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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..nams..

thank you so much for likes and reviews!!

but readers r reducing :(

if you keep updating with such a speed readers will definitely reduce
But don't worry keep writing for those who still love ur FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
Friends,
Nams told me that may be she is going to update today!! 😃

Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
And Thank you everyone for your likes and reviews! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 5




Macau.

Somewhere between the farthest coast of Hong Kong and Macau coastal region, there lies an abandoned island hiding from the tourist and government eyes. The island mostly constitutes the dense forest and ample number woods that's best for building anything and everything. The mild humidity and cool temperatures allows the climate suitable enough for tourism. But the animals adorning the forest had made it an invisible island.

A kind of place that was best suitable for training. Training of sleeper cells!

In the centre of this lonely island, few blocks of houses that were built using thin line of woods stood with all the glory. Anyone who gave it a second glance could say it no where looked like a mere house, but more like a shed. Between the woods covering the complete forest there were guards hiding behind trees, bushes, sitting upon the tall branches, hiding inside the sand; they were on constant watch looking for anyone who would enter the forbidden land. They were soldiers, soldiers who didn't protect the land but their clan. A Clan of terrorists!

More than hundreds of men and women wearing dark green shirts and pants stood in rows their hands held back. There was commander who was embarking orders at them, their focus was crisp and clear the words that were being barked at them. They all had the determination and concentration plastered on their eyes! There was no distraction as though they were puppets. They looked hypnotized by an unknown force.

Inside one of the warehouses that lined behind the trees, there were thousands of people involved in processing drugs. The drugs that were being exported to different parts of the world! The warehouse had the underground. The basement that was built against the sea beneath! There were numerous circuits and many engineers worked in making what seemed like Bombs.

Adjacent to it there was a chemistry lab, were most of them worked constantly mixing different chemicals and processing them to yet again what seemed like Cyanides/Bombs.

Just outside the lab there was a cabin were few men were working on their laptops. A tall man in his late twenties entered the cabin with bunch of papers in his hand and placed them upon the desk were a boy in his early twenties was busy in his laptop. He looked up to see his senior standing infront of him.

"Hello to you too senior!" he muttered pulling the sack of papers giving them a careless glance.

"New recruits!" his senior said in an authorative tone before pulling out a cigar. He half sat upon his desk and lit his cigar.

"Why is it here already? When are we recruiting them?" he asked his senior.

"Boss asked me to. They will be recruited in an year or so. Make sure to clean all their history from all the databases."

"Aye Aye captain!"

"Rohan!" senior's voice was stern.

Rohan held his hands up in surrender, "No jokes got it!"

"Sanyukta ?" Rohan asked glancing at her profile.

Senior shrugged "she is getting recruited? And here I thought you might have hid her somewhere far from all this"

Rohan's chuckle earned him a death glare from senior. Rohan frowned. That's when the senior started laughing.

"That girl was something. But dude as she used to say, this is her destiny!" senior winked at rohan and they hi fived.

"Alright!" rohan started checking out the profiles as both of them started walking outside. Outside infront of one of the bamboo houses a guy was pratcing his moves -Tai Chi.

"he is perfect!" senior said taking the blow from his cigar.

"For?" rohan asked now looking the person who was engrossed in his practice.

"Sanyukta!"

"what?" Rohan looked at senior as though he grown two heads "you are kidding me right? He is an amateur!!!" to say rohan was jealous was an understatement, he actually loathed that guy!

"He is the only person to whom Sanyukta listens to! Lets send him! Get things ready. I will talk to boss."

Before rohan could object senior had gone. Rohan let a long puff of air in frustration, when he turned to leave the guy stood infront of him. How did he manage to reach there in mere fraction of seconds?

Startled rohan dropped the papers on the ground. Just like the guy whisper-warned at rohan "Don't come in between me and her! I know you hate me, I cant help that but-"

He made some random marshal art moves that made rohan jerk back "Stay out of my way!" he growled at rohan and left. His speed! He had a speed of a fly! Damn that guy! Rohan thought.

"whatever!"

Rohan started picking up the papers from ground. All the profile of once innocent youngster laid there. The last but the most important profile had the name written as -Randhir Singh Shekawath.


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I know short update and no SanDhir scenes, but this was much needed for background score. and yes i also know many of you by now might get confused with so many characters but as story progresses on only main characters will be focussed, im sure you wont have any trouble by then.


readers are reducing, even though its quite disappointing, its alright until the regular readers keep supporting me.

sorry for delay guys, but engineering life is no joke. especially when you are in pre-final year and within next two months you will be seniors of the college. its hell i tell you!


And please add Sunshine_Bliss to your account for pm notifications

read and review!!

love

-nams! :)

Edited by ..nams.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
will unres after a week
bcoz going on a vacation!!
if i get time bfor that then will unres
Sowwie!!
Edited by ShefaliMalhotra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god so both RD & sanyu are sleeper cells..& are drug addict...
& the tai chi guy...he is parth right...
i won't mind chapter without sandhir...bcz it is important for the story..
as always one more awesome update..
eager to know more...
update soon😊
Edited by sandhir.candy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhir.candy

res

if possible PM..
many readers have no idea you are updating...bcz you have updated 2 -3 parts very late


i send out pms for all my updates. last time i had no time due to my internals so couldnt pm. but ive sent out pms for the updates anyway.

thanks.

unres soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres


Heya Nams, a nice short one but was necessary to move the story forward. Work comes first so keep working on the priorities and then give a bang on update, eagerly awaiting for SanDhir scenes. Thank you so much for posting this despite your busy schedule. Lots of love xxx
Edited by mariya.kamran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nammy bada wala res😃
I LOWE SADDA HAQ and I never knew u were writing about them😳
gonna be back soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
thanks for pm

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