MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 31

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H2 - 51


Maan peeped thru to door to see wat his misty doing but seeing her cribbing,he cant control himself after seeing her cute pout , but waited to hear her cursing session

Geet was cribbing to her babaji : dekha babaji,he didt love me, dust dhanav ravan..here im sad but he is relaxing himself..i asked only golgappe for tat he denied like i asked stars from sky.i hate him


But suddenly a voice echoed in her ears: in front of u stars are nothing

Geet twisted her head ,both were looking each..but suddenly in front of Geet's eyes golgappe came,she came to her sherni mode

Geet : ahan cant buy golgappe u will get me stars..go out, came here to show ur style


Maan want to take her complaining lips inside his mouth and not let it till she struggle for air..

Geet : u only know to talk nothing else, U said u will get wat ever baby wishes but cant a buy golgappe for him..u dont love me..Geet saw him staring at her lips

Geet got angry and turned herself..Maan hold her shoulder and try to turn her

Geet snaps his hand : dont touch me..u said im fat and now not fulfilling my wishes,u dont love me..i know wen girls get pregnant husband will not love them..before she completes Maan just smack his lips on her capturing her lips..


Te kiss started slowly..Maan took both her inside his mouth and started to chew.. Geet was shock with sudden attrack but soon she too joined In te kiss..her respond made him to lose and increase his pressure on her lis..Geet, due to her hormones , she drown in te kiss wanting more..she pulled his lips with her teeth and insert her tongue...Both were kissing and they tongues were dancing inside each other's mouth.. tasting their sweet nectar..

After like ages Maan left her lips wen she was struggling for breath..both were panting..

Maan : I love my golgappe, smirking at her

Geet at once back to her sherni self pushed him and turned her face : dust dhanav

Maan chuckled : ok now cum lets have ur lunch

Geet : im not hungry

Maan : Geet don't behave like a kid cum

Geet : I said im not hungry

Maan sighed and carried her in his arms..

Geet was wriggling : leave me, im not cuming with u


Maan : chup chap cum with me or else I know how to shut u

Geet at once closed her mouth and glared at him..

Maan carried her down , she thought he will take her to dinning table, but he walk passed to entrance.. at once they reached to garden, he placed her down.. Geet was shocked to see they was stalls with pani puri, and all chat items, she look at Maan who pretend to watch other side


Geet know he have arranged it, she pulled him and kiss on his cheeks: I love u

Maan sighed : oh god , Geet pouted , Maan smiled and hugged her ..

Anni : Geet u can romance bhai afterwards now cum and have golgappe


Geet blushed hearing her and saw dadi and Anni sitting in a bench and having golgappe, she rush to them .. three ladies started to have they golgappe forgetting one soul stood away from them and watching them.. he felt happy to fulfll all their wishes.. he stood watching.. Geet saw him and gestured him to cum close..

Geet : Maan have it naa its very tasty

Maan : no Geet its ok

Dadi smirk : no Geet he cant bear tis much mirchy

Geet and Anni giggled

Maan : no its not like I can eat

Geet : then eat

Maan look at them , Geet forward te plate, he look at them, took one pieces and stuffed inside his mouth..at once he started to cough, it was very mirchy..


Geet got panick and curse herself for making him like tis.. she passed water and started to pat his back

Geet : im sory Maan I was just

Maan look at her : its ok Geet

Geet : I know I just teased u but

Maan holds her face : its ok Geet im fine, but pls don't eat tis much mirchy and make my baby like u

Geet open her mouth : dust dhanav

Maan smiles

Anni coughed : hello love birds we are also here

Geet blushed and hugs Maan ..they all had golgappe and pulling each other's legs..

At night

Geet was lying on her bed, Maan went to change himself and settled next to Geet..Maan pulled her and removed her tops,

Geet gasp : Maan wat doing


Maan : shh, he took some thing from te drawer and open te box, its was ointment which he brought in te mall.., he applied te ointment on her skin which was red due to her tight bras.. Geet felt overwhelmed and was abt to hug him

He stopped her : shh Geet tis is not te time to show ur love ,

Geet pouted and smack on his arms..even though Maan was aroused seeing her fully grown up breast but he control himself..he just peck her lips and went to washroom to wash his hands...he then lyed beside her, before sleeping he kissed his baby..Geet was staring at Maan who was looking at her

Maan pushed her hair strand behind her ears : wat Geet

Geet node no , kissed his nose : I love u. and snuggle inside him..

