ArHi OS - Aye Dil Bata - Page 3

I was also displeased with the track that followed this fight! I'm definitely intrigued to see your take on it :)

Great start cant wait to read the next update :)

That was so much better than what was shown. Please do continue and update quickly !!😊

Please continue soon. I cannot wait to find out.

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Wonderful os!
The way Khushi made arnav realise his Mistake and made him to open up! Just awesome!
One realize's someone's worth Only after losing him/her!
One day khushi decides to do a hadtaal of sorts and everyone's schedule goes haywire!
Everytime arnav hurts khushi and goes away with it!
Though they love each other but it hurts and May dampen.their realtionship!
Loved the way khushi dealt with it maturely!!
Great os

That was amaZing
Nice...
Thanks 4 pm

wow, that was wonderful, truly deep and emotional! i was getting choked up and wanted to kick arnav for again causing pain to khushi so unthinkingly, but it was necessary and u did this scene total justice. i love the way u took an originally disheartening fight and made it be the tipping point for khushi deciding 'no more' and trying to bring about the necessary change needed in arnav for their relationship to survive. i love how she was mature and wise enough to understand how he uses his anger as a crutch to mask his pain, even from himself, and how their love could ultimately be destroyed by this. she doesn't need to prove herself but she needs him to respect her. what an inspired if difficult way for her to get him to finally open up, reveal what lies beneath those scars, and start confronting it so he can begin healing. i love where u took it in the end, it became about love and trust and faith and something even more delicate and beautiful between them - understanding. lovely, meaningful and full of depth.