ArHi FF #11: Desert Heat *Ch 24 Pg 1* (Next thread link pg 1)

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12345abcdefg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

aww that wos so sad, poor rebel 😭. but a brilliant update as always,

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foreversarun3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

OMG...

I just read chapter 21!!! 😭😭😭

Thud...

It was sooo emotional

Sooo touching & sad!!

Poor Rebel!!!

He was killed by those evil monsters!!

I'm glad Arshi is ok though...I nearly had a heart attack when the bullet was aimed at Khushi!!

I love how finally Arshi is not fighting anymore

and how they finally understand each other!!

Although Arnav may not agree with Khushi's decision but he is respecting it!

I loved the way Arshi's moments were filled with undying love and passion!!

The update was beautiful, emotional, sad and very touching!!!

Absolutely loved it!!!

Please do update the next chapter soon cuz im spamming you very soon!! 😃😃

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sk2405

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

I so-so hate Shyam. That vile man couldn't stoop any low. Rebel was the one who stood courageously and unabashedly by ASR when he was in need and true, that he never expected anything in return. He had the most amazing master and undoubtedly did not think twice before sacrificing his life for him. And for this I hope Shyam is pinished and soon.

Child-marriage has tainted our society and you beutifully pictured it. I am glad the marriage was called off as it is high time a stand is taken against such malpractices and atrocities.

Their love is the purest thing. The way he respects her decision though its killing him and the way she soothed him when he broke down was heart warming. I hope their journey to northern reaches is not very difficult.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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Satina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

RIP Rebel 😭 You will be missed❤️

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RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Amazing Chapter !
Loved it ...
Awaiting the next chapter .!
:)

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

congrats for new thread
chapter was nice 😊
thanks for pm

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Peehu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

awesome update..loved it..

it was painful too...the update started beautifully...ArHi together...and then the attack...Did u just kill off rebel?? Why?? Rebel had been with ArHi since the time their started their journey together witnessing their love...pain...laughter...agony...everything...and now suddenly...

I really hope whatever happens in the future...ArHi dont separate and they fight everything together :)

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yafa2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

OMG...what can I say.. very well written.

So sad and emotional poor Rebel.

Thanks for the pm.

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moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Poor poor Rebel! He sacrificed himself for Khushi...😭

This was a beautiful, love affirming chapter. I'm glad Khushi spoke out against the child marriage. I am sad that though they're together, they have suffered such loss.

I really wish Khushi would give up on this crusade!

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melonie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Hi Tina..
Wishing you and your family a Happy and Prosperous New Year.
Thanks for the PM.
Beautiful update yaar. Glad that Arnav could let go off being so heartbroken and sad. Glad he could finally understand what Khushi was going through. I am happy they stopped young children from getting married. But they all agreed quite quickly...I know they treat Arnav as their king but still people are quite rigid in their believes and it's not easy to change their mindset. Good they were willing to agree with Arnav and Khushi.
But poor Rebel yaar. That was so sad and totally unexpected. I can't believe their support, their companion, their stallion is dead :(
How will they survive now..on the hot desert with out food, water, their tent and most importantly Rebel.
As if this journey was not hard... =(
Pls cont soon.