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Posted: 11 years ago
ASR did give Khushi a chance.
And this made her confident enough to ask for permission to study further.
But I still don't see them getting closer as a couple.
And now his shouting at her will certainly not help matters.
Waiting to see the outcome of this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaawwweesssoomme Jagruti...N U also compensated for previous short update by giving us Chap 17's loonnggish update... I really liked it...It was heart warming to see Khushi putting her so much hardwork in presentation and then going smoothly with final task also a bit apprehensively...But ASR managed to calm her in his own way...Ahemmm ahemmm...Jagruti I was expecting a Encouraging Hug/Kiss from him for Khushi to give her enough courage for presentation...*wink* But Khushi amazed me when she stated about continuing her studies...That was a good decision though...And about SEARCH part...I m glad that she didnt catch glimpse of Arnav and Lavanay's relationship..otherwise poor soul might have broken down... Arnav's already sour mood and fatigue from work made him angry more than what was necessary...He didnt scold her for using his laptop but for searching about him... I m feeling like on a tiny cliffhanger Jagruti... Tthannnkuu soo muuch for PM.. I somehow got free Wifi in Another departmnt of Uni and Used it to logIn to IF and Then I got ur PM...A Pleasant surprise...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Naughty Naughty Katie...
U have used white shhirt THE WHITE SHIRT in banner...Fantasttiic...
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Posted: 11 years ago


1st of all I loved this banner .

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It really does justice to your story ..The Naive Khushi and the Rude ASR . perfect Combo ! So good Job Katelyn dear .
Now back to the Update .

I really loved Aman more than ASR in this one .. Donno know if I m wrong or something But I sort of felt disheartened that Aman rather than ASR "visibly" supported Khushi ..

She didnt need any help but a little support . And I think Aman really did stand for her ..
Ofcourse I wouldnt say ASR didnt grace her at all .. But it wasnt enough ..

Why does he have to be so Stubborn !
All He had to do was stay with her through all the processes ..Although a Big Thanks for you for making him help her for Once !!

Why dint u show the discussion between them in the Room? ..
I wanted to know whether he did lend her the much needed support ..

Well I might be wrong on the "support" thing . But I stay firm on that one ! Coz No matter what I found Aman as her Fortification while ASR turned out to be a mere Substructure .
(i aint blaming you But ASR ..You have succeeded in molding a Good character like Him.So pat urself for that ! )


To be frank I thought Khushi would turn out to be a Blessing in Disguise . But she really worked out well and perfect.She really did carry well ...But again I wonder what would have happened If she screwed badly .

I really am happy to know abt her plans of studying further .. Its one of the things on my "My Wishlist" . another one is to See the Old Khushi back ..
I find it really hard to gulp down this "silent" Khushi .. Its not the real khushi .. The real Khushi is the one who lived to full thrill back there at Bua's Place .. The Genuine Khushi ..



And now finally about the last part...

That was the last straw !!!
Man ! He definitely is a hard Nut to crack !!
What was that ! I m really disappointed with the way He reacted .

He needs to be taught that Courtesy costs nothing but buys you everything ..All he needed to do was to tease her for searching Him(Atleast thats what i expected) .. But Voila ! We have a Winner of Being the most rudest Personality on the Earth !

I dint get it why the Rude Reaction . Was it because the ASR-lavanya news or the fact that she quite naively wanted to know something about Him ..
Nevertheless, I really really did want to kick some shit out of Him for that ..Coz I read that Para disguising myself as Khushi . And Believe me it hurt miles .She would have felt so bad .Hate You Arnav for This !

You reminded me of the Scene in the show where He very easily says "Gift nahi toh tip samajhke le lo" . Trust me i cried watching that Scene ..so Rude ..

Anyways Nice Update in all .. I really applaud you for carving this Rudy Arnav and the utterly naive Khushi .. thanks .

P.S-
~Continue with due respect .
~Cheers for the PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.. there was a lot of change in khushi and for good... im glad she voiced her desire to study further... even after going through so much for her business venture :)
way to go khushi... oh i had thought tht khushi must have read abt arnav n la... but alas... y was arnav angry... she was not spying ...merely curious...
Thanks Aman for all the support!
lovely update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jagruti I love the banner
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Loved how arnav supported her to do the presentation. He is actually scaring her, even if he is trying to protect her. But how long will he be able to hide it from her, khushi becoming closer to lavanya increases the chances. Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Writers response

Okay guys, thank you very much all of you for reading with so much enthusiasm, I've been through all your comments and it's a pleasure to have such keen readers who really live the story. As ever lots of love to all of you hope you are having a great Easter weekend if your in a part of the world that celebrates it. Similar to last time I'm going to try and answer questions/ queries you guys asked in your feedback as best as possible.

At the moment Khushi does not know about Laavanya, she was very close to finding out but no but by chance she didn't get that far and I know all the speculation is around what will happen when she does find out as well as ASR's reaction in the last chapter which I happen to agree was uncalled for but if I am to go with the storyline in mind its kind of the way it had to go.

I knew I was going to have to dedicate an element just to Aman! He is was very important in this phase and I think his character is just likable.. I could defo just write an SS on him I tell you. ! Khushi and Aman have always jelled well yes I think she should would be better off with him sometimes.

@aayt Thank you for reading, how will ASR react when he finds out about her visit to Laavanyas I think I'm going to be a pain and not answer this because you will find out soon and I your correct when you say Khushi has the right to do what she wants. Of course she does and I don't think ASR has objects to that if that was the case he would have objected to her doing what she wants which is not the case. I would say he was in the wrong mind frame which is very naturally to us all at times. Having seen that ASR does have a sense of arrogance that tints thinks to look that way if that makes sense?

