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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome...cricketer arnav clean bowled by our architect khushi sounds damn interesting...continue soon...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Very nice start

Arnav is a cricketer n Khushi an architect, interesting character sketch.

He has fallen in love with Khushi n he is ready to be serious.

Her charms has worked on ASR

But why did he asked her mail address not her cell no.

Update soon

Pm me it's next part.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow shikhs that was amazing
Simply fabulous and now i know why you've been MIA for the past few days
But i totally love this
The teasing was fun to read about
And Arnav does seem totally smitten
Oh and loved how you included La in this
I cant wait to see where this is going
And while definitely dont want the rakhi thing...it was entaining to read
Cant wait for the rest.

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skmr.bs

@skmr.bs

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Yaay !! A very Happy New Year to You !!

I loved it already. I loved the La-Arnav relationship a lot they are too cute and sweet. I lobed how Arnav described khushi. He is sooo cute !!! And of course the way La made him understand that not his type. Basically I Loved it all. Your stories have a magical feeling to it...it's the way you write makes me feel like I am reading a fairy tale and I love it. Will be waiting impatiently for the other parts.

P.S- when are you going to update Raizada & Raizada Co. Ltd ??