KriYaansh Drabble Series : Entangled (Chap 2 - Pg 6)

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This was an amazing part..
I Just loved the way u showed rey's irritation..at office..
The words u used to describe his hatred towards the boss n dat beautiful KR moments

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Happy Birthday to me🥳

Is it 22nd January again??🤔 I thought you are gonna update it on my next birthday!😡

Finally you got remembered of this avoided beautiful piece of work. Thanks for updating Jerry! huh!🤓

You are an expert of details. You write such small details which are so near to realism. One can't stop adoring and smiling while reading it. This series is so close to my heart for obvious reasons. And This series is so on my watch for many reasons.

I totally loved Rey's condition in office. I can relate.😆

Then comes my most favorite part, you love kria! Don't you??😆 How you managed to write her so well?? She reminded me of my mother who corrects the papers in a similar way. She tells us Kid's super funny answers in between like Kria did. I am in awww! Honestly! it was cutest thing I have ever read!!

But why the hell it was so short??? Let me guess! You are friend of Tommy! Laziness personified!😳

Jerry! This was amazing excerpt. I loved every word of it. Update soon!!!

Love you!🤗

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

this chapter was fabulous and great... rey find her at one place and the way she do her
and make him go crazy... bu her ways to laugh and express he falls for it more loved it

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: So_Naley
She was his peace,his semblance,his happiness and will always be.

I simply loved this line!

Beautifully summed up the entire drabble!

It was extremely cute!
The way he admired her,the love he has for her!

Truly mushy and that is why I liked it so much!😳

Thanku dear ^_^

Glad u liked the mush ...I am not that smooth with it but glad u found it nice :D

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sanju_arsha
This was an amazing part..
I Just loved the way u showed rey's irritation..at office..
The words u used to describe his hatred towards the boss n dat beautiful KR moments

Thanks alot dear ^_^

Glad u liked the portrayal of scenes ^_^

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
Happy Birthday to me🥳
Is it 22nd January again??🤔 I thought you are gonna update it on my next birthday!😡
Finally you got remembered of this avoided beautiful piece of work. Thanks for updating Jerry! huh!🤓

You are an expert of details. You write such small details which are so near to realism. One can't stop adoring and smiling while reading it. This series is so close to my heart for obvious reasons. And This series is so on my watch for many reasons.
I totally loved Rey's condition in office. I can relate.😆
Then comes my most favorite part, you love kria! Don't you??😆 How you managed to write her so well?? She reminded me of my mother who corrects the papers in a similar way. She tells us Kid's super funny answers in between like Kria did. I am in awww! Honestly! it was cutest thing I have ever read!!
But why the hell it was so short??? Let me guess! You are friend of Tommy! Laziness personified!😳

Jerry! This was amazing excerpt. I loved every word of it. Update soon!!!
Love you!🤗

Hahahhaha agar one update her birthday dungi toh mere marne tak bhi khatam nahi hoga lols 😆

Glad u found the mush readablr..i am such a sucker at writing mush and romance..a hopeless romantic lol 😆

YESS me lovess Kria ..she is one of the mosttt beautiful female character i have ever seen and my fav in D3 after Rey <3

hahaha that English essay part was from an incident at my school...funny school days 😆

Adi drabble hai lol.. And mere laziness quotient ke hisaab se this is lengthy lola

yesss i am,tommy's dadi maa in terms of lazinesss :p

i am super happy u liked it ...me loves u toos :* :*

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
this chapter was fabulous and great... rey find her at one place and the way she do her
and make him go crazy... bu her ways to laugh and express he falls for it more loved it

thanks a lot dear ^_^

Glad u found the mish and depiction readworthy ^_^