Maan kiss her hair : I love u and hug her tightly..

It was midnight

Geet woke up as she is feeling hungry and saw Maan was sleeping like a baby

Geet : here im feeling hungry he is sleeping peacefully, rubbing her tummy , baby ur father dont care for us

She was rubbing her stomach ,slowly started to wake Maan

Geet : Maan Maan, he didt get up, she went near his ear, started to scream Maan n n


Maan got up with jerk hearing her scream: wat happen Geet u having pain, say some thing Geet, I will call te dr

Geet showed her hand : stop

Maan looked at her confusely

Geet : im hungry

Maan got shocked : wat

Geet pouted : hmm im hungry I want to eat

Maan saw te time and her : u want to eat at 1:00 clock,

Geet : hmm

Maan rolled his eyes : ok wat u want to eat

Geet : hmm, she started to think

Maan : Geet : wat u want

Geet : take me to kitchen, seeing te ingredients I can say

Maan : Geet u want eat but dont know wat to eat, good cravings

Geet : MAAN

Maan : ok cum

They both went to kitchen

Maan : now say wat u want

Geet saw here and there took te pickle and started to eat : hmm I want to eat pasta, with mango in tat


Maan got shock and he roll his eyes hearing her taste.: wat u want to have pasta with mango ,

Geet pouted : so u don't get me, ok leave I know u don't lo, before she finish Maan close her mouth

Maan: enough i will prepare it, u sit, Geet was happy and showed her dimple smile

Maan : but were I will get mango at tis time

Geet : see in te fridge

Maan open te fridge and saw mango and raised his eyesbrows

Geet : dadi stored it

Maan was boiling te pasta, and cutting te mangoes ..Geet watching Maan and licked her lips seeing te mango..


Geet : Maan,

Maan : hmm

Geet : I want mango pls

Maan cut some pieces and gave to her,

Geet : Maan I want mirchy powder and salt for tis

Maan : wat

Geet : yes wow superb combination..

Maan gave a mirchy powder and salt..Geet mix te salt ad mirchy powder together and dip te slice in tat and kept in her mouth.Geet was enjoying her mango like a small baby got his fav candy..


Maan was watching her antics and smiled..he want to pull her cheeks and capture her lips which was teasing him..but seeing te pasta he went to cook it..

After Maan finish his cooking..he served in a plate and placed in front of her..Geet eyes twinkle in joy seeing te pasta with mango..

Geet kiss Maan lips : I love u and pulled te plate from him before he realize wat she did..Maan nodes his head seeing her nautanki

Geet : Maan I want to eat In our room, we will go

Maan : hmm,

Geet : hmm my pickle bottle

Maan : u want to have pickle with pasta

Geet pouted : hmm


Maan head spining ,seeing her carvings..but he cant say anything, if he did, te whole night will be navarathri..so he just zipped his mouth..

Geet : Maan carry me im so tired

Maan : Geet here I was cooking for u, u became tired

Geet : oh, before if I deny too u will carry me, but now u get bored of me,

Maan took her in his arms: now happy

Geet smiles : hmm, she was holding te plate and pickle bottle..

Once they reached their room, Maan placed her on te bed..Geet started to pounch on te pasta like she didt eat for ages..she was stuffling each bit ..


Maan : Geet eat slowly

Geet : hmm, wo, stuffing te pasta

Maan nodes and left her ..

Geet finished her pasta and tap her tummy : now u happy

Maan wipe her lips and feed her water

Maan : now u sleep Geet,

Geet hug Maan and slept..

Next day morning

Geet was sleeping, Maan was sitting beside her in te bed and browsing in his laptop abt pregnancy,, suddenly he saw Geet is stirring in her sleep.. He closed te lappy and kept aside.. He pulled te duvet away and started to kiss her stomach , talking to his baby

Maan : good morning baby,

Geet who wake up saw him, caresses his hair: gm Maan

Maan saw her sleepy eyes : gm misty.

Geet : wat u doing

Maan : I talking with my baby

Geet : oh, wat is tat


Maan : it is between baby and papa , mumma is not allowed

Geet pouted : Maan its not fair

Maan raised himself and came near her face : all is fair in love baby, he was abt to kiss her, but suddenly Geet felt like puking, she pushed him and rush to washroom, closing her mouth

Maan got panick and rush behind her , and saw her throwing , he hold her from behind and rubbed her back ,. After she throwed completely, Maan helped her to wash and carried her to te bed..


