MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 49

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Posted: 10 years ago
it s nice story with possessive Maan

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Happy ending 😛
the pictures make us live thru stories 😊
Love that turned everthing of maan into happiness 😉
Nw waiting for blossom geet's love to start 😳
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WOW!! so beautiful maaneet moments...full of love & care ...can't believe that this beautiful journey of maaneet with us is going to end...but at the same time it will lead to the start of another beautiful journey with ur other future works...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AN EMOTIONAL JOURNEY OF GEET AND MAAN COMES TO END
IT WAS A WONDERFUL STORY AND I LOVED READING IT
FINALLY THEY BOTH FOUND LOVE AND EACH OTHER
THEIR LOVE TURNED THEIR COLD AND BARREN LIFE INTO A HEAVEN OF LOVE
WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR THE LOVELY STORY
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i want to post in 100 page
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wow black pearl thanku so much
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Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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VANI DEAR HAPPY BIRHDAY TO U..TIS IS FOR U







TIS IS HER BIRTHDAY THREAD..WISH HER FRIENDS


VANI THREAD
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)







EPILOGUE






It was one year...

Anni was married to Rk,both settled in km..Rk too got stable in his business and made himself a name..Anni and Rk was having 3 year daughter Aanaya..Geet ki ladli..



Adi and pinky too married and settled..they blessed with a boy name Prajeet..Dadi was te most happiest person as her life was revolving around her two great grandsons..Yash singh khurana and Gurumeet singh khurana..



Geet was very busy with three boys , her two boys along with Maan who is making her life hell..Maan love to pamper his boys..they weer his world..he can do anything for them..Even though he became Maan for his family,he is still Te same terror Msk for te whole world who scares to face him..he is still king of business world..still girls long for his one look..but his gaze wont leave his Geet..his teasing and passion increase day by day making her to blush..

Maan how ever he was busy in his business he never forget to visit to Goa ..he will take his whole family to goa and mumbai every month..Ysk and Gsk have know who is father and they were familar with they nani's place..they love to enjoy in goa with other kids..Father got old but still he was looking after te trust and decide once small Maan grows to hand over te whole responsibility to him..



Guru and Yash was eye of km..they have been pampered by Maan and Rk..Rk love to spoil them..yash is like his mumma very quiet and soft..but Guru is just opposite same like his dada,typical khurana..his naughtiness increasing day by day ..he love to be in his papa's arms..yash love to be with Geet,



Today is their first b'day ..te whole km was decorated like a heaven..Geet gave them bath and place them on te bed and went to take bath..Maan was putting talc..yash was lying on his stomach chewing a toy..Maan applying powder on his bump..Maan always love to tease him making him annoy as he is mumma's boy..



Maan tap his bump: same like u r mumma

Yash look at him..

Maan: oiyee wat u glaring at me, took him in his arms carrying in high,glaring at Msk..



Suddenly yash opened his susu tap, showering on his face..it was sudden Maan have gulp some inside his mouth.. Maan was shock and look at him who was smiling at him..Geet who came out saw it and started to laugh..Maan glared at her..Maan's face was worth watching..



Anni and rk enter and started to laugh seeing Maan..

Anni : bhai yash has reduced ur work of taking bath

Maan glared everyone who were laughing, Yash was giving a puppy face..Anni & Rk took two boys to make them ready..Geet was giggling..at once they left..Maan hugged her and trying to wet her with his son's susu..Geet was wriggling..closing her nose like yuck



Maan: bahut hassi arrheye naa..u r son took revenge now its my turn

Geet: leave me Maan just now i took bath u made me to take again



Maan: tis for taking bath without me,waise ur son has already given bath with his susu..u have to clean me

Geet: Maan everyone will be waiting

Maan: let them wait..before she protest,he carried her to washroom



All gasp seeing Maaneet descending holding their two possessions ..Maan felt proud holding his angels..they took blessings from father and dadi..Maan hold Guru and Geet with yash,they cut te cake..te whole media capturing te future khurana's heir



After 5 Years

DSP school,Delhi

A Small girl is walking,suddenly some one tap her on her back..Girl got shock and look at te boy who tap her

Girl: Guru

Guru: yes baby

Girl felt embrass and angry: how dare u

Guru: just now u saw my dare baby

Te boy standing next to him: pls Guru lets go

Guru: yash u be quiet..how dare she will show attitude in front of Gurmeet singh khurana..now she must know wat will happen messing with Gsk



Yash: im sory deepali..

