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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#641

loved the update intense finally asr is using his brain and trying to find out the truth loved how khushi blasted him loved how he realized that she hated shyam and him but she hated him more and snake is going to kidnap khushi awesome update thanks for the pm.

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Khushi should not melt for arnav...he shoukd be punished for doing such to khushi

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#643

nice update...

loved it...😊

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Arnav is sooo mean...he is not even letting her hate him n hurt him to her satisfaction... But I wish Khushi too plays her cards at right time n right place...let him help her recover n then just avoid him and ignore him... But I'm worried if Arnavs this caring behaviour will get her feelings n emotions for him from the numb state he got her to... ?

Riddhi.. These line..."He wanted to trust Khushi but the facts which were presented to Arnav in cunning and a manipulative manner kept him away from the truth. His feelings fluctuated and were not stable at all. At one time, he felt love and an unknown feeling. At the same moment, his feelings would get replaced by abhorrence and hatred towards her."

Arnav always choose not to trust Khushi...he just choose to fabricate story based on his past betrayal in his mind about Khushi n believe it n hurt her in return... He never even thought of trying to know about the facts till now... If Shyam is to be blamed for manipulating the facts n presenting it to Arnav...Arnav is much more at fault in believing one sided story n not trying to know the truth... I lovec it when Khushi said she hated him n feels disgusted about Arnav much more than Shyam... Arnav deserved every word n much worse...

Hope you will be able to give another update or a teaser before u become inactive...

Waiting...

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Loved the update!

Last one was the PI is it?

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#646

awesome update
poor khushi sometime she has to bear pain and hate from arnav and then next he make her completely surprised with his concerns and care.
hope arnab finds the true face of shayamm soon
thanks forpm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

your pics just make me laugh every time

gosh where do you find them from

what does he keep doing

well he better stop before he loses her completely

which he might just do man

how did it come to this

am glad she told him what she thinks of him

serves him right for sure

what do we do with this dude man

he just likes making life difficult not only for himself but others too

did he finally get any PI behind his creep of BIL

i blooming well hope so

and that creep what is he thinking of

god hope all works out

cheers for pm

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Maghinalls

@Maghinalls

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Everything's fair in love and war :)

Nice update

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Fantastic update

I like the recap idea. Thank you for the long update

Love the way you describe khushi's pain.

Poor khushi she has got no feelings in her anymore, for her death is the end and thats what she is waiting. she is even loosing the hope to live again on her own.

It's very nice she came back and that her will power is strong again enough to make her survive and fight back.

Its too late for Arnav to know the truth, i don't think khushi will accept his apology and think to forgive him or second chance.

In all the storm created by shyam and Arnav she is the one who lost the most.

Arnav should do something about Shyam if he want to make amends of his mistakes. Hating shyam, he is so cheap and scoundrel. Khushi is just his paggal pan that's all.

I got surprise of reading sudden change in Arnav for khushi, he is guilty for his actions but i don't think so using endearments for khushi will help him at all.

I am sure he will get back khushi in their life and will win his confidence.

Why is only Arnav taking care of khushi? Where are the rest of the family members especially Guptas and Payal? i don't see Payal getting worried for her sister. I would love to read their thoughts about Khushi's current situation.

Story is going great.

waiting for the next teaser