Maan started to shout : dadi dadi

Maan : I said not to have all tat stupid things see now

Geet : Maan pls cool down

He took his phone to dial for dr, Geet holds him

Maan : wat happen Geet

Geet : Maan whom ur calling

Maan : dr

Geet tap her forehead

Maan got more worried : u having head ache too

He was dialing te number, Geet took te phone and kept beside , Maan glared at her

Geet : Maan its normal in pregnancy,

Dadi rush hearing Maan ki scream: wat happen beta, she sat beside Geet

Geet smiled and glared at Maan who was staring at her

Geet : nothing Dadi I throwed up so he got worried


Dadi smiled : oh god Maan u made me sacred

Maan :dadi she is throwing and see her face how tired she look, but u both making fun of me

Dadi : Maan its normal in pregnancy, its morning sickness

Maan look at her and became silent.

Dadi pat her head : Geet I will send u juice drink it

Geet : hmm

Dadi was to leave Geet stopped her and said some thing her ears

Dadi smiled : hmm ok beta I will send thru nakul, hmm

Geet : hmm, dadi left

Geet saw Maan who became silent, she thought he felt and coz of they teasing, she leaned on him

Geet : Maan im sory I didt mean to tease, its normal Maan,

Maan hold her hand and kissed : Geet u have to bear so much naa, she felt his words choking

Geet cupped his face : Maan

Maan : yes Geet coz of me u have to , before he finish she closed his mouth

Geet : Maan pls don't say like tat, tis moments are so precious for every girls.. im loving my pregnancy..she took his hand and placed it on her stomach , did u feel happy wen u touch him

Maan nodes

Geet : for tat we can bear anything

Maan kissed her forehead


Geet : Maan if maa didt bear all is pain how can I get a dust dhanav pati like u nor he can get a angel like me

Maan glared at her: so u angel im devil

Geet nodes

Maan :wait I will show wat a real devil is, he was abt to pouch on her but stopped wen they heard a knock on te door

Maan signed, went to open and saw Nakul with tray, he got it

Maan placed te juice glass in front her : drink, she drank. Geet saw te a plate , she know dadi have send it, she want to eat tamarind so asked dadi, she send it.. she took te tamarind and started to suck it..

Maan saw she was eating something : wat u eating

Geet : wo its tamarind

Maan got shock : wat u cant eat it

Geet glared : pls Maan just shut up, I want to,

Maan : but in tat they didt say like tis, he took his laptop and started to look at te page which he bookmarked


Geet peeped thru and saw he was reading abt pregnancy, she felt overwhelmed and look at him : Maan

Maan realize he just closed te lappy, : wo

Geet kissed his lips : I love u

Maan smirkes: nowadays u r showering so much love on me, hmm

Geet blushed and hide herself inside in his chest, they stay for some time

Geet saw te time : Maan u r getting late for office

Maan just hugs her , pretending not hearing her

Geet pushed him : Maan office

Maan : wat is it

Geet : Maan

Maan : im in maternal leave, placing his back on her shoulder

Geet got shocked :wat

Maan : yes my wife is pregnant so im In leave


Geet : Maan

Maan pulled her towards him, Geet hold him

Geet : wat u saying

Maan : im saying I have to look after my wife so im in leave

Geet : but ur business

Maan : dont wory it will run, I will work from home

Geet : till wen

Maan : till ur delivery

Geet : but Maan , he closed her with his kisses

Geet pushed him : ok u enjoy ur leave I have so many work, she was abt to go to washroom

Maan hold her wrist : were u going

Geet : to bath

Maan : I will help u

Geet was shocked : wat

Maan : wat Geet u are getting shock like im seeing u for first time

Geet : Maan nowadays u became so shameless, leave me

Maan : Geet I said im in leave

Geet : so

Maan : I took leave to look after u, so from now on I will give u bath, before she protest, Maan carried her to washroom

As Geet enter she saw Maan have arranged te bath tub with roses ,



Geet at him : Maan wat is tis

Maan : bath tub

Geet : Maan why tis decoration

Maan : coz my two angels going to take bath

Geet smiles : ok u dropped me naa, now leave I want to take bath

Maan : who said i came here to drop u

Geet : Maan mazak chudo and leave

Maan : im serious , he pulled her towards him..Geet gasped wen he fan he face with his breath


Geet moaned : Maan leave naa

Maan : no, i dont like to leave my work in half.. he removed her dress

Geet felt shy and hide her face, Maan tilt her chin

Maan in his huskily voice : Geet open ur eyes


Geet nodes and hugs him.. Maan kissed her forehead and her eyes one by one , Geet just drown in his passion.. Maan too removed his dress and joined her in te bath.. Geet was lying on him.. both they bare body rubbing each other sending shivers.. Maan hands slowly started to trace her skin..He was gently massaging all over her body making her to moan his name

Geet : Maan

They both were lost in passion

Its was nearly 3 weeks..

