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sumana561

@sumana561

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Awesome start...loved it..
Loved this straightforward approach of contract mrg...so simple without much drama..
After reading prologue ,I actually thought of many reasons for this mrg... like nani being on death bed,anjali's emotional blackmails etc...but this one was awesome...
Loved their first convo. which turned out into a verbal war...
Arnav is amazing...he is so confident about this mrg!!
Khushi is indeed very strong...eager to know for how long she can.resist his charms!! 😆
And how did arnav knew her surname in their first meeting???is it something I missed bcoz of my sleepy head!!

Edited by sumana561 - 11 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

wow - juhi - u updated - I just left a waiting note - great news

thank u dear

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

oh juhi, iam so sorry

I didn't see u resing dear

very sorry

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aysh05

@aysh05

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

I had promised myself that i will not get involved with Arnav & Khushi in a new story, I promised myself that after the current reads end... That will be all...

Then expel you wrote another one ...

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Oh my god, your writing is so fabulous. You had me hooked onto your other stories, and now I'm hooked onto this. You have a natural talent for bringing an insane amount of sexual tension into a story without any sex or descriptions of people staring each other down with heated looks in their eyes. It's phenomenal.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Wonderful chapter Expel!!!
M always a sucker for 'Arshi in Arranged marriage' based stories! And the way you are narrating this story has simply got me hooked to it!
M really liking this character of khushi! Straight forward, practical, direct, calls spade a spade and not at all delusional! There are no complexities here! Payal on the other hand seems a weak character! Perhaps being shielded all her life n away from harsh realities of life, she couldnt become as strong as khushi! Its not entirely payal's fault too, she has been moulded like that only!!

But i really liked khushi' outburst! She spoke so much sense when angry! I thought payal would be ashamed of herself and realise her mistake! But no she seemed to be sulking! Khushi shudnt evn have gone to placate her!

N i loved A n K's meeting! Loved their interaction and specially Arnav's confidence n charm! He is definitely charming!! Only that person will be arrogant if he has something to be arrogant about! He has charm, wealth, power, success, a great sex appeal! He has every reason to be proud n arrogant about himself! Y to be humble ya! He did everything on his own, started from the scratch!

Now what is going on in his devillish mind! Of course we know that! Lets see how he convinces khushi to say yes to his proposal!
N khushi never say never!

loved the chapter! It was a fantastic part!
Waiting fr part 2!!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

An unusual reason for the contract marriage ..I have read many FF's where A and K have entered in a contract marriage but its usually a forced one but here we have two mature intelligent individuals who has willingly got onto this contact marriage..

I am waiting to see how Arnav is planning to remain celibate for a year..I like this Arnav for his blunt questions ..I actually like him..

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#458

You have no idea how I am loving this story. It is going to be one of the best stories on this forum. Standing ovation.👏 .

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#459

unres!

i am loving it😊
this contract marriage was something that i was expecting. and the way they handled the entire thing was simply awesome. thanks to ur friend who challenged you for this, at least our curiosity is quenched. but certainly more has cropped up...

Part one---
the commencement of the update was a "jhatka" for me... i am stumped. 👏
Khushi and Payal's conversation the highlight of the update with Khushi stating the true facts and figures about Arnav Singh Raizada. and the entire story thus begins with the conversation being over heard.

loved how Khushi describes Arnav to payal and keeps her view point to the forefront and doesn't scum to to all the emotional baggage Payal throws at her. but in a way, Payal acts as the catalyst in bringing Arnav & Khushi face to face.
Also entry of Arnav in the balcony and bowing to Khushi and introducing himself as "Arrogant Womanizing Jerk " and accepting the "compliment"so whole heartedly was a golden feather to the cap.

i loved their convo and Khushi not apologizing to him and standing her ground was awesome.

Arnav coming to meet Khushi and he whole contract convo was another story altogether.
he planned everything so systematically and chose a "convenient" partner for his marriage was another thing i liked. i mean whole thing was weird but it was what it was.

Khushi choosing to be selfish for once in a life time and i think though it was that, it was also the in a was sacrificing herself again for a sister and a mother's dreams also her's too.

i thoroughly enjoyed it.

Part-2
uff, i am in awe with this Arnav & Khushi.
Khushi's acceptance to the marriage and her genuine questions were so justified and Arnav's answers to them were vice-versa. 👏
then there bedroom talk---
Arnav teasing Khushi and his shameless avtar in the bedroom were to die for. loved the boyfriend talk...
And again the mention of Red... why do i feel that Red will again appear in future...?

that has got me curious a little... and what will be there future!!! ummm...

will wait for the next update to know more.
Happy and safe journey to India
and enjoy ur stay!😊

Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago