UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Lovely update.

Hey, don't worry about any negative comments. You have the guts to write and post a FF which is much more than people like myself do. I can just imagine but not able to put into words and you are doing it. Take care and keep writing.

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

i'm warning u siri agar dubara aisa faltu note diya na tho mai cmmnt nai krungi update me😡

anyway suprb update... haayee maaneet ka hot hot romance...

past me maan ko yaad hi nai h k almondy kaun h...maan geet se dur rhne ki kosish kring...but Annie ne maan se demand ki wo geet ko apne saath le k aaye...chalo dekhte h aage kya hota h

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Oh my..dat was hotty hotty ...passionfilled update...me blushing...
maan ka bas chale toh he wont leave ...her any time ...not even at office...
tree house is so dreamy...yaar...i feel lk goin der now itself...

loved d cutiepies...very much...
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Dear der will be bashers every wheere ignore dem...nd write for one who loves ur writings...

waitin for nxt part...
rt now reading jeevan sanghini...ll comment once i have finshed reading dem

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

superb n romantic n hot update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Gonna start reading it di n then reply

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

ohh ohh maan having night mares is it??

and present is fully seasual me chup bachi hu na 😆

i love bhoomi pie so much give more moments of her ye dil mange more yaar

my mind asking for past more than present

sparkle

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss
i'm warning u siri agar dubara aisa faltu note diya na tho mai cmmnt nai krungi update me😡
anyway suprb update... haayee maaneet ka hot hot romance...
past me maan ko yaad hi nai h k almondy kaun h...maan geet se dur rhne ki kosish kring...but Annie ne maan se demand ki wo geet ko apne saath le k aaye...chalo dekhte h aage kya hota h

aah sorry sorry nikki ab aap bhi moo mat fulaavo richa ki tarah😛😉😆

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Present - Maan and Geets marriage is truely colorful

they always passionate about each other whether in dress or in love

making , their passionate with they kids

Past - Maan apologizes to Geet but she really did'nt need that as now he said he will not trouble her and she must stay away from him

hmm ... they all going to club

sizzling update

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

very hot update di...
geet is soo cute...
and kisne apne aapki language ke bhaare mein bakwas kiya???
i guess they dunno english tats y pointin fingers at others...
u just leave it di...