{My Secret Admirer. | AsYa/KaBhi TS} |COMPLETED|

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~My Secret Admirer~
An AsYa TS | Chapter 1


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Zoya was walking to her locker to get her belongings for chemistry class. Her friend Nazia came running up to her with a bright smile on her face.

"Zoya! Zoya! Look what I got!" Nazia screamed.

"How am I suppose to see it when you keep on moving it?" Zoya said with a slight chuckle.

"Oh, sorry, dekho!" Nazia said, showing Zoya a pink sheet of paper with messy writing on it.

Zoya took the paper out of Nazia's hand and read what it said.

Will you be my date to prom?
-Imran

"Oh my god, this is great!" Zoya squealed and joined her friend in their little happy dance.

"I know right! Zoe you have to come with me for dress shopping!" Nazia spoke.

"Alright. Alright. Did you even say yes?" Zoya replied.

"Aah! I totally forgot! You know what, I'll go right now! See ya later Zoe!" Nazia screamed, running out the hallway.

Zoya waved to her friend and opened her locker, taking out her favorite pink pen and binder. She smiled, thinking about Nazia. Her best friend, had had the biggest crush on the handsome hunk Imraan Qureshi. And today her dream, since she was 7 years old was fulfilled!

But not Zoya's.

Zoya took out a blue sticky note that was sticking to the front of her locker and sighed.

She had been getting these notes from the first day of high school. Always stuck to the front of her locker and with a heart on it.

It had been her dream to find out the boy that kept on sending her these love notes. He always made her smile and blush, but at times she felt crazy. Not knowing who this boy is.

She dreamt about her prince charming, sweeping her off her feet, kissing her ever so gently, admitting that he was the one.

She unfolded it and read what it said:

If I could give you one thing in life,
I would give you the ability to see yourself through my eyes,
Only then would you realize how special you are to me. <3
-Me

She smiled and quickly stuck it into her tote bag and ran off to chemistry class not noticing the handsome man watching her every move.

oOo

While in chemistry class, her mind was only set to one thing. Him.

Zoya Farooqui had been receiving notes from a secret admirer. Her secret admirer. In all these years, she tried to find out who had been sending her these notes secretly. But to no avail.

She'd sworn she asked the whole school about this person. Well, she missed someone.

Zoya was lost in her thoughts until the Biology teacher, Mr. Singh snapped at Zoya's face.

"Ms. Farooqui, pardon me for interrupting your dream, but this is no time for you to go to la la land." Mr. Singh said.

Zoya flushed in embarrassment and nodded only to receive chuckles from the whole class. Even him.

Zoya! Get a grip on yourself! You can't keep on thinking about someone you don't even know. He might not even be real! Zoya thought to herself.

Oh, he's real!

No, he's not. He's just an imaginary person.

Then why would he be sending you love notes? Imaginary people can't do that.

But he's not-

Zoya's brain and heart were having a fight, only to be interrupted by the loud screaming.

"Ms. Farooqui!" Once again Zoya was snapped out of her thoughts and looked towards the board where Mr. Singh was glaring at her.

"Can you answer this question for the class?" He said to her.

Oh. Here we go again. Zoya gulped.

She felt a tap on her shoulder and turned around, only to see the most handsome man on earth smiling at her.

Was he always this handsome? Why did I never notice him?

"Sodium bicarbonate," he whispered.

"Huh?"

"Ms. Farooqui!" Mr. Singh yelled, tired of Zoya's attitude.

"Oh, sorry sir. Uh the answer is..." she thought for a while and then got what the boy behind her was saying.

"Sodium bicarbonate!" she screamed!

"That is...correct?" Mr. Singh replied, surprised.

"Ordinary table salt is sodium chloride and baking soda is sodium bicarbonate. Make sure you all note that down on your notebooks for the exam coming up," Mr. Singh said.

Zoya turned around to the boy behind her and flashed one of her dimple smiles, mouthed thank you and returned to work.

