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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
awesome update
hahahah rey tho taani ke khane ke pichehe padgaya
TR talk is super
taani is so stabborn
omg rey leaves from there
now what
pls confession TR soon
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Oh shit.. ab kya hoga. In dono ko itna gussa kyon aata hain. Kabhi to thade dimaag se baat kar sakte hain.
Ab kya hoga. Yeh Rey to abhi gussa karke chala bhi gaya. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
rey tried so much of it and she just went on it ignore and they fought up and he left without say much... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
OMG how can Rey just leave like that?????? The Taarey conversation did take an ugly turn but then Rey again left her?????😭

I hope he will be back...i hope the gang will be right there to bring him back to where he belongs 😳

Lovely update as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nice update
loved taarey convo
both were correct in their position
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Amazing update :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
nice and emotioanl taarey
talk
cant decide now whose fault
taani or rey
but cant see them like this

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
wow this awesome read all the parts n the story is just awesome... pls update soon n pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

hi thanks for the replies/likes etc., etc.,
ive struggled to write this part- idk why so anyone replying please can you let me know (honestly) how it was ...thanks in advance😊

Part 17

Outside taanis apartment

Rey standing in front of the closed door, taani came up , climbing the steps , two mobiles in one hand and stopped seeing rey in front of the door- she opened her mouth but no word came out , her face showed relief at seeing him.

She held out his mobile ," mobile rehgaya tha"

He shook his head and replied ," tum reh gayi thi"

She walked to him fast and putting her arms around his neck hugged him tight, tears in her eyes. God he had missed her so much. After a few seconds , she pulled herself a slightly back and asked , tears in her eyes

"aap itna gussa karoge tho main kya karoongi rey?"

"tum itna stubborn bonogi tho mera kya hoga taani?" he dropped his' bag on the floor and was about to hug her back when she pulled out suddenly self-conscious , he held her hands instead

"itni raat ko koi aisa jaatha hain kya? Aur wo bhi itni bad frame of mind main drive karne ki kya zaroorat thi? " taani in her scolding tone and looking up," thanks you krishnaji"she muttered

"tumhe farak padtha hain?" he lifted his eyebrows as his face changed from the comfort of her sudden hug to disappointment of her pulling back from the hug

" fight sab alag baat hain rey par aise aap gusse mein..." wiping the tears off her face.

"excuse us please" group of some guys and girls at the stairs staring at them. She looked at them,realised they were in the middle of the corridor, blushed and moved aside , the gang went to the next floor

" ab andher chaliye"

"no, first tum clear karo ki abh is hug ka matlab kya tha"

"rey, pehle andher chalo"

he shook his head,"jab se aaya hoon tabse why did u come here hi sunnne ko mila hain, so im not coming inside again"

"rey! Gusse ke saath saath ab itna stubborn bhi mat bano, yeh corridor hain..."

"haan aur ab tum yeh bhi kahogi ki maine tumhaara mazak banaya tumhaare corridor main" he replied while her patience was wearing out, "and honestly , gussa aur zidd dono tum kar rahin thi. Apni face dekho abhi, jo dil mein hain usse hide karneka koi reason nahin hota"

" see isiliye maine kahaan tha - aapko meri har baat se problem hain , tho..."

"mujhe tumhaari ek hi baat se problem hain- aur wo yeh hain ki tum mere saath nahin ho" he said loudly cutting her mid sentence just as a few of the gang of ppl who had gone up walked down. They heard his words and with grin on their faces looked at taani making her feel uncomfortable again.

Taani moved back uncertainly and bent to pick his bag, he beat her to it and picked it up," so is hug ka matlab kya tha?"

"mujhe darr laga ki kuch...aap gusse mein drive karrahen the ...aur mobile bhi yahin tha..tho.." she fidgeted with her hands and didnt meet his eyes. he didnt reply. After a moment of silence," rey please aisa kabhi mat karna, main handle nahin kar paaoongi..." and her eyes filled up. He moved to her and pulled her towards himslef , she didnt resist, placed her hands on his chest and holding his shirt tight burst out crying. He put his arms around her back pulling her closer into the hug.

" its okay sweetheart, im fine. main itna bhi stupid nahin hoon"he spoke softly stroking her back comfortingly for a while , she controlled her crying and moved back but he didnt let her leave his arms. She took her hands off his chest and placed them on his shoulder as she struggled to release herself from his arms. he just held her tight around the waist and looked at her almost as if saying- move away if you can.

The gang came up with boxes of pizza s and saw the two again, "so sweet " one of the girls gushed on and looking back went up as rey smiled at the group and without leaving her moved to a side.she looked at him uneasily and said appealingly," rey please lets go inside"

Not liking the pleading tone of her voice, rey released her , picked his bag and followed her into the house as she opened the door.

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Edited by prtn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Awww... this emotional conversation between Taarey seriously touched my heart... it was soo... sooo natural...beautifully written and was very soothing.

The amount with which Taani loves Rey was so clearly visible from the convo and our Romeo Rey was reluctant to get the answer out from her

Hehehe a group of people interrupting them was so adorable 😆

Waiting eager;y for the next update

Loved it as always

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