Maan didt leave Geet for a sec too..he denied her to get out of te bed.. for each and everything he carried her or came to her bed,.. Geet got irritated with his care.. she shouted at him, but he acre damn, as he did wat he feel.. he look after her with so much care..

In kc, his presences is needed...as so many projects were pending due to his absence..After so much of shouting from dadi and Geet , Maan left to his office..Maan went to office early as he had a meeting without having his BF, Anni too went to her col, Dadi was getting ready to go to her charity. Geet feeling bored and carving for Maan, so she decided to go to kc

Geet : dadi can I take lunch for Maan

Dadi know wat she is feeling : ok beta but be careful


Geet got excited and rush to kitchen but dadi stopped her

Dadi : Geet beta be careful

Geet bite her tongue : sory dadi and went to kitchen to take lunch for Maan

Geet packed everything for Maan and her too, as she want to have lunch with him.., im a small box she took some pickles too

KC

She reached kc and all congratulated , Geet was surprised to see all wishing her

Adi : Geet congratz

Geet smiled : thanku bhaiya but how all know

Adi : Maan announced increment to everyone with one month salary and sweets


Geet was happy to know

Adi : have not seen Maan tis much happy Geet

Geet know him : : were is he

Adi :in his, before he say he is talking to some one, Geet rush

Maan's cabin

Maan and Ranbir sitting, they were silent

Maan : so wat u decide


Ranbir got confused thinking wat he asking : abt wat Maan

Maan : Ani

Ranbir shock to hear , he didt think Maan will ask him abt tis. He too loved Anni but didt want to take her away from her lovely family.. he is orphan and don't want to burden her with his responsibility.. she is enjoying her life, but he is still struggling to hold his position in tis business world.. he know he cant gave wat his brother is giving her

Ranbir : wat abt Anni

Maan : Ranbir, i not talking in riddle, Anni loves u and u

Ranbir : no Maan im not, I have talked to her to change so better look some one who match for her

Maan watching his face, wen he said look some one, he can feel his stiffness in his face.. he now know he too love her but wat is stopping him

Maan : Ranbir then u didt love Anni

Ranbir : no

Maan : really

Ranbir : yes

Maan : then i will look a guy for her, u have no problem

Ranbir was tightening his fist : hmm

Geet : why u lying bhai

Ranbir and Maan look at te entrance, Geet was standing..






PRECAP : LUNCH

NEXT PART:52, PG - 69

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Update Soon Nia
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Awsssmmm Update

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awsemm update maan caring for geet maneet romance maan talking to ranbir
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hmmm now geet will make agree ranbir to confess his love ///////////
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poor geet
golgappe nahi mila 😭😭
maan se gussa
abb dekhte hay manju pati kya karta hay 4 geet 😉😉
maan ka kya andaz hay geet ko mananeka 😉

wah geet ke liya golgappe ki dukan khol diya maan ne 👏👏
msk eating golgappa 😲😲
maan become so much caring 4 geet 😛😛
msk reading pregancy books 😃

awee geet ke ajeeb wish 😆😆
maan is in shock mood everytime 😆😆😆
chalo msk ne khana bana diya geet ke liya kuch bhi 😳😳

maan is in leave hein 😆
dadi n geet finally sent maan to office
but now geet missing maan 😳😳
chalo geet kc

maan talking to ranbir
but ranbir kuch bolta hi nahi
maan can understand his feeling
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awsme update,oh geet ke ajib moods.. Maan is on maternal leave..wow,and lolz,waiting 4 next
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So lovely !!
MG is so adorable .. loved their moments !!!

Awesome chapter
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loved t di jus njyd the pamperin maan n his crazy wifes mood swings omg evn maan can crack witty commnts he he tskin leav fr maternity waiting fr the lunch
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maan arranged food chat and pani puri stall geet saw maan and kiss him anie teased maaneet all thrir eating pani puri geet worried maan health and care agein mid night she hungry maa prepared her like food maaneet romantic bathing nice geet went to office all staff congrats her she heard ranbir maan conversation lovely update

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