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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

next update mein no tharki... :P

stry takes swing... *oops*

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
next update mein no tharki... :P

stry takes swing... *oops*

-_-
Whatever. My delicate heart is strong enough to withstand it. Just Update.
My little-sexy-confused Kria, And Hard-to-resist Rey! ☺️

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Incandescence.
-_-
Whatever. My delicate heart is strong enough to withstand it. Just Update.
My little-sexy-confused Kria, And Hard-to-resist Rey! ☺️

bold red: True that... ;) 😎

woh toh pakka rhega... ^_^

... :P

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Look who is back to busness -_-..
Mein rooti rahi, chilaati rahi but ek update nahi diya n now... Crazy peoples u see *shaking my head*
chalo.. Der ayye durust aaye...
Aayee haayyyee phle toh Welcum Back di n happy wal new year Aapko...
N now.. U say dat suck here.. Like seriously? -___-
super awssmm os h yeh di.. Really supppeeerrrbbb...
I so loved d way u Described broken rey n super broken kria... N yaa song was a gr8 chice indeed..
Haaiiiyyyeee.. I so loved d end.. Rey determined to make kria cinfess d truth to him AGAIN ^_^
i sooo loved it...
Keep writting di...
Meri manokaamna h ki iss saal aapke updates hume jald se jald milte rahe :p

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Pasto this is superb..
Me loved it..
I so want truth to be out badly...
Hopefully the truth revelation is done soon
I liked the way how this story was written..
The last word of previous para was the first word of next para

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Ofc baby.. u r the sole reason for pollution and global warming even. 😆

OK.. 😛 So the OS was beautifully penned down. I mean I expected it to end kind of more abruptly types, as it is related to the real story thst is going on. But it wasnt much abrupt.. It was like perfect abrupt. :P Like it was supposed to be.. :D Get what I mean? 😆

And I like your imagination. Even I wish that whenever the truth comes out, its after some dance. It would be a cherry on the cake if the dance is either intense or passionate. I would prefer passionate though. :P Like Inn lamhon ke daman mai.. <3

So as I said, Great Work Done. 😆

-Ashy. :D

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

tu isko chiii kabhi nhi bolti..

mereko dur bhaga deti hun when i give you wet kisses... 🥺

upi ki baat alag hai :* :D

btw puch usko mene fb pe kya bola tha iske baare me

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Pupu kya bola tha samu ne bata toh...

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

kya batau mein

awesome os totally loved it

kaash d3 mein kuch aise ho

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

wow upu... awesome writeup!!! 😃

Nyce idea... 😊

I know ... itni jaldi toh truth khulne nhi wala... 😔

But this replay thingie of confession is awesome...🤗

Truth reveal ho na ho ... re-confession zarur hona chahiye...

Who knows... Arsha ka biggest surprise yahi ho... 😉 ... zyada expect kar liya na... 😆

I loved it .. that he just deviated her mind at the end... she won't think so sad abt her life now 😊

Edited by yogini64 - 11 years ago

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