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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
OHHH MYYY GOOODDD UPPUUU...
This was justtt... Goshhh...

uppu i have no words... like seriusly i dont have..

this was MIND BLOWINGGG... like seriusly...

i loved loved loveddd how u wrote it...how u showed der inner turmoil.. how much frustrated they were from inside..

and the last line by Rey "you will say it once again" ... damnnn...

uppu u r amazinggg babe...

i freaking loved it... 🤗

Akkkuuu Thank You babe! :* Sachchi mai.. I was scared while posting it..As you read it was on current track and I never wrote anything related to current track of D3 ever! So 😳

And I am so happy abhi that it came out pretty well.

Thank you so much babes. Love you so much! 🤗

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-
upi ki baat alag hai :* :D

btw puch usko mene fb pe kya bola tha iske baare me

Purple Part! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: zina.92
Amazing os

Thanks Zina! :)

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly
awesome

Thank your pearly! 😃

Originally posted by: nature-beauty
wonderful OS
loved it.

Glad you liked it. Thanks! ^_^

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha
Amazing os...
loved it...

Thanks Alisha! ^_^

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn
Amazing ...
Loved it ...

Thanxiee! :D

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

upi😲🤗

this was mindblowinggg👏👏

d way u described their feelings was amazinggg👏👏

lovedd itt to d coree❤️ and u r telling that u sucked at it😡

i loved d way u ended ittt😊

hayee as u said it'l b awesomee if they confess d same way as b4😳

fab write-up⭐️⭐️

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

and sowwie for delay wil catchup wit other updates soon😳

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: CrazyGirl.21
Ofc baby.. u r the sole reason for pollution and global warming even. 😆
OK.. 😛 So the OS was beautifully penned down. I mean I expected it to end kind of more abruptly types, as it is related to the real story thst is going on. But it wasnt much abrupt.. It was like perfect abrupt. :P Like it was supposed to be.. :D Get what I mean? 😆

And I like your imagination. Even I wish that whenever the truth comes out, its after some dance. It would be a cherry on the cake if the dance is either intense or passionate. I would prefer passionate though. :P Like Inn lamhon ke daman mai.. <3

So as I said, Great Work Done. 😆

-Ashy. :D

Ashyy! ^_^ See you got that right. I am the sole reason for Global warming :P ☺️ I know I am Hot... AB khud ki taareef kya karu :P

And, See.. ye forte ho gaya hai.. Current story track pe likhne waalo ka.. Abrupt open threaded ends.. Iske aage jo sochne ka soch lo bhai.. 😆😆😆

Haina ^_^ Confession after dance. It will be so magical dreamy. But I won't call it lack of creativity. As you see..Somethings happen in same way as they happened before just to add beauty to that memory.😳

I wish...Jaldi se ho jaye...Or else humre dimaagi keede confession ke baare mai soch soch ke marr jayenge! 😆

Thank You baby! :*

Originally posted by: yogini64
wow upu... awesome writeup!!! 😃

Nyce idea... 😊

I know ... itni jaldi toh truth khulne nhi wala... 😔

But this replay thingie of confession is awesome...🤗

Truth reveal ho na ho ... re-confession zarur hona chahiye...

Who knows... Arsha ka biggest surprise yahi ho... 😉 ... zyada expect kar liya na... 😆

I loved it .. that he just deviated her mind at the end... she won't think so sad abt her life now 😊

🤗 Re-confession.! ☺️ It will be so dreamy na .^_^

Arsha ka surprise.. Khuda jaane lagging. -_-

Thank you Yogs! :* 🤗

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: aishu3003
upi😲🤗
this was mindblowinggg👏👏

d way u described their feelings was amazinggg👏👏

lovedd itt to d coree❤️ and u r telling that u sucked at it😡

i loved d way u ended ittt😊

hayee as u said it'l b awesomee if they confess d same way as b4😳

fab write-up⭐️⭐️

Aishu Di... I was missing you :*

Thank you so much! ^_____________^

Originally posted by: aishu3003
and sowwie for delay wil catchup wit other updates soon😳

Its absolutely fine. ^_^ Mene zyada updates nahi diye hehe ! *Hides*

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Incandescence.
Purple Part! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

MINION BREAKUP... 🥺

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Awesome os love it
But i want 2nd part
Plz update

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Just superbb...
Everything was properlyy planned,every emotion described so flawlesly.
I loved everything in it...
In minimumm words u gave all d emotions.
I liked whn rey stopeed her.
I wish aisa kuch sach mein ho jae.
Kriya remembering her past was just perfect

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