'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 3

Supab dhasu os
love it
rey being jealous n do such a insane things which he will not do just bcoz of kria
love it
the last dialoge of rey
when he smrik n huskily said
you are mine only mine
was amazing

Itz freaking Ah-mazing..
I simply love this concept- Hot romance with Aggression!
Beautifully written
keep writing more

Originally posted by: alex754

Jealous reyaansh and bold and strong kriya are the best part
They are awesome and finally rey's statement you are mine only mine was tooo good
But srsly rey still has her pictures obviously kriya has every right to be harsh on him

I just hope something like this happens..😆😆 thnx for commenting..

Originally posted by: --Shukti--

Itz freaking Ah-mazing..
I simply love this concept- Hot romance with Aggression!
Beautifully written
keep writing more

hope aisa kuch ho jaye..😳😆😆 thnx for commenting..

Originally posted by: Cookielicious

That was Amazingly written.

Loved the way you potrayed their emotions.

Beautiful piece of work 👏

thnx a LOT..😆😆

Originally posted by: luvarsha20

*let me make it known that i trudged my lazy behind to the cafe only for u*

Now that i have declared my bhalobasha in public 😛 let me get to my comment.

EEEPPPSSS!!!!!!!! ☺️

My reaction when I read this. Since CVS are determined to deprive our souls of aggression, I really wanted someone to write something like this. And you did!!!!! I never thought you would write a whole os on it. But I am so glad you did. Well Kash has a way of making people write things.😛😛

ANYHOO, I LOVED IT. 🤗 I really don't feel like fangirling over the Kriyansh they show on TV nowadays so i will fangirl over them here. Because the *Kriyansh* you portrayed is the Kriyansh of my dreams. The Kriyansh i fell for. So thank you darling for giving them to me as I really missed them. I won't comment on writing and all for you know you are brilliant. None could have done this better justice.

P.S- CVS Are you reading this????? Mi cara has written a brilliant scenario. If you guys give me even half as much intensity as this I will be a happy soul.

P.P.S- I swear this constant to and fro from the cafe to my house will make me lose weight. Credit goes to anki and kash !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awww, me lovesh you tooo babu, aneeek ta..😃
chal acha hain, you will soon have a figure like Shaks then..😆😆
I reeally hope aisa kuch dikha de yaar, am dying for a bit intensity...😕
And trust me, even I never thought I will write OS on anything, I mean, I never wrote an one-shot, and I wasn't sure how it will turn out.. but well, she is Kash after all..😆😆
te amo darling, for commenting..😳

Originally posted by: anki_22

awww, me lovesh you tooo babu, aneeek ta..😃
chal acha hain, you will soon have a figure like Shaks then..😆😆
I reeally hope aisa kuch dikha de yaar, am dying for a bit intensity...😕
And trust me, even I never thought I will write OS on anything, I mean, I never wrote an one-shot, and I wasn't sure how it will turn out.. but well, she is Kash after all..😆😆
te amo darling, for commenting..😳