TR SS - KEY TO MY HEART (COMPLETED)

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

hima...🤗

m so sorry dear i m late in cmnt...actually was not well...really sorry..

coming to the concept and teaser...its mind blowing...taani loves rey but rey consider her as a friend only...wow...now thats interesting that how rey will fall for her...i m sure rey will fall for her caring sweet nature abd her unconditional love for him which he is aware...taani is with himin this bad phase and this bad phase will bring them closer...itne close aa jayenge ki they will not able to live without each other...haye...i cant wait to read updates hima...love you yar...itne amazing concepts dene ke liye aur your stories...i m in love with ur stories...🤗

-Dipu

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Soumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

awsum concept di...

taarey r bearing same problem..

kokila n rohan r so bad people...

started hating dem

plz updt soon n PM me

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

nice... plss post d prt soon!!😊

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sona_taarey

@sona_taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

hey dear

nyC teaser

plz update sooon or itna w8 mt karana dear

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Divyana maheshwari

@divi_divyana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Awesome start.. Nyc cs.. Update soon

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Rocking concept
Amazing CS
Aww both Taarey has the same faith when comes to their parents
Hmm Rey step mom is so evil
Taani is in love with her husband, while he is not
I can't wait to see Rey fall for his beautiful wife
And now that they have to be on their own, it's more exciting
Awesome teaser
I can't wait to read more

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Anysia

@Anysia

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wow . . . amazing concept . . .

Loved the title . . . " Key to my Heart "

Eagerly looking forward for further update . . .

Rey with Taani on the park bench . . . omg, wats gonna happen next ???

Please try to update soon

Thanks for the pm 😊

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awesome concept

kya tesr hai

modrn vrsn of ramayan kya?

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Great character sketch dr.
Rey as a meek guy, it's quiet different.
Awe, Taani loves Rey!
So sweet of Swayam to take care of Taani.
Oh Koki n Rohan r such a crook people.
TaaRey finding their own way to lead new life?
Do continue it.

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Namita

@anatomy_nerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

wow again a new story
CS is lovely😊
kokila-step mom of rey...lolz...i just can imagine that kokila modi of saathiya serial...n it seems damn funny😉😆😆
then teaser is good...both taani n rey have same fate bt taani had her brother's love n so she is able to love rey...but rey was deprieved of love n so i guess he is not able to love anybody😭
the concept seems more relatable to ramayan...maybe modified ramayan😆
rey as raam- adarsh beta of the family(purushottam)
taani as sita- pativrata patni n ideal bahu of the house
rey's dad as- raja dasrath
n kokila as- kaykai(cunning n self centered)
rohan as- barath(can't tell if he also loves his brother to the core or not)
anyways update the first part soon😃

Edited by riya_vaidya - 11 years ago