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Posted: 11 years ago
here comes the knot and the twist ... What's going on...Arnav and khushi seemed to be at ease infact great with each other... Does all good things come to an end and that too abrupty???


thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg!!!!!amazingly written...their new begining starts with a wonderful and heated morning...the talk about not using protection and about pills are beautifully written...
their breakfast...their lovemaking all are amazingly written...did khushi walked in the snow for long?????why did arnav brought chopper????? why is arnav mad at khushi????
thks for the pm...
will be waiting for the nxt updte...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Man and woman. The difference will forever remain - His hardness to her softness, his bunched ruggedness against her satiny silk, and her words for his silence. Yet when they come together, it is combustion all the way. It consumes - just as it did in the case of Arnav and Khushi------ oh man! When I read this first part, I felt like eating Diary Milk Silky! He he...such sensual feeling in a truly silky way!

Ecstasy and Agony have this incredible link. Time loses its essence in both scenarios where minutes and hours merge, mingle, miss and mix---- A true fact! I love these bits you weave in each update...last few updates I missed catching on these

"I didn't use protection. I didn't have it with me. I wish I could have stopped myself but ... I know it wasn't the right thing to do but I couldn't stop myself, Khushi. I wanted to. I have never done that before. Never been irresponsible. I have broken every single rule of mine with you..." ---- Aha! Yes, I had wondered about this..but since your wrote those parts in such a fantastic and landslide manner, I just allowed myself to flow along, thinking I could worry later! He he..i liked his confession in the end...a control freak should get this punishment!

"Hypocrite! Never knew you had such double standards."/ "Great. It's good to know what you want. Let's get some food. I'm hungry." He abruptly rolled out of the bed, reached for his denims, tugged them up and left the buttons undone carelessly. They hugged his hips snuggly. He thrsut a shirt at her and asked, "Aren't you hungry?" Khushi sat up holding the sheet to her chest, uneasily.----- well! Honestly I didn't like attitude of Arnav...even I feel quite uneasy now...something isn't right here! Aha! Arnav suddenly thought it was Ana, the friend Khushi mentioned and all of the sudden he was that protective brother..but what about he did...aha! I hate men with this kind of double standards! To see men in kitchen working without any hiccups is a treat to watch..there is something beautiful in the whole scene..However I didn't like Arnav when he declined to discuss his old life and past girlfriends. Honestly S, I am not liking this Arnav...I can feel a very strong dislike coming towards him from me (yes! I am biased)...but I loved this below part of the conversation~ go girl! Get him...

"Because it's not important. It wouldn't be a vague memory otherwise."

"A vague memory, huh?"

"Khushi!"

"Chicken?" Her hazel tints dared him to answer.

"I'll give you the name if you tell me about yours." Arnav challenged.

"I never had a boyfriend. Of course I had friends who were boys. They were just friends." She replied gleefully.

She shook her head, picked up the plates to clear them away. "I asked first. Who was your first girlfriend?"

I went out twice with Sanjeev. No! No! They were not real dates. We just hung out. He was a sweet guy, feeling lost because he was shooting in a new city for almost a month. I enjoyed his company. He was easy to hang out with." She repeated Arnav's line with her tongue firmly in her cheek.

"It matters to me. You are my first and only one. I'm one of the many. How ..."--- here I couldn't help but feel her fear and insecurities...

Her unwavering eyes imprisoned him as she unbuttoned the rest of her shirt and eased it off her shoulders sensually.--- My god! The girl has become a siren and bold! I liked this transition...the power she feels as a woman, a confident woman who is aware of her power...wow wow! Khushi thoughts afterwards were nice to read, her worry about her amma calling Nani and finding out her staying with Arnav..her memories of the past night...and stupid girl, walked too much into the forest and now..what's wrong with the helicopter? The cliffhanger left me in panic attack...keeping suspense is good for strong hearted reader..but its not good for me..wink!

