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@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 11 years ago

ANAzing is
Brilliant well done

Edited by Chotteskhushi19 - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

I hope not rakhi

That would be so bad

clean bowled huh Arnie

Well this sure is new for him

That's nice

Can't wait to know what happens next

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

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Posted: 11 years ago

fantastic
i thought tht itz khushi who is pregnant & the man is nk.
Anyway nice start.
Cntn sn
cricketer arnav clean bowled by khushi.

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palaayan

@palaayan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hayee, dil churanna toh koi tumse seekhe Shikha! Within mere moments you make me fall in love with your characters, particularly your Arnav's, koi ek toh mujhe de do? Please?!

A flirty Arnav and a straight laced Khushi are no doubt going to be a treat to read and witness, i adore your slightly mischievous and cheeky Lavanya, through her words I feel as if I know Khushi already, *sigh* your stealing my heart here Shikha you really are

Manno :)

Edited by manreet_gill - 11 years ago

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fab and fun story!!!!!!!!
Lovely, Shikha..ur writing style bowls me:)

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is definitely 'something to talk about'!! 😉 I love the idea...an intelligent, not easily won over Khushi is my favourite kind. I get the feeling that in this story, they'll both get to learn and grow. Can't wait!! 😃