Deeps: u u u

Guru: ahan me me ,im GSK baby dont mess with me..te girl run away crying

Yes tis two boys are Maaneet ki boys Gsk & Ysk..all tis was noticed by two person..one with pride and another in shock..Maaneet came to pick the boys..Geet was shock to see her son ki antic and open her mouth to ground..Maan was proud seeing his son who was ditto like him



Geet: jaise paap waise beta..u only teached him naa

Maan: i dont need to teach him Geet..it cums in our blood

Geet: wat wat u said

Maan then realize wat he blabbered and showed his puppy face

Geet: i will see u later

Both boys seeing they parents,rush to them..

Geet: Guru wat is tat

Guru: wat mom

Geet: u made tat girl cry

Guru then realize his mom saw it and showed his baby face like Maan..all settled in te car

Geet: im waiting

Yash: mumma dont wory i asked sorry to her

Maan: mumma ki chamchi


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Geet: dont say anything abt yash he is very good boy

Guru: mom she is messing with Gsk..i have to show wat khuranas are..haina dad

Maan noods but seeing Geet,

Geet: better ask sorry to her

Guru: sorry or Gsk no way

Geet: wat u wont ask sorry

Guru: no

Geet rolled her eyes: jr dd

Guru: thanku

Geet: u u go to hell

Guru: thanku

They reached Km..Geet went inside ignoring te boys..three boys look each other and smiled

Dadi saw fuming Geet: wat happen Geet

Geet: Dadi Guru is getting spoiled coz of Maan



Dadi smiled: now wat he did

Boys came inside

Geet: wat he did,she told wat he did to that girl

Dadi started to laugh: wat Maan .. he is doing te same thing..but Maan ur son is faster than u..u did in 6 years..but ur son in 5 years

Geet: dadi u too laughing

Dadi: wat to do Geet its typical khurana blood



Maan raised his collar, but seeing Geet he tilt his head down ..Geet turned her face..Guru cant see her mom sad..he hugs and kissed on her cheeks

Guru: sorry mom

Geet look at him,even though her gussa vanished but pretend to be angry

Guru kneel down in front holding his ear: sory mom..i will ask sorry to tat girl..ab tho smile karo na..

he makes baby faces n geets lips curved..

guru:mom..achi se smile karo..why u r hiding it..



Geet hugs and smiles at him..kissing his cheeks: who taught u

Guru : dad said if some one mess with khuranas ..we have to show them their place

Geet glared : wat u teaching our kids

Maan rolled his eyes : i didt ask him to tap tat girl

Guru: oh dad u forgot..u too tap a girl wen she mess with u wen u r in school

Maan want to hide somewere to avoid Geet



Geet glared at him: how u know yash

Yash: dad only said

Maan glared at Yash,he hide behind Geet

Geet: dont glare at him

Maan : no Geet it came in flow

Geet: flow

Maan gulp his saliva fearing his sherni :Geet its not my fault..urs

Geet got confused: mine

Maan: if u agree for girl baby..then boys will became gud and their full concentration will be on her n to body guard her



Dadi giggled..Geet felt embrassed

Geet: Maan u r shameless..tis is te way to talk in front of our kids

Maan: boys do u want baby sister

Boys: yes

Maan smirking: then ask ur mumma

Boys: mumma..mom

Geet : first dinner and then sleep..giving a glare to Maan saying she will deal with him later..

They were having dinner..Geet was feeding Anni's 3 year old girl baby Aanya, Maan's ladli..Anni was giggling seeing boys ki face who were ignoring Geet..Geet was shock to see two boys didt make any fuss for eating..they even had their milk..Geet finished her work and was searching for them

Dadi: Geet whom u searching

Geet: whom will i search..my two devils..its time to sleep i dont know were they went

Dadi: they r sleeping in their room

Geet got shock: wat ..

she rush to their room to see them..she sat beside checking their heads whether they have fever



Guru: mom wat u doing

Geet: u slept so soon

Yash : papa said if we sleep soon..u will give us baby sister soon

Geet eyes pop: dds..now sleep..

she said sternly making both gulp their saliva..

Geet is cursing maan under her breathe n making the two sleep..

