Raesha FF: Finding Home thread 2 link added.. - Page 5

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

off course we can mridu...but revolving a story around only two people gets difficult,it needs side characters,so just using the other already existing characters,rather than introducing new...take it this way..thus whether its ariya/arakshi/arni or who ever it doesnt matter to the story...😛

read the prologue and give back your review...😊😊

Originally posted by: MriduB

Ouch! Y can't we get ShriZa then? Y every story has to get ariya/arakshi? Oh yes...majority readers r Arjun fans...so stories r incomplete without him! 🤢

Ohkay...go ahead with anything u want! Won't do much blabbering! 🤢

Oh yes...2 holidays! Hope, will be able to check updates of stories that I follow! 😳

offcourse we can...but i cant relate to this couple at all...so i am not using...and i have already planned the story line...tats y...😃

well Arjun is not compulsory always...but characters supporting the main two leads are important...😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

Nice CS...
Now, where is main course??
Starter kabka digest ho gayee...
do continue..

main course ka first plate abhi start hua...chalo tell me how is the taste...😛😛

Originally posted by: rinku95

Nice
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Nice CS

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome concept
Cont soon

thanks dear...😊😊

Thanks for the encouragement...here is the first part...have updated the CS on the first page do check...

ishita...here is a dose of your medicine.😃😃..no more emotional atyachar 😡😡


Chapter 1

Sameer closed the door and walked towards ayesha.She was sitting on the bed.Sameer went and sat beside her.He held her hand and called her,

'Ayesha,'

Ayesha kept silent and didnt move.

'Ayesha,mujhe pata hai tumhe yaha bohot ajeeb lag raha hai,aise achanak shadi aur fir ye sab kuch itni jaldi ho gaya,hum ne to ek dosre se baat tak nehi ki hai,ek dusre ko jante tak nehi hai,to agar tum kuch kehena chaho to mein sun ne ko taiyar hu,'

'mujhe apse kuch nehi kehena hai,'

'aisa kaise ho sakta hai ayesha??tumhe kuch to puchna hoga?mere bare mein humare bare mein?'

Ayesha pulled away her hand and stood up.

'kiya puchu mein apse?apne mujhse shadi kiyu ki?mujhe pata hai apne shadi kiyu ki.isi liya na.Is raat ke liye.thik hai ap ko jo bhi karna hai kar lijiye mein kuch nehi kahungi,'Ayesha said angrily and started crying,

Sameer was shocked at her words but he kept his calm,getting angry in such small reasons was not his nature.

'Mujhe pata nehi tha ayesha ki tum ye shadi nehi karna chahti thi.Per agar aisa hai to tumne mana kiyu nehi kiya?atleast mujhe to bata deti.mein mana kar deta.'

Ayesha kept crying.

Sameer felt helpless now.He went close to her and held her shoulders and cupped her facewiping her tears,

'Ayesha hum baad mein baat karenge,abhi chalo so jate hai,'Ayesha looked at him with teary eyes he continued,'aur meine tumse is liye shadi nehi ki ki mein...tum relax karo,mein aisa kuch nehi karunga,chalo'

Ayesha was looking at him numb.He was not able to believe this person.But sameer was serious.He freshened up and set the bed and came to her,

'chalo neend nehi aa rahi kiya?? kal subah baat karenge..goodnight.'

Sameer took one side of the bed and laid down.He looked at her one last time,smiled and slept facing his back towards the other side of the bed.Ayesha liked this gesture of his and she felt better.She changed and quitely lay down on the other side of the bed facing away from him.


Sameer woke up in the morning to find Ayesha sleeping beside him.She looked tired in her sleep.She might have had a restless night.He got up and without disturbing her,went to freshen up.He came of the wash room to find Ayesha sitting on the bed yawning,streching herself.

'Good morning,'he wished her smiling,

'morning...shit..'Ayesha looked at him and wished but then finding him just in his formal pants and without shirt,she looked away embarrased.

