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Posted: 11 years ago
Did you say the chapter was long...?😲 Did not feel like it !!

Loved the way you described the winding, pine flanked, mountain roads and added Anya's romantic musings to it, it added reality to the moment to the extent, that I felt I was living it.

Anya's misgivings about the expected long term nature of their relationship was again very realistic and well portrayed; but with these two,love will find a way.

OMG...Khushi left behind..!!

I was constantly on the edge of my chair after this revelation and the urgency and desperation in Arnav's demenour, brought to mind the 'guest house episodes' of the old show. (One if my favs)

Sometimes, it takes stark fear of loss of a person to make one realize, her/ his exact worth in one's life. At times like these, all masks, all covers, all defense mechanisms, all self restrants melt away and what remain behind are the most basic, most earthy of unadorned, plain, true emotions.

Loved it, Sandy :)

One of the most poweful chapters of this story..
Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update as usual Sandhya!!!!
Aww Anji is missing Aman poor girl did not think out all the logistics how to continue their relationship before falling in love lol!!! I am sure they are going to make it work😊

Anya's instincts about Payal were right, she has to be a pest and intervene now. Poor Payal felt so bad for her in last update, I hope Akash will come through for her!!!

Arrrgh Khushi she was in so much pain and distress, happy that her knight in shining armor came with a flash light in true ASR fashion😉

I am glad that Arnav is head over heels in love with Khushi and hopefully he will tell her that and not let her go😊

Cannot wait to see what happens next, please update soon!!!!!😊
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hum Bhi !!
Unres

The title itself sent alarm bells ringing in my head with various possibilities. I love how you describe the nature always. It's like a movie going on. Actually the whole chapter was like that. Anya tired but thinking about Aman, anxious as to how they will handle their long-distance relationship. Pyar ke side-effects. for all these years it never occurred to her that how they will handle it but two days of their confession and here she is, getting worked up about it. Love makes us all go crazy. The visual of Manorama Mami sleeping with her mouth open cracked me up.
It's thanks to Anya that everyone got to know that Khushi was missing. How come everybody missed her?
Arnav's regret for not telling her how much happy he was knowing she extended her stay was natural. Doesn't it happen to all of us if something happens to our loved ones or they are in any sort of possible danger?
Khushi's fear had a big part in what happened. If not for her extreme phobia she could have had escaped safely from the basement. I'm just glad that Arnav found her. He won't let anything happen to her now and would keep her safe with him.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EG9jplJmOx4[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok! You know i have this urge to laugh out loud coz m sure that there wasnt any snake in there , n it was probably a rope or a toy snake! Toy stacked with all their older stuff! N given that it was khushi n given how familiar are with her antics, m sure she got terrified over nothing!
Yes its a different thing that this supposed near death experience has finally made them realise how important one is to the other! N that there is no better time than now to confess their feelings to each other!
It was good to see arnav cleary recognising the his love n feelings for khushi!
M sure after the words are exchanged it will be the time of action! N action we will get! I mean two souls passionately in love, who cant get enough of each other physically, who are emotionally vulnerable at the moment! They are stuck in a house! Its snowing heavily outside! Bas all we need is a fireplace and a beautiful rug in front of it! Well perfect recepie for a Perfect ahem scene!!!
Ok jokes apart i guess they have finally found each other n their need for each other will definitely translate in to something very beautiful!!

Waiting for the next update sandy! N dont worry about the lenght Infact i dont think it will ever be long enuf for us!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...what was that???

Was their really a snake or was it khushi's fear bordering on phobia plus darkness and loneliness playing with her mind???

Whatever that gave me goose pimples all over coz I to fear snakes .

Well one thing it did good a as khushi's absences made Arnav realize what khushi meant to him. So much so that he was considering whether praying god would be of any help or not...

that's how was the update!!!
Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh totally unexpected - but beautifully written as always .
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Posted: 11 years ago
The best part of this chapter was Arnav's realization that he needs Khushi. You depicted it so beautifully, with his fear and the flashbacks. I loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely chapter...

i loved it the way chapter started anyas pov, and her thinking regarding every one and also about hers too...way to go bitiya...

feel really bad for payal hoping she will share her turmoil to her friends or atleast with akash,so that he will know exactly how she feels...loved itin the last chapter the way she talked about her views with manorama...strong girl...

anjali full of hopes and dreams,hoping she will get what she wants...

arnav and kushi iam soo happy finally arnav realized his feelings...wondering what next...how they he will share his feelings to kushi or keep himself...

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers...
Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So beautifully written!
Absolutely loved the chapter.
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Out of darkness comes the light! It happened for Khushi with Arnav rescuing her, for Arnav with his realisation that he not only loves her but can't live without her...hopefully it will extend to PalPal and give her some hope!

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