My *KR OneShots gallery* 2nd OS(Pt 2) pg14(1/19)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey people. I am back with one more thread of my writings :D. I know have many pending stories to update.but this thread is something different. Here I will write one shots on kriyansh current track. Whenever I feel like writing something on current track I will write it here in the form of os. So all my oneshots on kr(current track) will be updated in this single thread itself. hope you guys like my idea.

Thank you.:)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

1St OS: I won't let you go this time (scroll down)

2nd OS: Har ek friend jaruri/kamina hota hai
Part 1
Part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice thought...baki yaha nai bolungi
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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First OS : I won't let you go this time

The scene starts from rey bringing kriya to his home. After sometime the gang(d3) comes to rey's house to meet her. Everyone speaks with kriya very nicely for the first time. She feels really happy that finally she got her friends back in her life. But 3 people were silent throughout the conversation. Vicky neil and rey. Vicky neil were guilty because they were the reason for kriya's this condition and rey was silent because he feels that because of him kriya is in this condition.

After sometime when everyone were leaving

Kriya : neil vicky can I talk to you guys for two mins?

Everyone looks at them. They leave but rey tried to protest kriya

Rey : aaah..kriya

Kriya : dont worry rey...please

Rey too leave from there closing the door..

Kriya : Vicky neil come sit..

They were hesitant..

Vicky : no itz okay...

Neil : yeah we are fine...

They were standing infront of kriya looking down feeling guilty.

Kriya : huh.. guys come on. Chill. You guys has not done any crime. Dont feel bad like this.

They both look at each other then at her

Kriya : yeah. You guys haven't done any crime. Whatever you guys did was for rey's happiness so that's okay for me. I know the bonding you both share with rey. It's natural aap log muje bhagana chaho yahan se.

Vicky neil felt really bad. The way they had impression about kriya was totally wrong.

Kriya : I dont know why I am feeling like to tell this to you but I will tell you guys everything I mean mere yahan aane ka main reason. May be you guys will feel relief after knowing the truth. But you guys have to promise me that you will not share this with rey or anyone. Please

Vicky : but kriya maine aajtak rey se kuch nai chupaya hai.

Neil : yeah we can't promise you anything..

Kriya : hmm may be I should ask this question at the end. Shayad tab tum dono meri baat maan jao.

Kriya : anyways..that's okay..huh...guys main yahan pe wapas iss lie nahi aayi hoon ki rey ko kisi bhi tarah hurt karoon ya unhe purani baatein yaad dilau ya phir unhe nicha dikhau..I came here to fulfil his dream. Dance academy ka dream..

Vicky and neil looks at each other.

Kriya : yes guys. Main bas unka ye sapna pura hote hue dhekna chahti hoon. I am not saying that rey will not be able to open dance academy without my help. He can. He will because unke paas aap jaise friends ho and aap sab ka support hai unhe. He doesn't need my help at all. Aaj nahi tho kal wo jarur succeed hote dance academy open karne mein but muje ek chance mila that I can take his dream to the next level. International level pe leke jau unke ye dance academy idea ko. Tho I just used that opportunity and convinced my institute about this tie up and came here.

Kriya : trust me guys ye dance academy jitna important aap logo ko hai utna hi muje bhi hai. Rey has suffered a lot in last few years. Because of me and because of ta...(she couldn't complete her sentence) and aur bhi bohot kuch challenges face karna pada unhe last couple of years mein. Jo rey bilkul bhi deserve nahi karte the. I just want to see him hap(she realises what she is saying unknowingly)

Kriya : ahh..I mean you guys dont have to worry I wont harm rey in anyway this time.

Vicky : if you care for him this much, then why did you leave him last time? Why you ditched him? Dont mind but I can see the concern for rey in your words so I am just curious to know the reason

Kriya : majboor thi...I had to go from here. And I didn't have any hopes that I will return back to rey..aa..I mean return back to my friends here.

Neil and Vicky couldn't understand what to say. Now kriya was avoiding eye contact with them but they can see the tiny drops of tears in her eyes. They understood that she was not to blame for whatever she did with rey or their friends in the past. There is some reason behind it that she left everyone in past.

Neil : we promise you kriya...will not tell anything to rey..

Instantly vicky and kriya looks at him.

Kriya : thanks

Neil : take care..chal Vicky

Immediately the person who was standing outside the door wipes his tears and runs downstairs..

Swayam : are rey..kahan reh gaya tha tu?

Rey : guys I need to buy some medicine for kriya. I will just be back. Bye (without waiting for their response rey runs out from there)

Swayam : isse kya hua.

Later they all go to college and gets to know that international institute is not happy with their annual day performances and they are not going to do any tie up with st louis college. And unhone kriya ko wapas bulaye hai NY.

Rey and the gang feels really upset. More than for the tie up got cancelled, they feel bad for kriya will leave them once again. They all decides to go to rey's home and spend some time with kriya as she may leave very soon..

Kriya was sending some mails to her institute, the gang enters to her room with sad faces and sits on her bed..

Kriya : guys kya hua.? Aise sade hue faces kyun banaye hai sab ne?

