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Posted: 11 years ago
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itna bada cs hai😆
muje pehle he pta tha ye aisa he hoga🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Helloo Ishaqzaadeyians ..!! finally the wait is over..!! u all wer excited for part one naa ?? then here it is...before tht ..

THANK YOU to all of them who encouraged me to go further with this...!! thank you all for commenting and liking😳 keep loving the same way ...😃

enough of this crap bhashaan...here you go with the release of my FF ...

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The Virman FF: Ishaqzaadey <3


Part 1

And now...19 years later

Bangalore, 7:00 am

The sun was in full mood today by spreading its light all over the chilled areas of Bangalore. In this, a shirtless boy gets up getting disturbed by the sun light reflected on his face by the mirror...he gets up stretches his arms and wears his flip on slippers n walks a bit further and picks up his grey hoodie and wears it and goes down ...!! He descending from the stairs with his eyes still closed... as he ws still sleepy...!! He walks in the direction of the dining area... And a male voice comes...

" lo aapke sahabzaadey uth gaye..!!" ...the lady on the dining table turns and sees her son...

As the boys eyes were closed ...he suddenly trips a bit... bt it doesn't affect him much ..he keeps walking..!! and the lady says...

Vm : areeyyy virattt ...!! Kitni baar kaha hai aankhe kholke niche aaya karo ...!! (virat hugs his mom from behind while she ws sitting on chair...this ws virats daily routine..!! coming and hugging his mom ...!!)

Vi : good moringgg..!! Virat just nods his head...and viren smiles n shakes his head in negative...!!

Virat just grabs a apple from the table and turns to go...

Vm : virat kitni baar kaha hai ...?? Brush toh karo ...!! Virat nt bothering it... keeps walking slowly... his eyes still closed...!!

Vm : virattt ..!! im telling u sumthing...!! (and virat stops and turns and gives a stupid smile...and suddenly he sneezes...!!) ho gayi na sardi ??!! aur shirtless soo tum...!! Kitni baar kaha hai ki Bangalore mai jaldi thand lag jaati hai ..!! tum meri sunte kyu nhi ho ?? (virat again smiles...and takes a bite from apple in his hand...and walks out of dining area...) virattt...ab kaha jaa rahe ho ?? (b4 virat cud hear Vm's question he ran to parking/garage...) ab yeh kaha gaya ?? viren tum kuch samjhao issey ..! ab kaha gaya yeh ..breakfast bhi nahi kia...!!

Vi : gaya hoga apni girlfriend se milne..!! 😆hehehh (taking a spoonful of food from his plate..)

Vm : yeh ladka bhi na...!!! subah subah ...??😲 pata nhi ajeeb aadat hai issey ...!! Viren tum aur bigaado apne bhai ko ..!! kyu laake di tumne??? Use toh woh karta nahi hai ...aisey hi kisi show piece ki tarah padi hai😡 ...!!

Vi : maa ...aap itna kyu bhadakti ho uspe...?? Use karega woh...aap bas abhi breakfast khaoo...!

Vm : accha ..use karega ?? (stern ) ...uhhh ...pichle do saal se woh garage mai sadd rahi hai ...!! Aaj tak toh use karte hue nhi dekha..!! waisey ki waisi hai jaisi ussey laaye the tum... aisey hi paise barbaad tumhare...!! 😆

Vi : maa...uske liye nahi toh aur kis par kharch karu ???!!..aap bhi na ...accha chalo ...mai jaa raha hu office ...(takes his blazer from the chair ,hugs his mom and walks out of dinning area...)

Vm : haa ...sahi hai ...tum dono bhai ...mujhe aisey hi maska lagaao...!! Uhhh..!!

D: kya hua beta??phirse tumhare dono bte maska laga kar chale gaye kya ??

Vm : aur nhi toh kya ...bauji ...!! Yeh dono kabhi nhi sudharenge..!! virat ko dekho kitni baar bola hai raat ko shirt pehenke soye ..par nhi ...pata nahi Bangalore mai ussey itni kya garmi galti hai ...!! Aur viren ko dekhiye ...uske bhai ko bigaadne mai koi kasar nahi choddta ...!! Ab dekhiye ...virat hamesha ki tarah phirse garage gaya hai ..!!!

D : hahahaha ...itna kyu gussa karti hu ..chodo na...bacche hai ..!!

Vm :bauji ..aap toh hamesha unke hi side ligiye...!😊 (smiles...)

Di : kyu na le?? Potey hai hamare...!! D : sahi kaha...

Vm : accha ...thik hai ...!! Hamesha ki tarah mai haar gayi ..happy both of you..??

D & Di : ha ...!! Vm : accha bauji ...mai chali...aaj hamare helping organization ki meeting hai ...chaliye maa...!

Di : haa beta chalo...!! D : accha chalo ..hum bi chalte hai office ...viren intezaar kar raha hoga niche...

( dadu everyday goes to the office as he likes to go there...he feels young ...as he says..!! so all leave the house for sum or the other purpose...but virat doesn't ...as his college starts from 9 am...)

Here in garage...

Virat reaches the garage ...and till then he had finished eating the apple ...he then wiped his hands...and bent down and pulled the shutter up ...and went inside...and saw the first love of his life...!! A scorching hot sport bike...gifted to him by viren on his eighteenth birthday ...!! His first love...he ws dreaming abt all day n night to get it...!! And finally he got it on his eighteenth birthday ... (relived a bit na ?? matlab frm the confusion tht ws going in ur mind from the strt of the update?? LOLzz) virat as usual starts wiping it with a soft cloth and looks at it lovingly creasing it...!! And as usual starts his talking session ...with his love...with actions...!!

" tumhe toh pata hoga na ...tumhe pane ke liye kitne paapad bele hai maine...!! Matlab bhai ko kitna maska lagaana pada ..tumhare liye...!! Tum samajhti kyu nahi ho ...?? Mujhe tumhe chaalana hai ...I want to drive along with u ..!! par tum ho ki ...uhh...!! Dekho ..i knw tumhe bahut bura lagta hai ki do saal se tum yaha pe hi sadd rahi ho ...par mai kya karu ??? tum toh jaanti ho na kyu maine aaj tak tumhari test drive bhi nahi li hai ..??!! toh phir plzz...just dnt blame me...!!! Ek toh mai tumhe chala bhi nahi sakta...!! Pata hai ...mai tumhe chodd dusri waali ko use karta hu though she is also dear to me par tumhare jitna nahi !!!...i knw ki u r jealous of her...Aur agar tum chahti ho ki mai ussey chodd tumhe use karu ...toh pls jaldi se meri wish puri kardo ...!! Warna ...hamesha n forever tum yaha pe hi rahogi...!! So plzzz jaldi karo ...kyunki I cant wait to drive you...!! Uhhh...almost 2 saal se everyday mai yaha aakar tumhe same bhashaan deta hu ...tum pakk nahi jaati yeh sunnke ?? pakk jaati ho na ...?? So jaldiii se meri wish puri kardo ...so tht mai tumhe chala saku uss dusri waali ko choddke...!!jaldi ...!! Accha chalo bye ab...❤️" virat then kisses his bike...!! And again closes the shutter of the garage...!!

This ws daily routine of virat...be it any day 🤣...!! And he used to love his sport bike a lottt...!! He used another one for going to college...he loved tht one evn but nt as much as his sportive bike...!! He took care of both bikes equally but his special attachement ws with the one in garage...!! He cudnt bare evn one scratch on his bikes...!! Virat has kept the sport bike in the garage itself ..frm the time viren had gifted him ..he didn't even take a test drive...he uses other bike for college...! he didn't use the sport bike until nw ..cz of his ...wish...god knwss wat wish..??!! LOlz ...Virat then goes in the house...

By then the three had moved out of house ...dadu and viren go in one car to office...and Vm and dadi sit in one car to go to their meeting spot...!...Vm sees virat running inside the house and exclaims to dadi ...

"sacchi maa... issey jyada nautanki to iss duniya mai koi hoga hi nahi 🤣...!!!" (scene shifts)

Here in Mumbai , 8:00 am

A girl ws sleeping peacefully in her room...with a slight smile on her face. And from the door a dog enters playfully and starts licking her in an attempt to wake her up ..the girl smiles...and opens her eyes...and ruffles the dog and kisses his forehead and keeps on exclaiming ...

" fluffy ...aahhhahah ok stop ..!! aww fluffy..." in a cute and funny manner...

And a voice from down comes...

"Maanvi...beta jaldi niche aa..!!"

M : aayi mommm...!! Come fluffy ...come...lets go ..!!

She gets up from the bed and goes down ...and fluffy reaches down before her..!!

M : good morninggg mom...!! Yaha pe sab aisey bikhra hua kyu pada hai?? Packing ab tak nahi hui kya...Anyhw ...mera kya lena dena... Aapne fluffy ko khaana dia??

A : maine pehle hi kaha tha ...mai uss kuttey ka khyal nhi rakhne waali...!!

M : (irritated) MOMMM ...!! Ussey kuttaa mat bulaooo...woh mera aur di ka BF hai ..!!😡

A : ha ...ha pata hai mujhe ...!! yeh le... Jaa khana de uss kuttey ko Maanvi makes an irritated face...!!

J : momm..!! aapko kitne baar kaha hai ..aap ussey kutta mat bulao...!! (descending frm stairs with her office files...)

A : tum dono behene ...ek jaisi ho ...!!

M & J : we knw mom...!! (aloud) M : good morning dii...!!! J : good morning mannu...!!

M : di ...pata hai fluffy hand shake dena sikh gaya...!! Kal isne mujhe dia tha...!!

J : (excitedly...throwing all the files) saccchii ...fluffy ...cum here ...give a shake hand...cum on...

And the girls get busy with fluffy...

A : pata nhi kya hai uss kuttey mai ...!!! JM : mommm!! A : ok chill ...sorry ...!!

