ArHi SS : YES BOSS II #2 *Completed* ||Replies Pg 121* - Page 62

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Fabulous update.Thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
love it
they are together
waiting for epilogue
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh toh hona hi tha... Kab tak apne jazbaat kaabu mein rakhta... Kiss hi sahi, par thoda toh aage badha, dance floor pe !

HAWW ! Arnav had heard the convo between Khushi and Shyam and seen her slapping Shyam too !

So, you are Khushi ! I'm Sheetal Jha ... I know everything you dont have to be sorry... Some men are PROGRAMMED that way !... Hi Sheetal ! I see you've met Khushi !

Hey Devi Maiyya ! Id caller still " RAKSHAS " ?!

Rabba Ve on the dance floor, Rabba Ve on the dance floor, Arnav and Khushi Rabba Ve ing on the dance floor at midnight as clock struck 12... Happy New Year !

Mujhe koi aise pyaar se bulaaye, i wouldnt move from his side !

... We are dating each other...darling, sweetheart... Lol... Khushi confused and angry with the endearing words Arnav called her by !

Shyam still had the audacity of walking upto Khushi , even though Arnav was there !... I want to talk to you Khushi... Obviously khushi walked away.. Arnav talks civilly but when Shyam again tries to talk to Khushi holding her wrists... Our man.. Arnav Singh Raizada.. Comes and stands infront of Khushi , removing Shyams hand.. HE-MAN... and a punch on Shyam's face... Yipppee !

Damn.. I wish Arnav had hit him black and blue..but... *sigh*

coat scene... Arnav not only makes Khushi wear his jacket but buttons her up too.

Lol...Khushi's mind, heart still doing summersaults whenever Arnav is close to her... Upar se he confesses that he got her Address from her Resume...

Cherry on the cake... What a New Years Gift to Khushi !... Holding her by the waist Arnav gives Khushi a sounding kiss on her right cheek ... Mmmuuuaahh... Haha... Khushi touches her cheek where Arnav had kissed her and sprints away from there, looking back only to find him standing there and smiling !

Arey re arey yeh kya hua... Maine na yeh jaana ! Dhak dhak karne laga, mora jiyara darne laga... Aaayat... Poolside Kiss of Arnav yaad aa gaya...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hehehe...Muah.. Loved the update !

Arnav confesses his love to Khushi !...Its just attraction ! ... Lemme decide for myself... Even you do...

BADTAMEEZ !!!!!... Khushi called him badtameez !

" Badtameeze toh maine abhi shuru bhi nahin ki hai " ... Aayat is circumstance mein this line is so mushy so flirty. Same line Arnav had told Shyam just before he threw him out of the house, after the kidnapping track and the way he said it was like was really threatening shyam !

Both friends... Lavanya and Khushi lying on the bed.. Each in their own thoughts... After Khushi told La that after she had slapped Shyam, Arnav Sir had punched him in his face... Khushi thinking about Arnav and La thinking she did a good thing by taking Khushi for the party and not a bad mistake leaving her behind with Arnav !

So, Arnav was 100% sure he was a goner and knew that even Khushi was, but hadnt realized it and was in denial mode. Chalo dekhte hain till when !

Aaayyaatt ! Dreams ko properly describe karti yaar :( literary in one line you finished off each dream ! If you left it for imagination, then HAWww !!! Besharam ... !

Kiss, phir do kiss, phir dono kiss... *dreamy sigh*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...I loved the way u concluded the in the last part...
It was a beautiful chapter and loved the way they ,made up...
Though am gonna miss this story...a lot...
Waiting for the epilogue...
And also for ur new story ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was the most brilliant, awesome, endearing part of the SS.

Heart wrenching part. For the first time Arnav took Khushi to his mother's garden ! There he bared his soul to her. Every word nearly contradicting to what the world thought about him.

Khushi didnt want to pry further, so didnt say anything at all. She let the real Arnav speak today, not the Arnav or ASR to the world. the emotions which were pented inside him came out slowly together with tears recollecting and telling about his mother. His MA, whom he loved the most and was attached to the most in the world. How he lost her, because of which he used to stay away from relationships and the word marriage. Every little detail about himself Arnav told Khushi.

The slight gesture of Khushi keeping her head softly on his shoulder helped Arnav speak out. Tears rolling down in both their eyes. One coz all which was bottled up was being brought out. The other , just by listening to the bottled emotions.

Khushi hugged a crying Arnav as though protecting him, consoling him, though she was crying herself. She kissed him and Arnav responded . Looking into each other's eyes, reflecting each others feelings as to be the same. To Arnav, baring his soul to Khushi felt a very natural thing. " TUM MUJHE CHHOD KAR TOH NAHIN JAOGI NA ?! " He knew she belonged to him and she was here with him to stay ! Love heals all wounds and Khushi's love for him gave solace to him !

Aayyaattt... Both the kisses were awesome ! Loved the way Arnav teased Khushi and how impatient he was all the time to meet her over the weekends ! Impatient, teasing, head over heals in love, Arnav could never stop kissing Khushi. Even khushi reciprocated to his kisses in the same manner. When Arnav's hand had slipped under her top, him feeling her soft skin... It felt natural and normal for both of them. Nothing awkward. *dreamy sigh*

For Khushi, after the garden , Arnav was the protective family person whom she now knew.. Vulnerable and soft, only ferociously protective about his family and the people he loved the most.

Thank you La.. For what you did silently !

Aayat dont finish this so soon ! Its beautiful. Start YB-3 :D !

Waiting now...



Remembering ipk garden part alot ! Miss it :'(
Edited by NidhiNev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Pumpkin !

Yea I know Id ka chand types are my comment but what to do babes I stay in a boarding with old fashion life style so no internet access !

That's why I like holidays more than anything now a days ! :P

Well about the updates !

It was amazing to read this story ! it was kinda roller coster type ! totally unaware of both of their moves ahead !
something unique and interesting to read !
I liked the way you described each happening in the story ! each feeling, each expression came out very well ! I could feel both of them coming out of my lappy screen and acting infront of my eyes ~

I hardly found any flaw in the story or your pattern ! It was nice and heart touching story to read ! fell in love with it !
it saddens me that I would no more will be able to read it ! but I hope you come up with even awesome ideas !

Bye
Love
Diva
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lavanya's reverse psychology worked exactly the way she had wanted, Khushi was in such a hurry to prove La's words wrong.That jealousy thing was so cute:)
Khushi was so jealous seeing Arnav smiling at Racheal and Sarah's name added more to the fire.
The confession, Khushi too admitted that she likes him, and the hug..I LOVE IT, DAMMIT!!
Aman is smart enough to understand the budding feelings between Arnav and Khushi, but poor him can't even share it with his wife..Anjali and her dramas, though I love them:)
The dinner and the date in the end..that was another beautiful moment.
Loved it..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi isn't able to accept their relationship fully, she still must be scared of various things.
Arnav too has noticed all that and given her a lot of space too but Khushi doesn't share her problems with him.
Arnav got damn angry and even left her alone.Khushi was restless seeing him leave and wanted him to be safe.She also wished their relationship to stay intact.That shows how much she loves him but won't accept it.
Who's at the door?
That was another great update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The cupid Lavanya was at the door.She did knock some sense into Khushi and made her accept her feelings and move forward.
Glad that Khushi told Arnav everything..that was much needed.
That was another great update.

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