ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
the start has been too sexy... i was hyperventilating sooo much...
they cant be without each other , m glad they are clear with their stand now...
rebel is a true hero... his sacrifice should not go in vain...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats on the new thread!
👏👏👏

awesome update my dear... feel sad for the horse and the dangerous they are with shaym behind them...😭😭😭
Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor rebel...nyc update...pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

So finally ... YESSS ... Oh NOOO ... tissues ready ... but I don't think I was prepared enough for Rebel's death !! he infact wasnt just their companion/protector but he was their cupid as well <3 if not for Rebel they wouldn't have had all those riding sessions !! ;) <3

But damn his final act was to jump in front of the bullet and take it on himself and thereby protect Khushi !! <3 he was ASR's true friend, protecting his master's lady love !! <3

I swear you bloody creep Shyam ... i will one day rip ur heart out and tear u limb to limb for doing this to Rebel !! how could u ?? and bloody twisted bas***d ... you wanted to kill Khushi coz u knew that would kill Arnav too !!

Now u wait ... you will get the worst death possible at the hands of the real prince !!! <3

Arnav's pain at the loss , Khushi's tears ... like you said T .. this death will bring them a lot closer than before ... Khushi wont let Arnav suffer this alone .. she is going to be his rock during this tough phase <3 plus the journey has turned more perilous nw ... them all alone with nothing to provide for them till they reach the northern ranges !!

But atleast now he trusts her intentions ... he knows her love is true <3 they are back to their old teasing self ... ASR knows that his Khushi is coming back to him as soon as she gets rid of the ring and the bond forced on her !!

The incident at the wedding ... it really rips open the pain and no one better than Arnav to understand that !! <3 so proud that they stopped it ... no child deserves to grow with that kinda burden whr they are tied to a person whom they barely know !!

Marriage is a matter of individual choice and no culture should be given the right to force it upon the person !!

ASR trying to make Khushi give in through his passionate assault but at the end he tells her that he wont touch her tells she begs him to do so ;) now thats gonna be interesting ... am sure Khushi will be made to sweat :P <3 and their talk about Lavanya ;) heart goes out to them ... Khushi knows by now that Arnav will never dream of another woman now that she has entered his world !! <3 she is the only one who holds his heart captive <3

All in all a beautiful update T and I loved it !! <3 keeps making me yearn for more !! <3 love you !! <3 hugs

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Posted: 11 years ago
I realy loved the way hw u made him trust her again. . Its Jus superb. .and making her agree to stay fo d wedding nd tn he stayd back. .nd him wanting her so badly bt stil Holding back nd wants her whole heartedly. .its so manly and genuine. .
but rebel being killed [:'(]

Khushi is the only soul he have , to find love and solace. .thanx fo d pm. .eager fo update reading the precap
Edited by divyaarnavsr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whist reading Desert Heat, I feel like I am watchin a movie with the plot unfolding in front of my eyes. Awesome storytelling!
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Posted: 11 years ago
loooved the update

loved the morning scene
arnav backed off imediately when khushi hesitated

those girls fooled khushi to stay back for the wedding
arnav was waiting for khushi for 3hourz
rebel didnt eat the apple which was given by arnav but when khushi gave he ate

and arnav was so jealous of rebel 🤣

awww arnav wrote A+K in khushi mehendi
i loved his answer

and the marriage turned out to be a child marriage
khushi protested for the marriage and stopped it. arnav too supported her
thatz when arnav truly understood what khushi is going through

now everything is back to normal

that shyam ordered to kill khushi so that arnav will suffer. they know that khushi is arnav's weakness
but rebel came infront of khushi and saved her cuz arnav was too late to protect her

then khushi ran but arnav found her

those bloody monsters killed rebel. not only that they took arnav and khushi's stuff
i am so sad about rebel

arnav and khushi both are really sad
but they have each other

will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
yay!! arnav and khushi are on the same page annd RIP Rebel <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Everything was going so well... The start, Arnav's support to Khushi, they were so good with each other, there was no more distrust and then the death of Rebel..

Shit!!

You made me cry gurl.. :'( :'( As much as I want to ask you 'why', I understand why you did that.. But Dammit!! It hurts.. A LOT!! And it didn't help that you showed the lovely bond that was created between Rebel and Khushi in this update.. :'( :'(

I hate Shyam..😡 I really hope he gets the same painful death that Rebel got.. But without any support like Rebel had in the form of Arnav and Khushi.. He sacrificed his life for her and this shouldn't go in wain... :'( :'(

I'm gonna miss him a lot.. Arnav and Khushi are in this together and I know Khushi's going to be with Arnav in all his losses as well as gains.. Rebel was a important past of Arnav's life but he's no more.. Arnav would now just need Khushi's love and nothing else.. *sniff* *sniff*

But what a impactful update it was... You did a commendable job.. It was heart wrenching but I trully and absolutely loved this update..❤️❤️

Ohh God, just let them be safe.. I wouldn't be able to see them hurt.. :'( :'(

Update soon...
Edited by deepti1906 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats on new thread...loved the update...continue soon

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