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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: rkbala

awessmm updates..read 2 , 3 nd 4 th part in one go...

plzz plz continue asap...
nd btw..does randhir's knows ki sanyu's mom died...???????????????



yeps.. he heard everything she shouted..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

WHAT...sanyu mom is no more this is really bad news

her mom was only reason for her life and the only support but now nothing is left thats why she want to kill herself

thank god randhir save her on correct time

i can understand the closeness of sandhir...its just a need not a lust

i love both update



exactly you got it right ! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
hey!
awesome & emotional update's dr,
please do continue soon, eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow I love ur both part full of emotions. hope sandhir will get to know more each other and understand as they are getting bonding with emotionally
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
loved this story dear😉
update next soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Update soon
Update soon
Update soon
Update soon
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nice going... Waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
sorry guys school keeping me busy 😭
will definitely update it tomorrow pkka promise 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Sanyukta slept resting her head over him.

Next morning

"sanyukta.. sanyukta get up we're getting late"

"5 min randhir.."

"randhir ? sanyukta have you lost it ?"

Sanyukta at once jumped from her bed.

"kaustuki randhir kha h ? or tum kab aayi ?"

"randhir yha kha se aaega.. it's girls hostel.. I came today 3 in the morning. And sanyukta you again left the window open yester night you rember huh ? n I think some tried to get in as window flaps were moving when I entered. Vo to acha hua me agyi."

sanyukta at once make it all up

"sanyukta you get ready in 30 mins hume vardhan sir ne bulaya hai. Sb dream team members ko. Get ready fast. Here wear this"

they all reached vardhan's cabin. Sanyukta couldn't see randhir anywhere. She was worried . wait a win worried ! for him.. yeah !

"may I come in sir"

Sanyukta recognized the voice n turned to face him. His eyes swelled up just like hers.. has he been crying all night ?

"well it's good you all reached on time. Esp you sanyukta you didn't disappoint me this time. Well now stand with your partners at once."

Everyone stood beside their partner.

Jiggy-kaustuki

Vidushi-sahil

Sanyukta - randhir .

"so guys as announced earlier only two out of you can be in my dream team. Or I should say only 1 team from these 3"

All seemed confused except randhir.

"means the team I've decided. One of them will be representing my dream team"

"and the most interesting part is everyone have to complete their task individually though you'll be standing next to you r team member, each one of you have to minimize it's electricity usage by 30%" he said pointing towards a device.

" if any member of the team failed to do so then the entire team will we disqualified. Is that clear ?"

Everyone was looking at each other terrified except sandhir.

"start your work right now you have 3 hours only to complete this task. Good luck"

Everyone stood beside their table with their team member n device.

Randhir glanced a look at sanyukta. She looked happy today . "maybe she has forgotten what happened last night " he thought.

"tme pta hai kaustuki meri mummy ne mje nayi dress di hai. Me tme dikhaunga"

Sanyukta heard jiggi saying this and she recalled everything she went through yester night . she looked at randhir who already was looking at her . she lowered her gaze after few secs.

Randhir realized and tries to divert her mind.

"umm. Randhir vo screwdriver dena.."

" kyu ? wanna fix the fallen nuts of your bheja hmmm ?" he said mockingly handing her screwdriver

sanyukta at once forget everything and came back to her previous self.

" no.. but I think you need to tighten your loosen screws!" she said snatching the screwdriver from his hands

"aye listen phataphat apna kaam finish kro varna phir doob jaogi n sath me mje bhi le doobogi"

Snayukta gave a disparaged look to him. Though he was behoving her to complete her task.

"lets see mcp"

Randhir smiled thinking " finally my sanyu is back.. he corrected his words in his mind.. m..ms sanyu.. not mine oh gosh !"

They started working.

Randhir was almost done with his device he had raised it's efficiency to 50%.

"1st again.." he said leaning towards sanyukta.

Snayu was fully frayed by his word

Withing 30 mins she too was done with the device.

And gave a victorious smile to him..

He replied with still a loser smile.


cont...


Sorry guys wrote it in a hurry .

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Edited by lil_juli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Nice one...so sanu is normal but again she lost in her mom memory but glad that randhir successfully make her out of this...


But dear this so small...

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