Sharon : shut up kriya. Dont try to cheer us up. We know that you will leave us

Simmi : again

Vicky : aaj subh tho thumari baatein sun kar kitne kush hue the main aur neil..

Neil : haan aur kitna kuch planning bhi banaye the.(as soon as he completes the sentence gets a tight slap on his back of head from vicky)

Kriya smiles knowing vicky and neil were planning something again but she knew this time it was not to hurt her.

In that moment rey enters with soup for kriya. He gives it to her and tells her to have avoiding looking at her completely but kriya's eyes were only on rey's face. She can read him very easily.

Rey receives a call and gets more irritated.

Rey : disgusting. I can't believe ki college authorities aise decision lenge.

Swayam : what happened rey

Rey : they are saying since this tie up is not gonna happen and kriya has to go back tho she will have to vacate college guest house.

Sharon : what itni jaldi

Simmi : sick

Rey takes kriya's handbag and takes out guesthouse key

Rey : bharat amar rinni and aashi aap log aaj night tak kriya ke saare saaman yahan shift kardo. She will stay with me now onwards.

Kriya looks at rey with moist eyes.

Sharon : par usse tho ek bar pucho. How can you decide by yourself ?

Rey : uski koi jarurat nahi hai. She always takes a wrong decision aur har chees messy bana deti hai.

Swayam understood what rey meant. He chooses to keep quite and see more drama coming next.

Sharon : what ? Rey you can't do this. Let her take her own decision.

Rey : no. I will take every damn decisions about her life here on.

Vicky and neil looks at each other and smiles.

Kriya was just smiling looking at rey with tears in her eyes.

Sharon : rey par

Rey : no Sharon. Bahot karli hai isne apni manmaani. Abb aur nahi.. and guys chill kriya kahi nahI jaa rahi hai. Wo humare sath humare college join karegi.

All (except swayam and kriya) : what?

Rey : haan and (looks at kriya who was looking at him with moist eyes and a small smile)

Rey : and (without breaking the eyelock with kriya) we are couples from today..

"What? ?" This time it was kriya who shouts. Others just stands there shocked

Kriya : rey..ye sab...kab ? ...Kaise?...kisne decide kiya? ...ye kya bol rahe ho aap?...par rey

Rey :shut up(shouts at kriya and silences her) today morning before returning back to hospital I went to guest house remember? To bring your necessary stuffs. I saw my jacket on your pillow, the same jacket which I gave you while returning from Shivam's party. Saw our(kriya and rey) dance fest photo below your pillow on which you have written "I love you rey" and date mention kiya hai the day you broke my heart, the pre Valentine's day. Saw the dress I gifted you in your wardrobe. Saw many jakets in your wardrobe with tags when you bought them for me.

Kriya was totally shocked to here all this. She has not expected the truth to come out like this.

Rey : and heard your conversation with Vicky and neil in the morning. And that day in hotel, your new year resolution ...(pause for few secs) I can relate everything now.

Kriya : rey I wanted to tell you the truth but aapne kabhi muje mauka hi nahi diya.. I tried..many times..

Both rey and kriya had tears in their eyes..

Rey : I know..but I don't want us to discuss our past anymore. Jo important hai mere lie, hummare lie, wo main jaan chuka hoon.. soo...(taking a long pause, without breaking the eye contact) let's start everything from the beginning...once again.

Sharon : but rey...kriya ke future ke lie uske carrier ke lie uskI apne institute, NY mein degree complete karna hi teek rahega.
Kriya : Sharon I have already informed the institute that I will not come back and main institute chod rahi hoon.

Sharon : what ? Listen kriya it's not a wise decision. Practically socho. Emotional hokar koi decision mat lo.

Kriya : no Sharon. Last time main majboor thi. Mom ko kuch promises karne pade the and unhe fulfil karne muje yahan se hummesha ke lie jana pada tha. And uske lie(looking at rey who was already staring at her) bahot badi keemat chukani padi thi muje.(looking back at Sharon) but life ne muje aaj second chance diya hai. Main usse khona nahi chahti. Nothing is more important to me infront of what I got today (looking at rey). Abb kuch achieve karna hai tho sath mein karenge

Rey nods at her smiling.



Done..
Please leave your comment..as it is first one I need motivation :P..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dats grt...
Will be waiting fr d first OS...😉
Unresd...

Awesum OS...

Loved it...

Loved d Kria n Nicky bros scene...👍🏼

Rey ne toh Shock diya...
Directly announcing dat dey r a couple...
OMG...😲😲

Me dancing...

Do cont soon...
N thnks fr d pm...

P.s. keep pming me wenevr u update dis gallery...😉
Edited by princessSonia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os dii...
Amazing concept...
I loved the part where kria was sharing some of her secret with nicky bro...
Right amount was disclosed to them...
Beautiful patchup...
Simple nd subtle...though logical...
Very well penned down
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u started a one short on current track it was mindblowing and brilliant os... loved it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS !!!
Loved it !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os
I was smiling madly through out the os
Kash aisa hota
Yaar srsly os was so good
Reyaansh haq jatana is so adorable
Nicky bro's are too funny
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😛 😛 Beautifull every thing was just 2 perfect loved it next bhi post kardena pls 😊 😊 (Y)
awesome great job 👏

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