The King And The Nightingale/Last part pg 84/Epilogue pg 91 - Page 32

Beautiful...it was so picturesque ..sad the yuvraj died

So beautiful ...I could imagine all scenes ...

Fabulous update...
Nice to see them physically and emotionally attached.

as usual, i loved this update too.
what to say?
i loved Maharaja and his Mohi...😳
and their first kiss.!!!☺️
also his child's death was unfortunate.

about the note--- i am a confused? plz tell me, that the story will lately take a different aspect than Impenetrable Hearts? as you say happiest ending, you mean that Mohi & Maharaja will have happily ever after?

do reply to the above, plz.
will be waiting for the next.

noo matter how many tine i read it but it still feel like readinb it frst time

mohini you didnt really offend him
but he was too busy with matters of state
though how she is supposed to know that
she is the best thing that happened to him it seems though
who would he have had if not her when he fell apart after the death of his son
ahhh so the son dies huh
sad for any parent
not easy to overcome that
but he at least found solace in her arms
he could finally unburden himself with her
she gives him sense of security
and he can show his vulnerable side to her
but just her
gosh that was such beautiful moment when she comforted him
glad she was there for him
well interesting punishment it seems
he told her when he would be back
bless that moment was too cute
well love reading this again
forgot what had happened
but you just refreshed our memory
thanx to the person you are re writing it for

i cried when i read this part in TIH, and i cried today too while reading it...so heart wrenching part it is bt also a pleased one that the maharaja arnav at last found someone,with whom he can share everything and can cry on her shoulder, can find solace in her arms...
thank u so much for writing this part as a ss with more description adding! im loving it!

jen, that was super awesome dear mohi and arnav - what a blissful pair

I love this old world charm you have created in this. Her innocence and his patience give the romance an old world charm too. Two hearts who have seen so much sorrow are seeking peace, joy and love in each other.

loved the part so much. the longing, love, support and care which both of them are finding in each other is just so beautiful. felt touched to see how the maharaja showed his most vulnerable n raw side to mohini. felt sad to see his young son die before he cud even see life properly. will mohi ever get to become the maharani of raipur? only time will tell.inspite of the prologue, glad that u mentioned this story is going to have a happy ending.