Short Story: Innocent Love...Part-1 to Part-6 - Page 62

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Finally got it...

Haye I missed this beautiful ss...Thanks jeenia you pm me...

Ok back to the update...shlok and Aastha's dream house...so beautiful imagination...sab aastha ki pasand ka pink pink...money earning kare shlok or use hi ghar me jagah nahi wah aastha...this update was so cute and dilchashp...

And 3rd update thoda mature update coz shlok and Aastha become younger children now...feeling raise in there hearts...shlok now behave like passive bf...and aastha don't understand this...kalindi and anjali's concerns was right...poor Aastha and shlok unhe superstition ka part bann na padd raha hai..."aaj pata chala dill na left me hota hai or na right me, dill to centre me hota kyuki aaj hume dard wahi ho raha tha...

and why shlok lie to her he knows very well she hates liars now wo naraz ho gayi shayad jab shlok vapas aayega use nayi aastha milegi...but marvellous updates...

Arz kia hai

Tumhara kya bigada tha jo tumne tod dala,

Ye tukade me nahi lungi, muje to dill bana k do...

Originally posted by: pt311288

just read this part
i was busy writing mine one

hm coming to story

baccha party and dirty rohit
😡

smart aai baba and understanding too

shlok left he didnt tell her
astha hurt to the core
😭
😲

loved the update
next part ???

Originally posted by: jeenia123

You know what ridzy...har update ke baad mujhe tumhari shayari padne ki itni buri adt pad chuki hai ke iske bina mujhe apni story dhoori si lagti hai...

thats why i specially pmed you to read my story..actually i got so lovely friends here, even if one form them is missing na, i feels her emptiness around...

ya, sachi mein shayd dil center mein hi hota hai aur unhe itna dard de rha hai...

let's see how she reacts... and shlok told her lie just because he could not leave her crying...may be he realized, something is there...

Originally posted by: sireesha76

lovely update

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Thank you jeenia...you appreciate me...aap ki kahani hi itni acchi hoti hai me apne aap ko rok hi nahi pati...I waited for your update inch part of your stories is amazing...and this is specially for you my dear friend...

Arz kia hai...

Teri yaad ka aasna hi to hai khzana mera,

Ki tuje bhula doon to fir se Faqeer ho jau...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">thanks a lot dear...ya just read now yours...loving that much more than my own creation...may be i will update one more part now...</font>

Originally posted by: pt311288

hmm thnks a lot di
waitin fr yr update

Originally posted by: jeenia123

just checking for spelling mistakes...