IPKKND-ARHI FF - Gypsy - TH II - Chapter 47 Pg 32

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Beautiful update. Khushi is still so innocent at heart. Felt like hugging her and taking her pains and fears away.

How many men think about the sins and crime they have committed after they have done it?? If Arnav is doing it, it means he is not a monster at heart. Hope he finds a common ground from where both can start building on their relationship and life.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

It was intereting to,read the points of view of both Arnav and Khushi.

Waiting now to see what happens next.

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Beautiful chapter. Both Arnav and Khushi deciding to deal with each other completely in opposing ways. One trying to stay miles away emotionally other trying to mend the emotional distance. Repentance of Arnav Is starting but it's going to one tough ride b'cos of intensity of his action altered Khushi in so many levels and this process she lost a lot and ended up with emotional and physical scars. Waitng for their contrasting approaches. Thx 4 d PM.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

That was an insightful POV on the course of their future actions. But will they be able to stick to it?

Thank you for adding the page number in your index. Thats sweet of you.

But what I asked is in the title of the page. When you write the chapter number, if you add page number and date then the readers will know that you have updated and definitely new readers when they have time will look in or else they would think it to be an old update and not check at all. This is just my suggestion as I find that you have a very powerful story going on but the reader base is small in comparison. I have recommended it to my friends whenever I get a chance.

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

SUPERB...

AFTER READING THEIR POV, I M VERY MUCH EAGER 4 NEXT UPDATE...

THA PM.NKS 4 D

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Brilliant one
Ur note is the gist of the update

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

The way ahead isn't going to be easy and that is known for sure. Khushi has resolved to completely detach herself from him, while he wants to build a relation of any kind good or bad.

Now he's walking on the right path. He has to know her, understand her first to realise where her happiness lies and the extent of emtional damage she is carrying.

I liked it the way you summed it all up!

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

ANGEL Z ...THERE IS NEVER TOO LATE N NEVER AN

UNFORGIVING CRIME ...YOU JUST NEED TO REALIZE IT N ASK

FOR IT OR RATHER BEG N TRY MAKING AMENDS.. A CLEAN

CLEAR HEART FELT APOLOGY N REPENTANCE N REGRET MAY

JUST MOVE THE DEAD HEART IN A LIVING BODY

I TOTALLY AGREE WITH HER DECISION N WITH HIS DECISION

THEY HAVE A LONG LONG WAY TO STAND BY THE RIGHTS N

WRONGS IN THEIR MARITAL BLISS

WAITING TO SEE HOW THEY STAND FIRM N WIN

THANKS FOR THIS LOVELY UPDATE SO WELL PUT IN WORDS

FULL OF EMOTION PASSION N SENSITIVITY

KKKA

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

fabulous description of their POV...

different path but same goal...

Khushi is so brave and fighter, i am sure she will overcome of it...

now eagerly waiting how Arnav is going to win her trust...

pl update it soon

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Loved both their POVs.

Arnav has a tough task cut out for him. In reality he may never be able to redeem himself. But in FFs we always wish for happy ever after.
So I hope that even though it is mammoth task, Arnav will do his best.

As for Khushi, I am glad that she decided to be stronger and cry no more. Also very happy that she analyzed and realized she was not at all at fault for whatever happened. I am really looking forward to seeing a strong Khushi. 😛