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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Oh my god...!!!!!
Such an amazing SS..!!!!
Nice concept anyways...!!
Please PM me when you update..!!
Btw who is rohan???
I mean some serial character???
Just put up a pictire of his...
Continue soon..?!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome...love after marriage.. dats cool..update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
eeepppsss...!!!!!
omg omg omg...!!!!
lovddd the concept so so sooo much...!!!!! 👏
lovdd the CS...!!!!
Specially rey's pic...my Favourite 😃 ⭐️
ughhh his step mother 😡...soo mean 😡 😡
lovedd the teaser!!!!
hawww...Taarey ko ghar se bahar nikaal diya..!!! 😲 😲 😲 😭 😭 😭 😭
how humble and respectful rey is...!!!!
without saying anything ..just left the home ..!!!! 😭 😭
eagerly waiting for the first update...!!!!
update soon...!!!!
thanks for the amazing concept!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

CHAPTER 1

A soft breeze was swaying in the air and the whole lane was in pin drop silence. A cute couple was sitting on a park bench with their luggage near them; both were silent and thinking of the consequences which they are going to face in future. The couple was none other than our taarey, rey's thoughts broke and he saw on his right side. He was getting a strange and a guilt feeling as because of him, his wife (wife? But he just treated her as his friend, but this was the first time he addressed her to himself as his wife) is also suffering the punishment which he got.

But what did she do to deserve this pain? He was again lost in thoughts and fear that how will he manage his life now? Everything just happened in a blink of eye. His loss in his company, his expulsion from his house and what not? May be he was ready for all this? Or maybe something better in his future is waiting for him?

He thought to break the silence and ask taani about her opinion and what she is going through as she is also out with him because of his fate as he is already guilty for making her homeless because of him.

R: taani!

Taani turned to see him

R: if you want to say something you can

T: as in?

R: as in for the situation we are facing today, I mean we both are expelled out of our house just because of my carelessness. And if I get punished it is understood but even you are also punished for my mistake and you are out here just because of me, and you really don't want to say anything?

T: rey, I can understand what you are going through and I want to confess something today, I am sorry if it sounds stupid to you but I have to say it as you want to know my opinion. I know that you always treated me like a friend and respected me, though you were not ready for marriage and you were forced to do this.

And in today's generation, no girl gets so much respect from her husband though she is disliked by him or she is forced on him. But you respected me and never ever treated me in a negative way, you should have done it if you want to, but you did not though it was in your hands. That itself shows what sort of a man you are and I did not need any proof for that. And seeing this nature of yours I accepted you as my husband though you did not accept me as your wife.

Rey was nearing tears and felt a pang in his heart in the last words.

And coming to your answer, mistakes are a part of our life. Each and everyone make mistakes, but mistakes are only the way to achieve success as we learn from our mistakes. Rey, I know that you are in a helpless situation and we are expelled from our house, and you are feeling guilty as I am also suffering along with you, but as per me, I have the right to be with you in every step of our life. When we were taking the vows in our marriage, I whole hearted meant each and every vow as I accepted you as my husband knowing your nature.

And if you think that you are punishing me regarding the expulsion from our house, then don't think so, because I am happy that I am with you no matter what! And when I am happy, then you should not feel this way that you are punishing me.

Rey was looking into her brown eyes which were shimmering under the moon light, he felt as if an angel has removed his pain with her magic wand and his eyes were brimmed now. Honestly he did not understand the full meaning of her words as he still has no idea about such feeling because of his brought up. Still he felt a magic was around his head and he started feeling light.

He simply took her palm into his and whispered a "thank you" as he was feeling better after listening to her soothing words.

He now was finally determined to make out a way as he understood that she trusts him more than himself. He pulled out his phone and tried a few contacts for the arrangement of at least a flat for time being but all in vain.

Soon a Mercedes swept from front of them and came back, that was none other than Shekhawat's!

Sharon opened the window pane and saw both of them on the bench; they both got down the car and went near them.

T: bhai! Bhabhi!

Sh: taani, why are you both here at this time of the night?

T: actually___ we both were___ (stammering)

Swayam sensed something was definitely very wrong looking at their luggage, without uttering a word he went towards their luggage and started pulling off their trolleys. Taarey were amazed, taani stopped swayam

T: bhai, what are you doing?

Sw: taani, I don't know what happened. I am damn sure something serious has happened or else you both wouldn't have been here. So come, stay in our home tonight.

R: but swayam, it's okay. I am trying to find out a way and we will be soon shifting.

Sw: jijaji, I am not asking you but telling you. You will definitely shift to a safe place and I will help you in doing that tomorrow. And it's not safe for both of you to be in the middle of the road in the night, so just come and no arguments.

Sh: you both get into the car and I will make our servants to bring the luggage.

Taarey were left with no option and had to leave the place.

PRECAP: TAANI EXPLAINS THE PROB TO SWARON AND TAAREY SHIFTING TO ANOTHER PLACE.

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i know it is a short update, but its just the start so i had to end it up. hope you all liked. and i want to write in only english to improve my writing skills. i will keep writing in hindi also but please co operate.


P.S. thanq for the response, please maintain it!

Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Awesome starting
Taarey talk soo cute and true
I like taani word
Taarey in sWaron home that good
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Awesome update
Taani understand and trust rey so much
Hope rey also realize his feelings soon
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
its superrrb
I reallly loveeed it
taani support the rey nd he says thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
luvly update dear ..!!
taani's unconditional support to rey is a strt for rey to fall for her..!!
sharon n swayam made right entry at rite tym..
thnx 4 pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
What are you di ??
Kese likhte hoo ap pleasee mujhe classes do _/\_
Anyway I loved TAani's reply 😃
I love SwaRon yaar kya entry maari hai 😆
Anyway can't wait to read more 😊
Update soon n pm me 😃
Love: Ale ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awsm start
loved taani's understanding
update soon

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