'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Hugs fr me dear...🤗
Luv u both kash n u fr dis...
I desperately wanted sumone to write getting inspired by Sadda Haqq's promo...☺️
Hayee
M losing my sanity imagining dis...☺️☺️
Aggressive n Jealous Rey is more hott...😉

Loved Kriya's attitude...
Want sumthng sort of happening in d show
Wen Rey's moving on truth is out...

Keep writing...
U r gifted...😊
N dnt forget to pm me...
If u write another one...😉

Urs,
Soniya...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: vaishu88

awesome os..


loved d jealous rey..

aggression wen he broke d mirror n d way he handled kria was penned well..

kria s not gonna sit around n let him affect her n that too after knowing he moved on easily was superb...

but she s madly in love with rey that she started to respond to d kiss but pushed him wen she realized y he kissed her..

but he ended again with d kiss saying she belong only to him..

nice aggressive os.. yet passionate..

hope v c such jealous track with abhishek..



awww thank u re..I look forward to your comments.. and I hope so too, aisa hi kuch mile iss abhishek track me..😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Hugs fr me dear...🤗
Luv u both kash n u fr dis...
I desperately wanted sumone to write getting inspired by Sadda Haqq's promo...☺️
Hayee
M losing my sanity imagining dis...☺️☺️
Aggressive n Jealous Rey is more hott...😉

Loved Kriya's attitude...
Want sumthng sort of happening in d show
Wen Rey's moving on truth is out...

Keep writing...
U r gifted...😊
N dnt forget to pm me...
If u write another one...😉

Urs,
Soniya...😊



hello Soniya.. hugs to u too..🤗
haha😆😆 I will deffo PM u if I write something again.. accept the buddy req, makes my job easier..
I hope, really hope CVs aisa hi kuch dikha de...😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
amazing OS dear...
love d way ur expressed rey's jealousy...
it was dammm awesome...
kiss was the way to make her feel that she is his forever...
try to write another part expressing kriya's feelings...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil

amazing OS dear...

love d way ur expressed rey's jealousy...
it was dammm awesome...
kiss was the way to make her feel that she is his forever...
try to write another part expressing kriya's feelings...
thnx fr d pm...



thnxx Nikki..😊 I will try, dekhte hain..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
amazing one
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awweeieiiieee...
Dis is BEAUTIFUL...
SUPER AWSSMMM OS...
LOVED IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha

Awweeieiiieee...
Dis is BEAUTIFUL...
SUPER AWSSMMM OS...
LOVED IT



haha thank u soo much..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I wanna hit my head hard smwhere...will u do that honour anky...
Let me cry 1st...😭
comments later 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Enough crying...i was in my mirage that i hv commented here...
Anyways...anky dis is what i always wanted kriyaansh to be like...
This aggression has a reflection of the intensity they carry with them...
Lovey dovey kriyaansh cant really connect me with them...
Bt the one i witnessed here...thats there forte...
Enough of my blabbering...
Darls...i bow u...kaha ho tum...i wanna hug u NOW...
This was totally mindblasting...this superrrjelous rey...aaah...killed me...
Nd nt the crybaby bt this strong "dont u dare" type kria...u portrayed the best of it...jealous coz he saw her with aryan...frustrated..coz he want to feel her bt is nt willing to accept...angry...coz she defended aryan...all the emotions of rey were crystal clear through his actions nd ur amazing writing skill...
As of kriya..i loved her innerstrength throughout the flow...not the one to beg for...bt the one to make others go weak with her strong attitude...
Her thoughts of rey being just angry nd he dont luv him coz she has seen the pics of his grlfrnd in his laptop still...these points justified her self defence mechanism perfectly...
Though i was literally left open mouth after reading he pushed her hard on the wall...but but... THE LAST...breath stuck moment...he attacked on her lips...i wont call it a kiss...it wasnt jst dat only...
I so loved it...
Amazing

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