N : good morning ladies...!! JM : good morning dad...!! (maanvi runs n hugs her dad...)

M : dad ...mujhe waha jaake bahut shopping karni hai ...!!! N : ha ha...jaisi tumhari marzi ...!!

A : uske liye na ...waha jaana padega...!!chalo ...jaldi ...packing karni hai ... !!

M : ryt ..! ( she lifts a heavy box ...and tries to shift it...)

J : (panicking) mannu ...!! Rakh niche abhi ke abhi (maanvi keeps it down..) M : kya hua di ???

J : maanu tujhe pata hai na...iska result kya ho sakta hai ?? tujhe body straining cheezein nahi karni chahiye ..samjhi ?? jaa tu upar...aaram kar...hum sab kar lenge...jaa...!! Aanvai sabko tension deti hai ...!!

N : jeevs is ryt ...tum jao nia ...hum sab kar lenge...hmm...go ... ( hugs her by shoulder..)

A : nia breakfast upar bhej dia hai ok...khaa lena ...dare u put it to tht kutta...!!

M : heheheh... Par ek baat batao mujhe ...mera pet name nia kisne rakha ??? ( confused face ...)

N : bte...possibly this is the 2,98,509 time we are telling you🤣...!! Woh kya hai na...bachpan mai ...tum har choti baat par nia... nia karti thi ...!!

J : (jeevs cums n hugs maanvi frm shoulder n says...) aur teri iss nia ka matlab hota tha...nahi ...!! Agar tujhse koi puchta ...ki khaana chahiye ?? ya favourite colour toh tu kehti ...NIA...!! matlab nahi ..!! haar cheez ki liye tera jawab nia hota... Isiliye mom ne tera naam nia rakh dia...!! 😆

M : ohhh...accha chalo ...mai chali ...acche se packing karo samjhe...!!?? (mimicking like a boss ..)

N,A,J : accha ji hamari billi hamey meowww...?😲?!! Maanvi laughs off.. n runs to her room..!!

Maanvi in her room...

She switches on loud music...and starts swaying on the music ...!! Her favourite thing to do...DANCE...be it any form ...dancing gives her peace ...!!

J : thinks (...yeh ladki kabhi nahi sudharegi ..!!)

...mannnuu ...sambhalll ke...tujhe pata hai ...kya ho sakta hai ...!!

Maanvi screeches from her room ...!!

I knw diii ...chilll karo kuch nahi hoga...!!!!!

M : (to herself) pata nahi ..kya hoga ..agar thoda sa dance kar lia toh..!! react toh aisey kar rahe hai jaisey mai mar hi jaungi ..!! hehehhe ! anyhw ..ignore maanvi ..concentrate on your dance...!! Tujhe bas dance par concentrate karna hai ...kyunki tujhe woh sab bhulaana hai ..aur ek nayi shuruaat karni hai ...!!

Wondering y maanvi said all this ?? ...she said this cz ..here in Mumbai ...she had no good friends...she has a lot of friends to say..but all wer with her cz she is popular...all had their fake faces put up in front of her...all were very jealous of her ...she always smiled from the top...but sumwher down the lane ..she ws alone ..with no best friend...to share things...!! She always knew the truth ...bt still tried to be happy .she had oly one support system in her life thts her ...family ...di , mom , dad and her Bf (fluffy) ..!! so she tried to dance and forget all the pain she had in her to begin a freshhh start ...from the place she is going...!! And she starts swaying to the tunes ...forgetting the things which happened in the past and expecting a bright future...!!

...let the chapters unfold in the coming days 😃

tht's it for nw...!! will continue soon . . . 😳
wait till the more pages of this story unfold 😃 waiting for you response on this...😳

Edited by lavanya_sweet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
res
unres
awesome update
super dhasu in manvi style😉...haye virat kitna cute hai 😳but behara apne bike nhi chala sakta😆😆...and what is is wish😲,,,aise kya wish hai jo vo bike use nhi kar rha😕..but loved the way he talked with his bike😆
and meri manvi kitne pyaar hai😳...I loved it when they fight in 'kutta mat bolo' so funny🤣...and NIA part was nice
continue soon😃
thanks for the pm
Edited by virman.lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
res
amazing
lovely
fantastic
superb
loved it totally
cont soon
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome update..
Just loved it..
How Virat was talking to his bike was really funny...
Pleasee continue soon..
And thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Vow lavi it,s superrr se uper ka update tha dear realy awsam ❤️ WHOLE UPDATE WAZ 2 GOOD i lov virat bike part n bt wat waz his wish? Awww ? Ok than NIA 😉 hu i lov manviz nike name dear n also d reagion behind it 😊 Want mre
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
awesome start
thanx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome update
loved it
virat talking to his bike is funny
but what's his wish?
manvi ,,,, jeevika and fluffy part was nice
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice start waiting how they
both are meeting update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome update.
virat and bike scene was very funny between what is his wish.
manvi with her family moment was really cute.
waiting for next part

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