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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4 :

Suddenly she felt she wasn't floating in the air. Someone was holding her hand firmly.

It was randhir. Who listened to each and everything she shouted at terrace as he himself was on terrace before she came. Just opposite to the pole where sanyu was. And the coincidence was he was too crying !

*he pulled sanyu towards him*

"pagal ho kya tum" " kay kar rhi thi haan ?"

"ran..randhi.."

*she fainted in his arms*

"sanyukta.. snayukta.." he said patting her face and then he lift her in his arms towards her room.

Sanyukta was finaaly back to her senses.

"pagal ho gayi thi kya tum. You were to jump"

"tumhari problem kya hai .. me jo bhi karu usse tumhe kya problem hai. Har cheez me pareshaan karte ho.. what's your problem" sanyu shouted at randhir holding his collar

Randhir was very angry at that moment.

"why don't you leave me alone haan.." she said angrily yet crying pulling his collar towards her"

"why.." she burst into cries. "why.. don't leave me alone.. don't.. leave me alone randhir.. don't" she said in broken voice sinking her head into his chest.

"don't leave me alone randhir.. don't leave me I need you right now.."

Randhir's anger suddenly blew up. He was surprised looking at her this way. She never saw her that broken. Bold, confident ready to take up challenges not a crying baby was what he had figured out yet. She was really broken that's all he could figure today. He went back to his senses as sanyu tighten her hold on his shoulder sobbing badly.

"umm.. sanyukta you okay ?" he asked putting his hand on her head trying to console her."

"do..don't le..leave me alone here randhir pls" she sobbed

I'm not leaving you alone tonight sanyukta okay ? stop crying" he managed to say it ina low yet concerned voice.

Sanyukta was now resting her head murmuring "don't leve me" on his chest and randhir was holding her gently patting her shoulder .

Suddenly he realizes she was asleeped.

Gently he put her to bed and as he was bout to back off he realized she was still holding his collar he smiled. He was to remove her hand but she woke up and the look on her face tore randhir apart.

"sanyukta so jao pls"

"tum kha ja rhe ho ?"

"me yhi chair pe bethinga okay ?"

"nhi sat beside me"

*randhir sighs*

"okay".

Edited by lil_juli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: rabia297



ur suspense...itsss killlingg me...nywazz try to update soon..



updated 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
wow...
plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34


THANKKK YOU...!!!!a big one...
nd this 1 was..cute., emotional...suprbbb...kudosss to uh...nd yeah...continue soon...aj nai sahi toh kal kr denaa...nd thnxx again fo.updatingg dis 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awessmm updates..read 2 , 3 nd 4 th part in one go...
plzz plz continue asap...
nd btw..does randhir's knows ki sanyu's mom died...???????????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WHAT...sanyu mom is no more this is really bad news
her mom was only reason for her life and the only support but now nothing is left thats why she want to kill herself

thank god randhir save her on correct time

i can understand the closeness of sandhir...its just a need not a lust

i love both update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: saky77

wow...

plz update next part soon...


thanks 😊
will update it tomorrow thanks for reading ^^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: moonkmh

aww so cute..n emotional



thankyou 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome update dear..


thnaks a ton yaar 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: rabia297



THANKKK YOU...!!!!a big one...
nd this 1 was..cute., emotional...suprbbb...kudosss to uh...nd yeah...continue soon...aj nai sahi toh kal kr denaa...nd thnxx again fo.updatingg dis 1




thnxieee 😃
yeps will update it tomorrow 😊

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