My *KR OneShots gallery* 2nd OS(Pt 2) pg14(1/19)

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awsome os smita
Par aise nahi karte dear
Itna happily read kar rahi thi aur enjoy kar rahi
N itne interesting point pai rok diya not fair
2nd part jaldi updt karo
Can't wait to read
Updt sn

Edited by zina.92 - 11 years ago

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unisha

@unishaz

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

cute n quiet funny one.. Love it..

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ramya.sri

@ramya.sri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

resss

dii continue son

tab hi comment karunge

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Omggg
dedicated to me? ME? Like seriously ME?
Yaaayy
thankyou so much 🤗

haha thats amazing os
totally the friends type
i loved it
and swayam is great...hehe mast jala raha hai rey ko
super job
and the best part is whole gang is helping him :p

gosh i loved the end
am sensing some amazing fun in the part 2 of this
plz write soon

Thanx for the pm

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susi

@susi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

🤣🤣

I was literally rolling on floor imagining Rey's(Kunwar) expressions hearing Paul calling Kriya as sweetheart

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

amazinggg os di!!!

loved it!!!

title padh kar I was like kya hoga present track se frnds se related os...

par wen I started reading it!!! Baap re itna awesome!!!!

gang full on masti!!! Itni taang kheenchi mast!!!

rey ke feelings awesome!!!

and den he immediately stops Vicky!!! Hahahhaaa

ND den swayam ne paul ka topic Lia awesome!!!

rey ke expressions... And kria apne aapko justify karne ki koshish...awesomeee...,,...

ab am waiting to see reys reaction jab kria Paul se baat karegi... 😛

and the attaching of words awesommmeee!!!!!

and di throughout the update I was laughing!!!!😆

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

That was real fun...

do continue... :)

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

fab update
Loved d Kria n Nicky bros scene...👍🏼
Rey ne toh Shock diya...
Directly announcing dat dey r a couple...
OMG...😲😲

just love d os

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Shrutiagarwal

@Shrutiagarwal

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Plzzz smita update soon n i loved it espiecially rey frustation n jealously towards paul

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

OMG..

this s awesome os..

gang plan to to know rey's feelings n work things according to help KR patch-up..

rey became possessive n said indirectly that only he has right with kria..

loved d convo of gang with kria regarding paul n rey's angry hurt helpless expressions..

gang enjoying this side if rey n OMG did paul say sweetheart.. waiting to c wats gonna happen next..

update next part soon..