ILYD*

😃 First of all very big 👏 to you my chellam. I didn't know that you could write like this.

Dee aiii

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Sorry sorry, very sorry for editing so late

Secondlly, congratulations on your first story😃
Thirdly, thanks for dedicating it to me😳

Now to the TS...

I loved the way you have written their playfullness. Childhood is the age of innocence, and they tend to do certain mischiefs which may not be liked by their parents. Same happened here too.
Although I felt shashi shouldn't have slapped her, as clearly it was arnav's mistake, I loved ratna's reasoning to khushi.
Even now when they are teens, they fight, pull each others hairs but that is restricted to themselves. They don't like anyone else doing it😃

I think I can predict what's happening next😭

Damn u

Tu mera wait nai kar sakti thi 😭

Chod mjhe pasand aya infct bht pasand aya 😳

Hayeee chuhiya nd laad governor was 👏

I loved d bond u shown u jaas ❤️

Both family loves each other infct khushi arnav to loves each other ..

Haq .. How easily dey say it . Dat dey can only trouble scold nd shout at each other no one else ..I m proud of u jaas

I loced d prank goshh it was hilarious..

Bt dnt say in d next part d parent r dead 😕

Update soonish re 😳

Haaw page 2




I love the fact that there were so many emotions here...funny, sweet, sad and endearing . Their relationship cocooned by the love and security of their parents giving them the freedom and luxury to enjoy their carefree life...but something tells me it's going to change drastically...

😲 😃 👏

RES!