The boy just kept on admiring Zoya. She was the most beautifulest girl he has ever seen. And one day she will be his. "Only mine." He whispered.

oOo

"Alright, I'll be assigning your partners for your project on the Ozone Layer.. It will be due on...la la la" Mr. Singh continued to announce boring the heck out of everybody.

"Asad, Zoya. You two are together." Mr. Singh said, looking at both.

"Yes sir." Zoya said running out of class. She had to tell Nazia about what happened in biology class. And about the boy.

Asad just stared at Zoya in awe. Is she not going to find out who her partner is? That is no problem for her? Ugh. She drives me mad. He thought to himself.

She ran to the cafeteria and saw Nazia, sitting with Imraan and some of her other friends. She waved to her and went towards their table.

"Hey Zoe!" Humaira said.

"Hey Humi!!" Zoya squealed.

All of her bestest friends sat at one table. Nazia, Humaira, Sophie and Farhaan. They had been friends since kindergarten, and boy did they go through a lot. But they went through it together.

"Uh guys, I gotta put my books away. Catch ya' later!" Zoya said and ran off to her locker.

When she reached her locker she saw something unusual. Another note.

She opened it and saw something that almost popped her eyes out.

Next time, maybe you should pay attention in class.
Baking soda is sodium bicarbonate, make sure you know that next time.
-Me ;)

Was he...? What?! The boy behind me...he is..

"He is my secret admirer..." Zoya mumbled to herself.



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Should I continue? Sorry bout' the whole biology baakwas thing. I'm not taking biology so I know absolutely nothing about it.

UPDATE: Changed Zoya's class to Chemistry. (:

Short update, promise to make next one longer!

xoxo

Radhika <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index:

Part 1: Above!
Part 2: PG 12
Part 3: PG 20

P.S- Please read the post below, it is IMPORTANT. Thanks! <33

Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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For PM's:

I have just recently decided that I will make a PM list for my stories. The PM list is a list for all the people who will get a PM for this story. Not all, just this one. The list is below and if you want to be added onto the list, like this post and buddy me. I accept all requests. Do not like this post if you do not want a PM. I will update this list frequently and will add all the names of the people who want PM's. If you have any questions regarding PM's you can comment, scrap or PM me. Either is fine! Thanks! 🤗

P.S- If your name is not on the list, it means I have not updated the list. Please don't worry as I will update ASAP.

~The PM List~

NEW UPDATE: The PM list is currently empty, as the story has finished. Thanks to all who liked and cooperated in this new PM system! There will be a new PM list for the next story I right soon!

xoxo

Radhika(:
Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
unres

WOW! Itz amazing radhika! loved every part of it.
can't wait for zoya to find out that asad is her secret admirer.
im first! 😆😆😆 omg.
continue soon! 😳
Edited by m-a-i-s-h-a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Radhika luv the whole concept...
asad secretely admiring zoya and sending notes.
sodium bicarbonate not used in bio much...more chemistry.
👍🏼 very nice story
continu camp get me outie pls... 😳

Edited by SweetBunny - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres your comments now please! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omggg my babies are the cutest :'D

I love this, I love these kinda cutesy, fluffy stories, and of course Asad is Zoe's secret admirer :D

Update soon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing!!! 👏 i loved it!! 😃 i just cant wait to read next!! 😭
Secret admirer?! 😲 wow!! [:D/]
I'm in love with it!! 😳

Please please please pretty please with a cherry on the top update sooonnniiisshh 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KulfiBai

Omggg my babies are the cutest :'D

I love this, I love these kinda cutesy, fluffy stories, and of course Asad is Zoe's secret admirer :D

Update soon! :)


Thank you so much! Will do. 😳😳
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Amazing!!! 👏 i loved it!! 😃 i just cant wait to read next!! 😭
Secret admirer?! 😲 wow!! [:D/]
I'm in love with it!! 😳

Please please please pretty please with a cherry on the top update sooonnniiisshh 😃


Thank you, awh don't cry. 😭 Lol. Yeah sure, I'll update soon! <33

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