Arhi SS:What you will(retold)

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Ok...even i m confused now...
Is he khushi's son ??...or khushi herself...

Wonderful chapter

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome update

By reading the story so far I am sure of one thing that Khush is in Raizada mansion for a purpose.

Everyone is present but where is Khushi?

Khush looks exactly like khushi, lively n talkative on every manner. He makes his place in everyone heart like once Khushi did, with in few moments He was so comfortably talking with Anjali and called Divyani Naniji. He even knows kishore.

He didn't told the truth about his family n also become sad when his parents were mentioned. The young lad is holding a very deep secret.

Is he searching his long list sister?

What's with the fiery flash which came as Payal said Patience is always fruitful. This dialogue used to spoke by Khushi, is she angry with Khushi?

Arnav is same, arrogant and in Greek God Avatar.

I am having a feeling that khush have a very close relation with Arnav.

Story is going great.

Update ASAP.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice update... loved it... but bit confused...

Is he the boy khushi's son or khushi herself ??? 😕

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Mystery and the questions only deepen !

Khush does seem like a smart cookie ...

but apparently Arnav and Khush were foxed to see each other 😲

Thanks ... mkalam ...

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Liking d way u have build this whole suspense...where is khushi?...everyone has been mentioned but what about khushi...khush's character is so very close to dat of khushi..who is he??brilliant update.

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Comment updated here

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Chapter 2:

And so we see Cesario, we miss Sebastian. Orsino is at the door and the games have begun

Is Anjali Olivia though...there's a thought...Somehow I thought you would bring Lavanya to that role...but yes this makes more sense.

I am loving this overlap of worlds so inherently different and I love the slight change in your writing to suit the adaptation of the Bard's work. There is polish, a little flamboyance and the hint of old English

You are quite the story-teller. :)

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow you are back and with Shakespeare no less. I was a bit confused after chapter 1 and had to freshen up on twelfth night. So our Kushi is in disguise looking for the other K (ki shore or Nandkishore? ). So the lad finds a friend in Olivia / Anjali. The duke is definitely here and our lad noticed the Greek god's look. Getting very interesting. Looking forward to Mami as feste!