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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Drunken khushi

talking to Anjali

arnav buying ring

shyam disappeared

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Well sometime to set free if it becomes burden
earth... kill them

so others can live peacefully

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

romance high on alert

beautiful and peaceful confession

awesome story

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Lisa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Hi dedee,

Fantastic job on the story. Had to read all the parts one shot...

Kudos!!! 👏👏👏

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Maria Adam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Enjoyed reading this story, read it in one day

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

What an heartwenching yet hearttouching stry buddy..the way u penned down it...the way u potrsyed arshi emotions...so heattouching...no words can describe what i feel abt the atry abt such a sensitive issue nd the way u blend it with arshi...simply awsum...loved it..u r an amazing writer.👏👏

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Savera84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

I just read the first chapter and it captivated me.

Promising start. It has so many chapters. So, it will take a while to finish reading this story.

Until then,

Cheers...

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Savera84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

It took me 2 days to read all chapters.

Different take on Arnav and Khushi. Nicely woven with a social issue. I loved the intensity of the story.

You are talented and I Wish to read more stories from you/

Cheers...

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ARUSHI_IPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Hello Deeps..
I recently came across your story and was literally ENTWINED to the work.
I had to read all the chapters in a go. And throughly enjoyed.
My best wishes on your work and more wishes for you to write more such amazing stuff.
Their college encounters and the last scene where he carries her on the beach will always remain fresh in my memory every time I think of your story...
Lots of love Arushi...