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Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I loved reading the os. Just loved the realistic approach of khushi in handling her arnavji. Loved your writing style.

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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Absolutely amazing!!!!
An apt closure to dat scene...I ws highly displeased with dat scene!!
I wish u were d cv!!!

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Sarita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

This was amazing!!
Was in tears while reading this.
All the inner emotions of Khushi and Arnav both were painted in between the lines that you wrote.
A fab job indeed. 😊
Loved how this shot panned out... it should have gone this way!

P.s. Just listened to the song... "Aye Dil Bata..." Its a lovely song... downloading it now. 😉

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Shilpa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Hi read this now. I feel like killing arnav during this track. I am really happy to read a better version or continuation of it.

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-SOBTIAN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

This is an amazing OS..
Beautifully written..
If only something like this had hapenned in the serial, then it would have been fabulous track..

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sushmita ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Wow it really touch my heart ver nice update

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Sravya/Sravs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Wow! that's really a nice one. After reading this shot I guess I'm finding what ran in the show a bit odd. This was perfect continuation to the part after their fight on Diwali. 👍🏼

The last part where you adapted lines from unknown and other, I really loved those lines. ❤️ Those words were very real and true that we forget to actually remember them or even consider them! 😊

Thanks for writing this shot! 😳 This really is an awesome one. 👏