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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot dear
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I love your story..I just wish you wrote this as an FF 😒 Very emotional and of course am waiting for their reunion...hopefully Astha cools down by then 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

I love your story..I just wish you wrote this as an FF 😒 Very emotional and of course am waiting for their reunion...hopefully Astha cools down by then 😉



Thanks a lot dear, ya, i too had this concept s FF...but it is short of romantic material really... as being reader, after two to three updates, all need hot romance, if they continue as kids, where will be romance? so it would have got very less response in that case...
Thats why i chose it to keep short...
Don';t worry , will bring something else after the break...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomeee updateee and alsoo everything in english
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thanks a lot dear, ya, i too had this concept s FF...but it is short of romantic material really... as being reader, after two to three updates, all need hot romance, if they continue as kids, where will be romance? so it would have got very less response in that case...
Thats why i chose it to keep short...
Don';t worry , will bring something else after the break...


Oh I meant the grown up part after he comes back only 😊 and yeah our readers need romance water wala, fire wala and what not 😃. Waiting for the return of the queen buddy! Enjoy your break and come back energized 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Awesomeee updateee and alsoo everything in english


Thanks a lot dear, actually while writing i forgot, many people here don;t understand hindi...next time,i will take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower


Oh I meant the grown up part after he comes back only 😊 and yeah our readers need romance water wala, fire wala and what not 😃. Waiting for the return of the queen buddy! Enjoy your break and come back energized 😛


ya, that could be, but that will be almost like your old one... bachpan ke friends turned lovers...
i don't think, i will write so much...i think i will finish it at their happy meeting...
Thats all...next will try to write something dark...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thanks a lot dear, actually while writing i forgot, many people here don;t understand hindi...next time,i will take care...



Thankgod because i love too read your stuff yaar
When those hindi parts come mine head start hurting 😆
Cant read hindi , cant wait too read the neext paart :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.



Thankgod because i love too read your stuff yaar
When those hindi parts come mine head start hurting 😆
Cant read hindi , cant wait too read the neext paart :)


if i knew earlier, i must had amended first and second part...don't worry next time will take care...
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Posted: 11 years ago

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if i knew earlier, i must had amended first and second part...don't worry next time will take care...




Lool noo probleerm yaar ...pm me okeerr 😛

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