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Sniggy24

@Sniggy24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Awesome story. Loved every bit of it. Thank you so much for the wonderful update:)

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Dee, you provided the best closure to this story with making Khushi believe in herself again and love herself again all thanks to your Arnav.

The rememberance of their entwined journey by Khushi was beautiful similar to the way Arnav realized that she was with him at his graduation and other times physically or virtually in his memories.

The proposals by khushi and Arnav was great. And the imprints on beach was awesome end just the way your Khushi once wished for.

About your Note: it is true not every Khushiis lucky to find an Arnav, and to lead a normal life.

It is a big issue which requires awareness and acceptance by society that the girl is not at fault and deserves to live as normal a life as possible after such a nightmare.

Thanks for such a wonderful story. Whenever you write another please pm and do add mein your buddy list for pms.

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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

beautiful beautiful ending to an awesome story. It shall be etched in my mind forever. The way you wove this story around Arnav and Khushi with a social message at its base is simply amazing. The chemistry you created between them was sizzling even when they hadn't even begun to touch each other, their love so potent and their entwined relationship so Strong, I can barely express what I really want to say but you were marvellous Deedee from beginning to end. And I just can't wait to read more fan fiction by you.

Thank you for writing this story!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Life...Love ...Destiny...and then they Happened...

Thank You...Dee...for this ...it was an amazing journey...which I will cherish...always!

...I loved picturing our IPK couple in every aspect you portrayed...your Arnav and Khushi...always left us ...for wanting more...

You wrote from your heart...and it touched mine every single time...you outdid every thought process...right from get go...This piece of work...is one of a kind!

Hats to your story...so looking forward and waiting patiently to your next...whenever you feel ...to pen your thoughts to words...

Till then...will dream about the new beginning of this amazing couple who have Entwined our lives to theirs!

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. Somewhere I feel sad that the story had come to an end. but as they say "all good things must come to an end" and so does this story.

Happy that Arnav helped Khushi get back her confidence and she is back to the same happy bubbly girl she once was. Loved their romance. Love they shared only allowed them to grow more both as individuals and as a couple.

Loved their destinations to settle after marriage and last but not least the ending paragraph about footsteps which reminded me of what Khushi used to see on the seashore during her walks at night.

Happy I came across this story and read it.

One request do continue to write. You are a great writer so please dont stop. Also whenever you write let me know so that I read your works in future too.

I loved this quote of yours "You might want to fight with me, you might get messed up becoz of me, you might even feel you are stuck with me, but at the end of the day, before going to bed, if I look at us in future, then I know for the fact that you are looking at the same us too."

Next time I fight with my husband and when I want to pacify him I am going to tell the above quote.😆