@ifsaal044 - very true, I loved your take on the chapter ASR is afraid of loosing Khushi to the truth after also loosing Laavanya, I think you'll get a better sense of ASR's feelings in the next chapter or so.

@tanu3579 Hey, not spoken to you in a while, will ASR relapse? I can see why your thinking this because the end of the last chapter certainly shows signs of the ASR you read about in the very first chapters of this ff but again I'm going to say sorry you'll have to wait and see.

@jyothim78 out of everyone's feedback I have to say I was most fond of yours because you read the chapter exactly the way it was written and I have to say I agree. As much as ASR has changed through Khushis presence in his life, is it so easy to just change the characteristics that are so natural to you? Those attributes of his, dominance, arrogance, all of those things that were part of him right at the start of the ff are still apart of him maybe a little less obvious and it is obvious that those grey things about his character still remain which will be bought up soon.

@nikita_88 will ASR tell Khushi? Lets see on one end Khushi deserves to know but I guess it depends on whether ASR feels it is of relevance especially as Laavanya was out of the picture before they were married. Hmm I'm not going to answer this right now but I let you think about about, is it relevant and will it matter to Khushi do you think?

@Javeria3991 ASR's reaction and tone of voice with Khushi unreasonable is one way to put it I think but haven't we all been like this once in a while but I do acknowledge the fact that it could have been handled in a much calmer way but ive already said I'm forming the basis for the storyline.

@ranogill A Khushi that can stand up for herself, be her own person I think we are slowly working towards that even if its one step forward and two steps back and ASR seems to be the reason for both the progress and the rift.

@suji5 What will ASR's answer be to Khushi if she asks him? I think at the moment ASR wants to keep it from Khushi for her own good which you will see in the next chapter. Ive not really made a firm decision so I can tell you as of now to be honest.

@ aysemLDG ASR confidence lectures worked and helped I can't dispute that at all although I would say as much as he helps he does jeopardize the progress with his behavior that's for sure.

@ Meerah14 Arnav is quite strict with her? Erm I don't know the right term is strict but I guess he is very firm character wise and not only with her but with others too but yes I see acknowledge the lack of romance and traits of a normal couple in the two which have been on and off ever since they have been married but again all I am going to say is it is to build up to the storyline I have in mind. Will he ever find out about Khushis visit to Laavanyas house I guess all things have their ways of making themselves known.

@Anamika100 Will Lavenya and her past with ASR even matter to Khushi ? that's a good question I think that's probably hard for even ASR to know but It will be disclosed in the Khushi in the next few chapters. As for Khushi still in awe of him I think that will be something that will where off in time especially if ASR behaves the way reacted at the end of the last chapter.

@LyssaPie Exactly that living a normal life like her friends are is one of the thinks Khushi longs for at the end of the day she is like any other teenager. Whether ASR will make up for his outburst is yet to be seen in the next chapter.

@..Neha.. Khushi hasn't yet come across anything which relates ASR to Laavanya she was close do doing so but didn't do but I agree Khushi should not been silenced by ASR's shouting, nor should she have to put up with him treating her that way but bare with me as this is all in aid of small turn in the story.

@hararnav I'm sorry everytime I start writing I never seem to get as far as I hoped. More confornation or at least aftermath in the next update.

@sarun22 Khushi intimidated by ASR, sadly apart of her is still intimidated by him yes which is not nice considering she is in love with him but how that is dealt with I guess you will see as the story goes on.

@Titaliya1234 ASR was dominating in the last part very much so but I guess sometimes words or actions are not as you intend them to be.

@bewuster slow progress ASR more like a dad than a partner?? Aw I don't like that comparison but I see where your coming from there is a lack of understanding and affection that he should give Khushi that's for sure.

@batgirl 67 why such a nerve wrecking cliff hanger lol to keep you guys hooked I guess and I hope it worked but I think you will like the next update. I think some long meaningful conversations between the two I think your right could do them the world of good but I have something else in store..at the moment anyway but I do change my mind now again.

@ 1987Trisha Khushi didn't even come across the links between him and lavanya so why was he angry.? Its similar to someone using their mobile whilst driving or drink driving... I didn't die so why are you angry?? an example I always come across with some of my friends!

@1chilly shouting at her does not help - someone tell him that!!!

@noro Thank you very much I'm glad it proved a good surprise.!

@Destinyhope0305 rude ASR indeed not only rude, I guess unreasonable and very unfair which you could say are the traits of a person in a bad mood which he was already carrying and then he came across this. His reaction was offensive I agree, more on this in the next chapter but i will say it was because the potential of Laavanya coming to light. What went on in the room after Aman left whatever it was helped , I kind of wanted that to one of those things that is left to the readers imagination. p.s I don't remember that from the show

@luvbug why was he angry? - it was only curiosity but like I mentioned to @ 1987Trisha above and you will see more of his feeling on it in the next chapter.

@Srilathalolla The banner was all thanks to Katelyn nothing to do with me at all.

@nnsunn he is scaring her how long will he be able to keep things from her? Time will tell literally..my next updates such answer this lol !

Edited by jagrutid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It cleared up some of the doubts..

And regarding whether Khushi will be affected or not,
I think no one can take their husband has been in relation with someone..
Jealousy strikes & moreover, she's a teen ager, hence it is more..
Whether she voices out to ASR, or keeps SILENT owing to her character...

Continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter...khushi is taking her first step to be independent...thanks for the PM

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