After they slept,she came to her room and saw Maan was sleeping..Maan who know abt his sherni pretend to sleep..Geet know he is pretending..she changed and lied on her side showing her back..Geet know he is acting..she lowered on him kissing his cheeks



Geet pouted her lips: Maan slept so soon..i thought pecking his lips..i think he is tired..Geet u have to sleep alone today

Geet said loudly n was abt to turn,Maan pulled n capture her lips for soul seering kissing: im always ready for u Geet

Geet pushed him: i know u r acting..thats why i said like that.. u r becoming so shameless

Maan roll his eyes: Geet nowadays u scolding me too much..ur love for me reduced



Geet looked at him: ahan stop ur nautankis..i know who u are

Maan: now wat i did

Geet: wat u r teaching our boys..u r spoiling them

Maan hugged her: they r kids Geet..just for fun

Geet pushed him: fun hmmm..making them to ask for baby sister..u r so mean

Maan: then wat i will do..im asking u for a girl,but u r denying..now ur sons asking..answer them



Geet: im not ready..two boys is enough..already u three making my life hell..one more no way

Maan hugged her: i want a pari same like u..

Geet: no and now i'm tired ..i want to sleep..she pushed Maan and lied on her side showing her back



Maan felt annoy and lied on his side showing his back..After some time Geet saw him,he was lying showing his back

Geet smiled: dd..she slowly turned and hugged him from behind.

Geet kissing his cheeks: gussa hao

Maan didt say anything

Geet pulled his cheek: Maan get up naa i want to say something

Maan: im tired Geet..u sleep

Geet chuckled seeing his nautanki: if u hear wat im saying all ur tiredness will vanish in air

Maan was annoyed and turned to face her: wat

he scowled on her irritatingly..

Geet sat and pulled Maan to sit

Maan : Geet



Geet took his hand and placed on her tummy and blushed..Maan saw her face and realize..

Maan got happy,shock: Geet wen

Geet: ..i skipped my periods this month..morning i confirmed it..

Maan ki happiness was over bound..he was excited to welcum his pari..he hugged her and showered her with his kisses

Maan: why u hide it

Geet: i want to give surprise but u spoil it



Maan: but i have to give punishment

Geet: wat i did

Maan: u were torturing me after knowing te news and u were enjoying it all alone naa

Geet smiled and hugs him..



That night he showered her with his love..the whole km was happy to hear te news..they took care of Geet..two boys not let their mother to get out from te bed..they loved the baby sister and started decorating her room..they were talking with sister..soon Geet gave birth to girl baby...PARI...My Maaneet ki Pari..

Their family completed with the arrival of pari...but their love still in air

After 5 years

Yash and Guru was 10 years..Pari was 4years..she was eye of three boys..She was mixture of Maaneet..Guru and Yash were her bgs..Maan was very possessive abt her...but still he want one more twins and running behind Geet making her blush

Maan was getting ready to kc..he was sitting on te bed and wearing his shoes.. a small girl crawls on te bed and closed his eyes from behind..Maan smiled and hold her hand like finding who is it




Pari: kaun hoon mein...in her babyish tone

Maan chuckled: hmm shilapa,

Pari nodes no

Maan: then sonali,no no ahana

Pari giggled

Maan: then im sure it will be Nisha

Pari tap her head : ufff papa budhu..aap mujei nehi jaanthi...its me pari

Maan pouted: oh god i didt..he pulled her to his lap and kissed her cheeks



Pari: papa today also u didt find me

Maan: hmm..then wat is my punishment

Pari thought: hmm then u have take us to park today

Maan: hmm deal

Pari kissed his cheeks: love u papa

Maan kissed her nose: love u angel


Pari: ok papa..maamu is waiting..im going bye

Maan: bye angel

She run out ,Maan saw Geet with his coffee..

Maan: tie tis naa,showing his tie..

Geet started to do his tie..Maan was drinking his coffee..

Geet: waise Maan who was tis sonali, ahana, shilipa, nisha..



Maan kept te cup on te table and with attitude: my girl friends

Geet smirk: thank god i will be free

Maan hold her: Geet

Geet: they will take care of u..i will be free naa

She try to leave..Maan pulled and hugged her waist and kissed her not letting to breath..after some time he left..placed his forehead on her



Maan: u r tied in this hell for all ur birth

Geet kissed his heart: My Heaven In Hell



Both hugged feeling content with the love..only their love..











THANKU ASH FOR TE EDITING PIC..LOVE U

Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

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