'kiya hua?'Sameer was surprised at her sudden gesture and asked her,

'Shirt kiyu nehi pehena ap ne?'Ayesha asked looking away,

'kiyu kafi handsome hu,aur tumse kaisi sharam?'Sameer said casually and walked passed her to his wardrobe.Grabbing a shirt he wore it.

Ayesha was looking at him angrily.

'This man and his attitute.God,i hate him so much,kiyu kiya isse shadi,'she was cursing herself mentally.

'itna khudko maat koso,chalo ready ho jao,breakfast ke liye sab wait kar rahe honge,'

'dekhiye mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai,aur abhi,'

'pata hai,mein bhi sunna chahta hu,per abhi nehi,bohot bhook lagi hai,chalo pehele kuch
kha lete hai,fir baat karlena,mein to hamesha tumhare sath hu,okay?'

'aap,meri baat..'

'Ayesha,jao fresh ho jao,mein niche ja raha hu,tum bhi aa jao'

Sameer walked towards the door,Ayesha was getting more angry at him now,but hardly had anything else to do than accept what he said.She got up to get her clothes when

Sameer spoke up from the door,

'Ayesha,ek request hai,please mere ghar walo ke samne hamari beech ke problems ko zahir mat karna,pehele hum baat karte hai,fir unko jitna zaroorat hoga hum bata denge..but please abhi kuch nehi.tum samaj rahi ho na?'

Ayesha nodded her head and sameer walked away acknowledging it with a smile.Ayesha went to freshen herself.

Sameer reached the dining table.There his family had gathered having their breakfast happily talking about the functions,rituals,gossips,some sarcastic comments from his Father, Aunty,his mother moving around chatting among themselves and preparing and serving food and his little siblings laughing and giggling among themselves.He went to them and sat down on his usual chair.

'Kiya hua bhaiya?Bhabi kaha hai?Abhi bhi so rahi hai?'his sister asked winking at the other siblings,

'nehi,fresh ho rahi hai,aa jayegi,'

'awww,'all the little ones started making a long tone with it..

Sameer glared at them looked at his elders.All were smiling at themselves.His mom served him breakfast but he waited for Ayesha to come.Everyone noticed him waiting with the food and started teasing him again.He was blushing and cursing them mentally.

Ayesha came down and instantly everyone's attention shifted towards her.Sameer's mom took her to the small temple in their house and asked her to pray and take blessing before starting the day.She was feeling irritated at all this.She was even angry on God for her fate and didnt want to pray again.But keeping her word to Sameer she agreed to his mother's request and quitely joint hands and prayed.Then took everyone's blessings and went to sit down for breakfast.

She kept silent and didnt even look at sameer once.She sat beside one of his sister and ate her food silently.Sameer's sister tried talking and teasing her but she kept a stern face and they stopped.Sameer looked at her parents and found them a bit puzzled at her nature.He ate his breakfast and spoke to his mom about going out with ayesha to show her the city,to which they agreed readily.

Sameer asked ayesha to get ready.She was surprised first but agreed to him.Both dressed and left the house.


abhi aur likhne ka maan nehi kiya...give back your feedbacks...😊

PRECAP: Sameer Ayesha convo..😳

Great CS
Awesome update
loved it
waiting for sam-aisha convo
continue soon

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Beautiful rimi

Amazing start

Poor sameer

Mujhe ye dekhke dhadkan ke akshay kumar yaad aa gaya 🤣

But his naughtiness was so cute

Beaitiful

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

ha ha ha goldie...but wo thora zyada hi acha character tha...😆😆😉😉

thanks goldie...😊

Originally posted by: skrafty

Great CS
Awesome update
loved it
waiting for sam-aisha convo
continue soon

thanks skrafty...stay tuned...😊

nice start 👍🏼..waiting for next update..😆

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

ha ha ha goldie...but wo thora zyada hi acha character tha...😉

thanks goldie...😊