When a man loves... KriYaansh SS *temporarily paused*

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

awsome prologue

cont soon

thnx fr pm

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Arya its seriously intersting

Amazing concept and I love the start ...

Rey falling for someone who looks like his lost love

The story seems intense and gripping

Love the title btw..Its soothing

Update soon

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome start..

loved d concept.. rey's drunken state coz his love's life n he s fulfilling promise he made for her.. n gang s also shocked to c d similarities in kria.. rey now wants to know abt her n asked swayam to get d address of her from club.. waiting for next part n d way u gonna take d story ahead..

i love d movie "oy" a lot.. wen i started to read i felt it connection..

but 1 question does it also have d same ending as d movie???

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

wow... superb concept... 😃

Very exciting... loved it... 🤗

Continue soon 😊

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

superb concept

amazing prologue

thrilling story

i am hell excited

update soon and do PM me

thanks for the PM

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

another amazing stry by u, aryuu...👏👏

so so soo good.. u knw i really love to read ur writings.. it soothes my mind mking me feel relax..😊

nd i'm alrdy in luv wth ds one TOO..😆😆

update soon dear.. t.c.. luv..

di..❤️

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

What a story , Start mein he Rey k love ko mar dala 😆...

Acha hai , Kriya ka rasta clear ho gaya 😉...

Krivisha as in Mukti , ko select kiya , very good ...
Dono ki shakal reality mein milti hai 😉...
Great concept it is 😃...

Love it ❤️...

Pehli bar mein he Rey falt hogaya 😆...

Waiting to know how the story will proceed...

N thank you for the pm 😊

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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Nice... If u don't mind can I ask u from where is that group picture in ur banner...

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Awesome concept!!!
I'll just watch d movie nw!!
So mukti is krivisha. N shakti to kriya hai hi!
N dey both look just alike.
Lolzz rey ke silly reasons to talk to kriya!
N birthday bumps!! 😉 lolzzz!
Ye kya pehle hi update me accident karva diya!!
Koi nai fir bhi a6a tha!
N plz update soon! Waiting!! N plz pm me!!

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Note - Guys I'm sorry for not updating it from a long time and I wont be updating it till i complete my rest of the pending works but I promise i'll be back to it very soon.

Love Arya

Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago