Arhi SS:What you will(retold)

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Wow...this is surely a treat ...gets my mind thinking ...

Loving it...Khush...the new ...Rock star in Raizada mansion...got everyone...dancing and how...

Raizada's expression being the best...

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Bavari

@Bavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

By each chapter you're making us more intrigued. Is Khush and Khushi siblings. Why he landed in RM. Awesome job. Thanks for the PM.

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Mints23

@mints23

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Res... have to catch up on last couple of Raga's too!!

Shall be back shortly!! 😊

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

very very intriguing...!!!

i sympathize with khush... he being in such a dire state , im sure , though she is taking advantage of the Raizada's generosity , its not with any vicious intent...

i have my own doubts regarding Khushz identity... i strongly believe shez a girl... also what i learn frm the latest update is that , her family had been quite a normal one with mamma , papa , her n her bro kishore...

under what circumstances she had to get into a disguise , what hpnd to her family is what i want to wait n read about ... :D :D

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Timing!! Be back later to unRes

Edited:

I want to apologize for being late to this but you posted the next one before I could process this!!! I am not used to prompt authors :P

Anyway - I come back to the play. Indeed the stage is being set for the plot to unravel. I see Duke Orsino's mind wheels churning and those hazel eyes with a flash of green wreaking havoc on everyone and around Khush.

Olivia makes an appearance and just as we know, is rather enamored by the young lad - much like the rest of the parivaar - interesting to see that Khush notices the not-so-normal ways of the betrothed couple - Hmmm

Will take one moment to applaud the man that was Shakespeare. How he changed the world with his stories. And helped you bring this to us!!

Edited by meera30 - 11 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awesome update👏

something is not adding up, eerything is very confusing😕

Lavanyah is engaged to Arnav but ther are not acting like the one. Perhaps he dont like it openly but he is ASR, he never cares for the world.

i like lavanyah, she is modern yet traditional. i dont like her in page 3 avatar.

Now the boy also have light green hazel eyes. I am constantly gathering Clues you are droping and they are making story intriguing👍🏼.

it is making me restless and my mind is wandering in different directions to predict what is going on behind the scene. I can't think hard enough.😳

Please dont take too much time to reveal the secret khush hold.

I hope the back ground check reveal something interesting about the quite observor, khush.

waiting eagerly for the next update

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

When I read the first chapter, I wasn't sure how old the young boy was and imagined him to be a little boy (under 10). Now it looks like he (or maybe she) is older and could be Khushi dressed up as a boy :-) That probably is more in line with storyline of Shakespeare's Twelfth Night.

This also reminds me of a story by Georgette Heyer called "These old Shades" where the heroine disguises herself to be a boy and is later the Duke's ward.
I am a big fan of Ms Heyer's books and this one and its sequel "Devil's Cub" are my top favorites.