Thirdly, In this chapter, there is a little discussion on emergency pill. I want to stress that morning after pill is an emergency pill only. It is not a substitute for the actual pill. Please use protection while indulging in sexual activities - condoms, pills prescribed by the OB/GYN and other methods that suit you. ---- good that you put this note here...while reading that part, even I felt confused..I mean..the readers here - age group wise - are majorly minors..so it's good to put this note...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update ..i think arnav is angry coz khushi went into woods without telling him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update.both arnav nd khushi coming closer.nice.their cute conversations regarding not using protection,then khushi telling one of her friend told her,made arnav curious nd tensed,protective.liked the way they discussed their past .it seems arnav is very angry in the end as khushi went outside without letting arnav know about it.continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Are we nearing the prologue? That is my only question!! I mean your note also says the same! Number of times also adds on to the conclusion!

Loved each and everything of it! His need her wants their love! The ecstasy! Milky Way and all! Poetic!

The morning after was definitely cute making her the breakfast!! Sweet man!

And her walk! Along with her thoughts and our concern was bliss though our thoughts were purely related to the soon approaching fall!

Sigh! Was he worried? His MOVE says so!

I'm waiting to see the familys reaction!

And hypocrite indeed! He can have all the fun khushi can like he cares but expects his sister to be safe!

No wonder the prologue comes up! I pity her like I said before i still cannot enjoy them becoming one! The prologue keeps popping up! Sigh


Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh yes!! It's a journey - Journey of discovering each other, discovering oneself and discovering the depth of love they share.


It's love all the way. Arnav & Khushi are together and that's what matters. Khushi feels like a woman and Arnav is the worrying man here due to no protection. I like this slightly worried Arnav here, feels good to know that he understands his responsibility and is considering the implications too.
Guys are different with their woman and their sister. I mean sister how much old they may be but they will remain kids for them and well sister's friend is a different case altogether. 😉 The good thing is that he was only worried about his sister and in no way meant the kind of friends Khushi has. It's a good sign. For family stuff is different and I won't deny it as I myself can't imagine such things for my younger sis or brother. It has nothing to do with male or female but the thing that they are young and so will always be considered kid.
Arnav didn't say anything regarding the future kids stuff and kind of brushed it away. I know he wants Khushi forever and as he himself later said that she is different and it's a first for him too in the way that matters but how he wants to keep her forever with him is a tricky thing. He hasn't declared his thoughts regarding that. I'm a little worried over it as they both belong to different world of beliefs in the way that matters. (Yeah Arnav's words, actually yours 😆)
Khushi is becoming quite confident now. She is discovering her feminine side, coming in more contact with it. 😳
He even tried to brush away his earlier flings but why is he doing this? He is sharing his present with her, intending to share his future too but why not past and that too something which is not related to his childhood troubles? Is he insecure too like Khushi? Does he think that his flings have the possibility of making Khushi back away? Khushi's insecurities over not being his first are quite out in the open, his are still under a cover.
Going out wasn't a very good idea actually. I was scared she would get in some other trouble there if the storm starts again. The storm has reached them but of a different nature and somehow I have a feeling that it's going to be more troublesome than the natural one. Why is Arnav angry now? Don't tell me it's time for a bumpy ride in the NOON!!!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPhHtahBlyI[/YOUTUBE]



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Posted: 11 years ago
What to say to this and the last chapter Sandhya ...
You outdo yourself every time ...
The whole lovemaking has been written so aesthetically with all the passion
love sentiments required to make it so hot and steamy ... 😳
leaving us craving for more 😆 😳
and you gave it to us yet again ... and again ... ☺️
Loved their talk of the protection that they should have used ... and the options ...
Oh ... and seeing Arnav' cooking !!! a fluffy cheesy omelet and cappuccino !!!
I was in heaven reading about it ... ⭐️

The whole walk in the snow was so beautifully written with Khushi retrospecting about
her relationship with Arnav ... and I suppose in the bargain forgetting how long she was
away from home till the helicopter scene and then we see a grim faced mad Arnav Singh
Raizada ! who probably thought that maybe she was lost !

And now back to reality ... 😲 let's see what's in store for them now ...

Thanks Sandhya ...



Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats quite an interesting update ranging from awesome morning after to emergency pills.baby talk then finally search and rescue mission to the rigid!
fab all the way looks like there is a sore need for new thread !so see you there with a real nice quick update:)
hoping for the update is what i mean at the end😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful, hot romantic, all at the same time...
but why is Arnav angry!!!!!

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