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The consummation part is beautifully written ... it was not awkward but very passionate... what was that in the end of the update ? is that the sign of trouble ? now i m desperate to read the next part

Hope he doesn't hurt khushi in his anger...

With Arnav he loves Khushi a lot but will not own up that easily.

As far as being reckless... I dont think its any ones fault.

Cant wait to read further

There are very less writers I have come across who can actually write a love making scene BEAUTIFULLY and not make it vulgar..

You are definitely one of them..And this is the reason I loved my arshi is this update tooo <3

Loved every bit of the update..

And now very curious as to why arnav suddenly got soo angry..

Lookng forward for it

Cheers for d PM :)

My long overdue comments:

Chapter 21:

Whew Manorama Mami has it in bad for Payal ,she was truly offensive in her words today ,I really feel for Payal poor thing being an orphan she needed loving in laws that would show her the meaning of family and fill in the voids in her life but to her badluck she got Mami for a mother in law I just hope Akash would stand up for her and not just hold her hand under the table!Mami seems very nice to Khushi so y this cold behavior to Payal only because she's an orphan and now she's sees akash's interest in her? Was she always like this with Payal? Will she have a problem with Arnav's interest in Khushi? Love the relationship between the two sisters and they talk was touching. The roles seem reversed and Khushi is the one running where Arnav wants to talk...wonder what's going on in Arnav's head.

Again hats off to your descriptive writing!

Chapter 22:

Loved your vivid description of Nanital...you blow me away with each chapter..

Khushi is such a sweetheart and I love how her character is coming along.

I adore the way she understand each relation and can respond to each person so accurately.

Uff your description of Arnav made me breathless. I always love reading Khushi's thoughts and her memories it's just beautiful.

A jealous Arnav is always a pleasure to read.

They whole confrontation was written to the T simply perfect. It's good to see Arnav just going in for the kill while Khushi is resisting. Loved the way you wrote about Arnav's change in perception...so finally he accepted the fact that he has always been attracted to her and that attraction only grew in time and he longs for her but where does that leave them what kind of a relationship does he expect from her?

Chapter 23:

I LOVE YOUR NARRATION SKILLS! I can't put into words just how much.

I simply adore Payal no one can blame her from wanting to protect herself from the hurt a future with Akash will give her due to his mother but will her heart listen to her mind?

Arnav managed to save Khushi and probably faced his biggest fear of losing her in those moments but of course they actions always contradict they real emotions for instance we all know khushi really wanted to be held and comforted by Arnav but she ends up saying 'leave me alone'' and Arnav let's not go there he really knows how to mess things up.

Chapter 24:

Love your attention to detail and how you describe they attire.

KHUSHI has accepted her love for Arnav this can only mean good things for us ... as she will act more freely around Arnav and hopefully things will progress rapidly.

This chapter just speaks of intense passion. The chemistry and passion between Arnav and Khushi is given me Goosebumps. I always love the interactions between the three musketeers they just adorable.

Chapter 25

Liked Aman's story he feels indebted to the Raizadas but I just hope he realises the futility of avoiding a relationship with ANYA due to that, she's just perfect for him.

Coming to Arnav and Khushi from the dance floor to the terrace you left me hyperventilating. And the kiss god it was just explosive It made my heart go dhak dhak as if I was Khushi oh how I wish I was. I am so happy Anjali knows everything Arnav and Khushi can really use a cupid especially one with an astute mind like Anjali's.

Chapter 26:

Nani just rocks another cupid this is going to be great.

This chapter was full of romance and I loved everything about it from the filter coffee, cheek rubbing, conversations, teasing and handholding!

You dealt with Khushi's concerns regarding they social status rather well.

Chapter 27:

Love is definitely in the air! This chapter was such a pleasant pleasure to read.

All 3 love stories rolled into one can this get any better.

ANYA AND AMAN- WOW it was just perfect... Aman's on the spot confession was beautiful and it made up for all the years he wasted. Anya handled the situation well and I'm glad she listened and understood where his coming from rather than dwelling on the past. Of course her heart had no chance against that honest and sincere confession. Looking forward to they love story.

Coming to Akash and Payal I adore that Akash is a romantic naughty boyfriend and the perfect fit for Payal but I really wish he would take time to convince his mother rather than sneaking out with Payal. Manorama isn't going to take they sneaking around lightly and the last thing Payal needs is abusing words from Manaorama.

Coming to the most intense couple ARNAV AND KHUSHI it just had me sighing.

Adored the ice cream scene and not forgetting they make out scene with all they "grinding' it had me flushed.

Chapter 28:

The vivid description in this chapter really helped visualising everything from the dcor to jewellery it was very beautifully described. Manoramas words to Payal broke my heart I think it was uncalled for and I really hope Akash man's up and sort it out fast. Anjali's thoughts about her parents' marriage really shows the extent to which the incidents damaged the two siblings Anya is the only 1 that thinks about the good memories maybe because she was too small. Nani and Mama did an excellent job in bringing up the 3 siblings. This chapter spelled out life is not a bed of roses! Very beautiful chapter.

Chapter 29:

I think in every chapter I praise your description skills but u just gets better with each chapter.

You had me gripped to my chair and my blood went cold worrying about Khushi in that dark room. think after this incident they will be a turning point in they relationship. This incident just shows how we take life and people for granted and how things can change in seconds. Feel so sorry for Payal. I have a feeling it's a toy snake. You captured Arnav's emotions and helplessness perfect.

They alone at home with the realisation of how important they are to each other and vulnerable feelings hmm what's going to happen... Can barely wait.

Chapter 30:

Just brilliant! Everything was described to the T especially ARNAVS state of mind from his fear to him taking care of Khushi to him noticing every detail of her just awesome.

Loved Nani for warning Arnav to take care of Khushi properly.

Chapter 31:

Oh boy this has to be my most favourite update till date!

The love making scene was just beautiful it was so passionate yet tender...Khushi took a leap of faith and Arnav didn't disappoint. Glad Khushi confessed so now Arnav knows what Khushi expects.

The snake was a toy but that unfortunate event had to happen in order for us to see this beautiful blossoming relationship. My comment is inadequate for this magnificent piece! you left me speechless

Cannot wait to see what happens next.

Chapter 32:

It keeps worrying me that they are not using protection and when Khushi got carried away talking about children Arnav wasn't too thrilled and changed the topic and then it makes me think back to the prologue but I would never imagine Khushi's character to give her child up ... whatever you have in store for us I don't mind as long as there is a happy ending. So happy they had such a sensual morning after. The ending left me in suspense update soon.

What a morning after and also with a sumptuous breakfast !

Khushi is basking in love and enjoying every moment of it..

I like men preparing a meal once a week and showing their affecton towards their partner

Whats with in the end arnav screaming with ice cold face?